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Posted: 10 years ago
Can't find the right words to describe how Awesomee this update wasss!!👏
Loved it to the coreee..😳
The starting was really amusing with asya's reaction towards each other funny n cute 😆
Oww zoya went in her past memos n fainted.. Her past has a deep effect on her n so does asads past memories regarding his dad...😭
Hope asya heal each others wounds with their true loveee...
I really love mona n rabberts friendship its unique n cool...😉
The convo bitwin them was emotional specially this part really made me want to cry:
"Asad Bhai humesha mohabbat se door bhagte rahe...nikah ke liye razi wo sirf Ammi ke liye hue. Aaj agar tum chali gayi toh jis tarah humare Abbu humein chod gaye the...shayad Ammi bhi...Bhai ateet ke uss andhere se abhi tak nahi nikle hain, tumhare jaane se kahin who humesha ke liye us mein kho na jayein. I just ask for one thing, if possible, ek baar apna decision re-consider karo. Mat jao Zoya...we all need you."😭

It was really heartbreaking of what will happen to asad...💔
Poor zoe she is stuck in her own ghosts of her part..
Najma is really cuteee 😆
The walima part was really good...specially the asya'sdance was AMAZING with all those emotions well described from both their views...
The last part was bit emotional n also really nycc with zoya remembering her past memory with her daadi n making a decision of staying for the sake of dilshaad...
Waiting to see how asya become friends.😃.
Continue asap
Thanxxx for the pm aditi n srashti🤗 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
An update after so long...But what an awesome chapter...Amazing...
I hope you guys will update soon...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

Beautiful update...

When asad and zoya cried for their fate, it was heart wrenching scene ...
I was so scared when zoya asked ayaan to let her go and not to force...
Najma and dilshaad are adorable... Zoya will start loving them soon...
Asya dance was intense... So much pain they are carrying in their heart...
Garden scene was beautiful, amazingly described...
Quite an intense story...eager to know what is going to happen next...
Update soon...


😃
Thanks for this beautiful comment
Will update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ABI-

unres
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Update



Thank u so much 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

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beautiful update. .:)
it was worth waiting for..:)
Loved the asya dance scene.!
It was so intense..:)
Awesome update. .
this story is interesting
Cant wait for the next update. .! :)


Thank u so much😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

Very nice update
Very interesting
Liked dishad and ayaan talk with zoya
Asya dance was nice
Waiting for the next part

Glad u liked it😳
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yo squizy😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Srashti & Aditi..😊😛
Well this was a Very Good , Wonderfully written update 👏 ⭐️
I don't appreciate what Asad did on their first night though whom so ever have started it...😡
The fight led to almost a big marriage failure in a night itself..both with each other words and actions AsYa were forced to remember bitter past memories...
Atleast Ayaan saved the Day' and their Marriage* for the time being.. 😕
Loved the song and the emotions going on between AsYa throughout that dance😳
Interesting and Brilliant comeback part..👏
Continue soonish... 😃


Mayur...asad aur zoya ki fight na ho toh woh asya honge kya?
Asad ka toh kaam hi hai over-react karna...
But slowly n eventually he'll realize that zoya is a good person...

Ayaan toh hai hi smart😆

Thank u for ur long n colorful comment🥱🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank u😃

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