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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khushibano

wow great part 😃 please update soon⭐️


thank u sooo much dear 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
wesy madam aaj pehli dafa late update hai...
i mean is time...
or haan mjhy 3 res karny bsss...
phr teri bari...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Salam...
Hi my lovely readers... How are you...
well i know i m late but be happy i m back...
that too with updates...
thanks for your love n support...
now scroll down for the update...
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Adhoori Mohabbat...



Part 24:

Asad was in US from last week... Zoya and Aman missed him so much... they had spent a lot of time alone but when Asad came in their life, both started to depend on him... so as he was not there with you both realized his space in their life...
Najma was back in Bhopal... she jumped on Zoya like before... she too greeted her happily... Aman met his tamater phupi and told her that his papa had given her the right nick name... all were together under the same roof except Asad... Zoya was the one who missed him more than others... of course yaar she loved him... actually she fall in love with him for three times... first one was as Zoya... second one was as Ayesha... and the last one was as Zoya... Zoya the mixture of matured Ayesha and the bubbly Zoya...
Asad too missed her a lot... he was busy in his meetings but managed to talk with his cute little family... In nights, he was strictly ordered to sleep by his wife so in order to be in touch Zoya sacrificed her sleep and talk with him when there is night in India...
At Night, AsYa on call...
Asad: Morning Mrs. Khan...
Zoya: its midnight here Asad... she said lying down at his side of bed so she can feel him...
Asad: Aman so gaya???
Zoya: haan wo Najma k sath hai... he called her tamater phupi only... jesy app tamater bolty ho wo bhi wesy hi bol raha hai...
Asad: hmm... wait a minute... it means Aman is not with you...
Zoya: Asad wo ghar pe hi hai... actually Najma k sath KV janey vala tha par ammi ne usy rok lia to wo Najma k room main hai... kyun... koi problem hai kya... she said shyly as he got her point...
Asad: so you started your mission haan... he asked happily...
Zoya: haan wo mjhy laga k acha hoga agar wo aaj Najma k sath rahy to...
Asad: to kya Zoya???
Zoya: to kuch nahi mjhy nend aa rahi hai...
Asad: I m coming back right now... he said desperately...
Zoya: are you mad... abhi app kesy aa sakty ho...
Asad: you are alone there... in our room... I missed you Zoya...
Zoya: come on Asad kuch din ki hi to bat hai... phir hum sath hongy...
Asad: I want to be with you right NOW!!!
Zoya: app Aman ki tarha kyun behave kar rahy hain... sabar kejieye Asad... sabar ka phal meetha hota hai...
Asad: its means you are ready...
Zoya: Asad wo... wo main Aman ko dekh kar aati hoon...
Asad: liar... just tell me Zoya... are you ready or not... be honest Zoya... I swear if you are not okay I will close this topic right now...
Zoya: app wapis aa jaiye apko jawab mil jaye ga...
Asad: so you are waiting for me... or I can say you missed me...
Zoya: I missed you Asad...
Asad: how much???
Zoya: stop pulling my leg and get up... you have to leave for a meeting...
Asad: okay no problem... I will catch you once I m back... love you...
Zoya: I love you too... be careful bye...
Asad had finished his work and headed to the biggest shopping mall... he immediately called to Zoya and asked her to give phone to Aman and then he shopped according to Aman's wish... then he shopped for other family members... and last but not the least he came in ladies section to shop for his lovely wife... he bought some western dresses for her... he knew that she will not wear but he can try to bring his old Zoya back... suddenly he came back to ladies section and looked for a nighty for his wife... he wanted to buy such thing for her before the wedding but destiny didn't allow him earlier so he decided to bought it now...
Zoya was really happy as Asad was coming back... Khan Siblings teased her for being so excited at his arrival... actually she was shy too after all both were going to take their relationship to the next level... she had planned everything... she wanted to start her new life with Asad from KV only where he had told her about her real identity... she had cleaned up the whole Kv as per Asad's wish... Aman was spending a quality of time with his phupi n chachu so she can feel relax from Aman's side...
