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Posted: 10 years ago
Adhoori Mohabbat...




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Part 27:

Asad was in such a state that was beyond shock... Zoya was back... his real Zoya was back... he was on cloud nine... but his happiness crashed down in a flip of second when he thought about Aman... Zoya forgot Aman... no she can't... how can its possible??? Okay it's not in Zoya's hand but come on she remembers me than why not Aman... his mind was getting out of control... Zoya was right there in his arms but the situation was worse... Asad hugged her closely and then he felt her not responding... he broke apart and found her unconscious... Asad immediately tried to wake her up but she was not responding... he ran outside and call the doctor... doctor came and asked him to wait outside so he can check on Zoya...
Asad was standing outside the Zoya's room when Aman came to him and stand beside him... Asad looked down and reality hit him... Asad sat on his knees... Tears brimmed in his eyes... Aman wiped his tears...
Aman: mama will be fine... app ro kyun rahy ho...
Asad: Aman your mama... he was not sure to tell him or not but if Aman went to Zoya and she refused to recognize him than it will be a worse situation for Aman so he decided to tell him straightly... actually Aman...
Arman interrupted and nodded in NO and stopped Asad from telling Aman...
Arman: Aman aapi abhi weak hain to is liye papa ko unki fikar hai... app to big boy ho to papa ko samjho everything will be fine... In Sha Allah...
Aman: haan app rona band karo... mama ko bhi aisy acha nahi lagy ga...
Asad broke out in more tears and hugged Aman... Aman dint know the reason but hugged his papa back... Arman too was silently crying... he had lost his aapi, may be forever but he was scarred if she really forget Aman than what will happen...
Arman had called the doctor who had treated Ayesha in the past... actually Arman wanted that both doctors examine her so they can get best results after all Aman's mama is the priority... Zoya was back in senses but when she didn't find Asad near her she panicked... Asad was called in and he sat on the bed with Zoya and tried to calm her down...

Khwabi khwabi si lagti hai duniya
Aankhon mein ye kya bhar raha hai
Asad was lost in his own thoughts... his Zoya was back but the paid price was Aman's mama...

Marne ki aadat lagi thi
Kyu jeene ko jee kar raha hai
Asad was all okay when Zoya didn't remember him but this situation was not at all okay... he was just worried for Aman...

