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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#861

Hey Srash and Aditi 🤗

Wonderful update...

Full of Angst, realization and misunderstandings!

It is written so beautifully that I can feel their pain!

Now they are trying to avoid each other but how will they escape from the oozing feelings?

How will this misunderstanding clear?

Want to know more!

Please continue!

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#862

Awesome update

Emotional

Hope everything will be fine soon

Thanks for the pm

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Alone111

@Alone111

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#863

Dat was so emotional updt..
Ye kya hai yaar.. So many misunderstandings !!

Baat tho karlete :'( :'(
Thy r n so much pain :'( :'(
Hp everything ll be fn soon..

Loved end of d chappy...
The lines n d end were gud.. Well written..

Continue soon

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#864

Ek hi cheez kehni hai...

ZOYA KO ROKO!!!!!!!!!

ASYA KO SEPARATE NA KARO

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#865

Very nice update srushti

Well written

Asad and zoya misunderstood with each other

But understand increasing day by day

I hope it will clear soon

Thanks for pm

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#866

Update Next Part Soon...😳

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#867

New Part New Thread Main Update Hoga kya...??

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Tulip

@husnkimalika

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#868

nice part
loved it
thanks for pm

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#869

Awesome Part

Asad is really acting like a jerk

How come he accuse her wen she don't even saw him? Hated him for manhandling her n teln her not to leave d house. How dare he?

Poor Zoya don't even know wat happened to him

How dare he think of takn revenge on her or any girl?

Asad has really lost his brains

Zoya too misunderstood Asad

Asad softened for a moment n accused her of meeting his father

Why don't he believe wen she said she don't know him dat he was his father? Why he can't let go of his stupid ego dat Zoya really don't know him?

How can he expect her to trust him wen he is not doing d same?

No matter why Zoya thought dat he tuk revenge on her by meeting her father

I hated Asad for opening her letter thinking it may be 4m Rashid. How can he see someone's personal letter doubting anything?

I felt bad for Zoya cuz she is staying till Najma's wedding. Then also dat jerk is not stopping 4m thinking dat he can't let Zoya play wid his family. Hope Zoya does not forgives him soon.

I think another fight is to come due to Asad opening her letter

I can't understand dis Asad's brain. I am sure if it was Ayaan, Najma or Dilshad in place of Asad seeing Zoya wid Rashid they wud not have reacted like a jerk but told her everything.

I can't get Zoya yaar. How can she be so stupid? Making a stranger a friend???

Who d hell does dat?

And even accepting money 4m him n sharing cell nos wid him

She can be tricked, kidnapped or even trafficked.

If Asad is a jerk then Zoya is a brainless

Plz make Asad realize his mistakes of how much he hurt Zoya