Asad reached Bhopal around 3' o clock... actually he had told everyone that he will come after 2 days but he came earlier to surprise them... he entered in the hose with spare keys and without making any noise he came in his room and sighed in relief when he found his wife and son sleeping peacefully... seeing them safe n sound his tiredness went away... he silently removed his jacket and took his his suit from the cupboard and left for washroom...
Asad took bath and came out of the washroom drying his wet hair... he went to the kitchen and searched for something when the lights went on... he turned and found his ammi there... he greeted his mother and took him in a hug...
Dilshad: kesa hai mera beta... kuch khany ko don... she said creasing his hair lovingly...
Asad: I m fine ammi... boht bhook lagi hai...
Dilshad: you know what you are too bad... Zoya ne etna kuch plan kiya thaw o tumhari pasand ki dishes banany vali thi...
Asad: ammi main sabko surprise dena chahta tha... he said proudly...
Dilshad: oh to mera beta romantic ho raha hai kya bat hai... she served him food and sat beside him...
Asad: ammi app ja kar aram kejiye main khaa longa...
Dilshad: nahi tum aram se khao main yahi hoon...
Asad ate his food while Dilshad watched his son lovingly... she was seeing a relaxed and happy Asad after ages... she wiped her unshed tear and sent a silent prayer upward... Asad finished his food and came back to his room... he silently came to Aman and kissed his chubby cheeks...
Asad: papa missed you a lot Mr. Khan... he ruffled his hair and dropped a kiss on his forehead...
Asad came to the other side and lay beside Zoya and hugged her from behind... he came closer and whispered in her ear...
Asad: missed you too wifey... he dropped a kiss in the nape of her neck and she smiled in her sleep... he smiled back and closed his eyes so sleep can took over him...
Next Morning, Zoya woke up but her eyes were still closed... she felt an arm around her waist and her eyes shot open in horror... but seeing Asad she calmed down... she turned towards him and creased his face lovingly... feeling her touch Asad opened his eyes and locked them with hers... both were drowned I each others eyes... both tilted their heads to decrease the distance between them... Asad starred at her lips and then looked back in her eyes for permission... she blinked her eyes and brushed her lips with his... Asad smiled and took her in a kiss... a passionate kiss... which convey their care, love, separation and all other emotions... they broke apart in need of oxygen...
Asad: so you missed me haan... he said pecking her lips...
Zoya: I missed you... app to kal aany valy thy...
Asad: haan but I thought meri wife ne mere liye etna kuch plan kia hai so I too planned a surprise...
Zoya: I love you Asad... she said looking in his eyes...
Asad: I love you too wifey...
Aman: no body loves me here... Aman woke up and heard out his parent's confession and complained...
Asad: come here Mr. Khan... papa loves you too... he said offering him a hand... Aman held his hand and came on top of him and hugged him tightly...
Aman: I miss you papa... he said still lying on him...
Asad: aww Mr. Khan there is a deal... next time mama papa or Aman sath main jayengy... done...
Aman: done Mr. Khan... they shook their hands...
Zoya: Asad app ne kuch khaya... main abhi breakfast bana kar aati hoon... she said getting up from the bed...
Asad: mene thori dair pehly hi khana khaya hai... so you don't need to go and cook... come here I need a proper sleep... he said with a wink...
Aman: papa apko nend aayi hai to mama ko kyun bula rahy ho... abhi mera school time hai... mama is mine now...
Asad: Mr. Khan hum dono main "mine" kaha se aa gaya haan... so mean go and talk to your mama now... he said turning to the other side...
Aman: acha abhi to achy se bat karo mjhy school jana hai... he kissed his cheeks...
Asad: okay... but we need to talk in evening...
Aman: of course Mr. Khan... can I go now... mama abhi wapis aa jayengi...
Asad: hmm... come here... he kissed his all over the face and bid her good bye...
Zoya turned off the lights and took Aman with her... Asad slept again... Aman got ready for school while Zoya made breakfast for him... then she dropped Aman at school and came back home... she took off from office as she wanted to spend some time with her hubby... Najma and Ayan teased her a lot but she remained silent... around 11' o clock she came to their room to check on Asad... she entered in the room without switching on the lights and closed the door behind him...