Pehle to begaani nagri mein
Hum ko kisi ne poochha na tha
Saara sehar jab maan gaya toh
Lagta hai kyun koi rutha na tha
Doctors started to interact with Zoya but she was hesitant... Asad side hugged her and assured her that he is with her... Doctors ask about what had happened with her after leaving Asad... Zoya told them she was going to NY but she didn't wanted to hide her pregnancy from Asad that's why she never took that flight and decided to go back to Asad but unfortunately she met with an accident... Zoya was crying and hugged Asad... Asad was too in emotional state bcox Zoya was coming back to him when she met with accident... Doctors gave some sedatives to Zoya so she can rest for a while... when she was under the influence of sedation Asad too stood up to go but he felt a tug at his hand... Zoya didn't let go of his hand in unconscious state... Asad removed his hand from her hand carefully and kissed her forehead and left...
Asad n Arman came to the doctor's cabin where they discussed about Zoya's memory... Asad asked when will Zoya get her memory back but doctors replied that its not in Zoya's hand, even medical science can't help her out... they told that she can remember in 1 day, 1 month, 1 year or may be she never remember her past 6 years... Asad asked how he reveals about their son to Zoya... Doctors suggested not telling about Aman, it will stress her mind and she is pregnant too... Asad didn't listen to them and yelled that how can he hid such news... Arman calmed him down... Doctors told that there is no need to tell Zoya that she lost memory of her last 6 years, she still thinks that she is pregnant with first child so you need just to take care of her and don't tell her that she lost her memory, just let it be for some time... doctors told them to take Zoya to that place where she had spent a lot of good time and inform your family members too... when Zoya will be in happy state then you can told her about her son but now its quite dangerous, she can harm her brain and in result she may lose her mental balance too... Asad n Arman dejectedly came outside...
Asad looked around for Aman but he was nowhere... Asad was in complete mess, he didn't know how to handle the situation... Asad came in Zoya's room and found Aman there... Aman was lying beside Zoya, his head was on her left arm and his hand was on Zoya, he just hugged his mama lightly bcox he didn't wanted to disturb her sleep... a lone tear escaped from Asad's eye and he came out...
Asad sat on the chair outside Zoya's room... Arman too came there and rested his hand on his shoulder...
Asad: I can't do this Arman... I can't... how can I separate my own child like this... I can't... he cried...
Arman: bhaijan you have to do this for the sake of aapi... we can't lose her... she means everything to Aman agar unhy kuch hua to Aman ka kya hoga... Aman is quite mature... he will understand bhaijan... you have to be strong...
Asad: how I'll tell him that your mama don't remember you... he will shatter Arman... main apny bachy k sath aisa nahi kar sakta...
Asad n Arman both were lost in thoughts... but that night one thing went good as Aman n Zoya slept peacefully...
Next Morning, Zoya stirred in her sleep... she felt some weight on her left arm but unknowingly she pulled Aman closer... Aman smiled at his mama and kissed her dimpled cheek but this move disturbed Zoya's sleep and she opened her eyes... She spotted a boy near her and panicked... Aman being mama's boy smiled on seeing his mama awake and kissed her again...
Zoya: yeh app kya kar rahy ho...
Aman: it's our morning kiss na...
Zoya: do you know me??? Mr. Khan kahan hain???
Aman knew that sometimes his mama called his papa Mr. Khan and in response his papa too called her Mrs. Khan and he too joined him and addressed his mama as Mrs. Khan... but unfortunately he missed the words "do you know me?"...
Aman: Mrs. Khan app rest karo main Mr. Khan ko bula kar aata hoon... he jumped from the bed...
Zoya: be careful... she didn't recognize him but she felt a connection with him...
Aman: relax mama... he shouted and ran outside...
Zoya tried to digest what she actually heard... mama... how someone can call her mama... she held her head which was spinning now... On the other hand, Aman came to Asad...
Aman: papa jaldi aao... mama is calling you...
Asad was shocked not bcox Zoya was up but Aman was there with her what if... no he have to control the situation... but seeing Aman all happy he relaxed a bit, but its just a temporary relaxation... Aman dragged him inside the room, where Zoya was waiting for her Mr. Khan only...
Zoya: Mr. Khan kahan thy app... or yeh bacha... he was saying ...
Asad: he is my friend's saon...
Aman was looking confusedly at his mama bcox she was asking about him but when Asad told her, Aman left Asad's hand... Asad looked down and felt ba for saying so... Aman was unaware of the circumstances but how can his parents talk like this, he felt bad, really bad... tears brimmed in her eye but he controlled himself...
Zoya: Mr. Khan yeh mery sath yaha bed par tha or...
Asad: actually Zoya... wo tum so rahi thi to is ne socha thodi masti kary tabhi aisy behave kiya...
Zoya: haan par...
Aman: calm down Mrs. Khan... I was just... just kidding... he said to Zoya and ran outside...
Asad: Aman... he was about to go behind him...
Zoya: Mr. Khan app kahan ja rahy hain... whenever I woke up app yahan nahi hoty... I said I m sorry but why you are doing this to me... i m sorry Asad but i can't live without you plz don't leave me plzzz... she cried out...
Asad: its not like this Zoya... its just that I m... I m in a complete mess... he came to her and sat beside her... why are crying Zoya... I m right here... why are you stressing yourself... I m here only... he side hugged her...
Asad was lost in Aman's thoughts... what had he done with his own son and here Zoya is also crying... he failed... that too miserly... he is not a good husband and not a good father...