Zoya sat beside Asad and ruffled his hair lovingly... he was sleeping peacefully but when he felt her touch he smiled in sleep... she creased his stubble cheek... she came closer to him and dropped a kiss on her forehead and in response his slight frowns were gone... she creased his eye brows in order to sooth his tiredness... she then starred at his manly lips and placed a soft kiss to feel the togetherness of their lips... she smiled at herself and pulled back bcox she dint want to disturb his sleep... she was about to get up from the bed when she felt a tug at her hand and in the next moment she was on top of him... actually just an inches apart from him...
Asad: mjhy nahi pata tha meri biwi aisy advantages ly sakti hai... he said huskily and tugged her hair behind her ear...


Zoya: advantage... such a cheap word Asad... I m your wife... it's my legal right... she said confidently...
Asad: so you came to know about your rights haan... he asked making her look in his eyes...
Zoya: hmm... she said playing with his kurta...
Asad: Zoya tumny kaha tha k mery wapis aany par mjhy jawab mily ga so I m waiting for your answer wifey... he said pecking her lips...
Zoya: I m ready Asad... she said looking straight in his eyes...
Asad: ready for what... he asked in order to confirm...
Zoya: make me your's Asad... I love you so much... and I want "us" in all senses... she said and pecked his lips...
Asad: I love you too... saying so he took her in a kiss... after breaking the kiss they rested their foreheads together...
Asad: so can I???
Zoya: what???
Asad: what what... abhi to tum ready thi... he said disappointedly...
Zoya: I m ready Asad... but not like this...
Asad: matlab???
Zoya: I have a surprise... so have to wait till night Asad...
Asad: night... etna wait... no way... I want you right now...
Zoya: now... no way Asad... its morning... sab ghar pe hain...
Asad: plzzz...
Zoya: no...
Asad: you are too adamant...
Zoya: so as you Asad...
Asad: okay... night... done... and let me tell you one thing clearly...
Zoya: kya???
Asad: you will say... "Its morning Asad"... he said with a wink...
Zoya: haan wo to mene abhi bhi kaha hai...
Asad: hmm but not in this mean... you know what I m trying to say... he said with a smirk...
Zoya: Allah Miyan... What's wrong with you Asad... how can you speak like this... you are a father now... try to behave like adult... she smacked his arm and stood up...
Asad: I m behaving like an adult only...
Zoya: you are impossible...
Asad: acha come here na I want to sleep...
Zoya: you really need a proper sleep Asad so I m going in Kitchen... I will be back soon...
Asad: Zoya...
Zoya: I said sleep... she ordered sternly...
Asad: you know what Aman is right... you are so bossy...
Zoya: tell me something new Asad... sleep well... she blew him a kiss and went out...
Asad huffed in annoyance went back to sleep so that he can wake up and wait for the beautiful night...
Precap: AsYa in KV... AsYa n Aman on holidays...



Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes...
hit like n leave ur replies...
Ashii...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 4 arzoo, jas, mayur, affu, hena, abi, asif, anopama, sasir, cinderella, aroo, amu, yumi, nilu, niya, mags
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Posted: 10 years ago
res...
unres...
loved the update ashii...
so finally asad ki judaaii made zoya realise n decide that she indeed luvs him n is ready to take the next step ahead...
all is back to normal now...
dilshaad is happy fr his son...
n m also happy fr asya...😃
zoya ka surprise is still a surprise i guess... 😉
let the shaam come 😛
continue soon
Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago
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Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
UnResss... 😉
Salaam Ashiii... 😃
It was a very good and well written part... 👏
Both Aman and Zoya realising the need to have Asad beside them...and how he filled a void which was there when they were not together...liked that part also where Zoya was chatting with Asad and then discussing their future...loved it... 👏 😃
Zoya ready to take the next big step in her life with Asad right by her side... 😉
Asad as Dilshaad thought is really a content man now...when now his life and love both are with him...
ASYA scenes were very good...
Continue soon.. 😊
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ress
unressed
amazing update
Asad in US
came back early to surprise zoya
Zoya ready to take their relationship to the next level
continue soon!😊
Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashiii333

res 4 arzoo, jas, mayur, affu, hena, abi, asif, anopama, sasir, cinderella, aroo, amu, yumi, nilu, niya, mags


Thanx for the Ress' Ashiii...
Have UnRes'ed on Pg.27.. 😃
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago

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