Mujhse Tera Moh Na Chhute, Dil Ne Banaaye Kitne Bahaane
Duja Koyi Kya Pehchaane, Jo Tan Laage So Tan Jaane
Aman came out crying, Arman rushed to him and hugged him... both cried on their loss... Arman broke apart and cupped Aman's face in his hands...
Aman: aapi will be fine Aman... it's just that...
Aman: she forgot us... how can she do this to me mamu... I m her shona... what will I do now... papa said I m his friend's son...
Arman: I know Aman, but we can't tell aapi about you... it will affect her... I m sorry Aman but you have to be strong... now stop crying...

Bite Gujre Lamho Ki Saari Baatein Tadpaati Hain
Dil Ki Surkh Deewaaron Pe Bas Yaadein Reh Jaati Hain
Arman tried to be honest with him but Aman's condition was unable to understand by anyone... he just wanted to be with his parents but Arman stopped him... On the other hand, Zoya was not letting him go even for a second... Asad n Aman both were shattered...

Baaki Sab Sapne Hain
Apne Toh Apne Hote Hain

Asad received a call from Arman that he had taken Aman with him... Asad felt guiltier bcox he was not there to support his own son... life can't be this cruel to them...
After some time, doctors told Asad to take Zoya back to their city so she can relax her mind... so AsYa left for Bhopal while Asad told Arman to bring Aman n Nuzhat too... all headed to their journey but separately... Aman was the one who not only lost his mother but his father too... yeah Aman lost his father too... bcox Asad was there with him... not even for a minute...
Precap: AsYa in KV... Aman in SM with family... Asad Aman meeting...


Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes...
hit like n leave ur replies...
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Salaam...
First f all thank u sooo much for your wishes tbhi i m back with update 😊
well i want to say this though it was an emotional update and i can't take it so easily that's why i m stopping here...
i think its my most emotional attempt... i m feeling sooo low after this...
poor Aman but that's my main twist so plzzz bear with me...
next updates will be emotional too but i promise after 2 more updates all will be okay...
hope u guys understand 😊
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
na res game...
unres...
😔 😔 😭
in the whole update i was only thinking about Aman...
poor boy...
shattered ... bcz his mama doesnt recognise him n more shattered bcz his dad cant b with him to calm him down...
and asad ... got zoya back but aman lost his mom... asad is in dilemma k khush ho udaas...
n zoya unknowingly pushed away his shona ...
hope all is well soon...
Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Salaam Ashiii... 😉
Thanx for the P.M... 😊
It was an Emotional & Well Written part... 👏 ⭐️
Aman is really a mature boy , he easily understood that his Mama forgot him and just ran away from their... 😭 felt sorry for him..
Zoya did feel uncomfortable by Aman's presence by her side...but she did felt a little pull towards him... she really is in a vulnerable state...where she doesn't know what has happened to her in these years...and now she is just stuck in the past...the future revelations will be very intriguing & engaging just to know & read her reactions... on all of this.
Asad!! well i don't know about others...but well he has been stucked in the worst situatuon even worst than the time when even Zoya was Ayehsa... He doesn't know How to placete & assure his Wife or to console and be their with his son..in this situation. 😕
I didn't got the song...but words were very apt for the situation.. 😳
Continue soon.. 😃
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Feeling bad for Asad And Aman...
😭
Continue soon..
really soon...

Edited by --Arpita-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
feeling sad for aman
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Posted: 10 years ago

UnRes'ed...on Pg 58 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Too emotional
Feeling bad for a man more than asad n zoya
Poor kid
Felt for asad he want to console his son
But can't do that too
Plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
unressed

loved it!

it was amazing!

i cried a lil😭

haha

awww my poor baby Aman is so sad

Asad feeling guilty for staying away from Aman at a time like this

Please continue soon!

Thanks for the PM
Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww poor aman in a way lost his parents feeling very bad for him

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