HaiRaAn SS: Once Best Friends, Now Strangers With Memories Chapter 3 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Linsie

thanks for pm...

nice update...

continue soon


Thnx
Will update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Really interesting
plz make AyRa together at the end
i miss them alot...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Maahi25love

Really interesting
plz make AyRa together at the end
i miss them alot...
Update soon...



Thank u 🤗
Well we'll see as the story progresses
No promises!
Will update on Friday :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Hey guys, exams over! Yippee! So here is Chapter 2!
Chapter Two :
Razia and Gaffur were coming down from their room. They saw Maulvi Sahab coming inside the
house.

Razia : Are, Maulvi Sahab , aap yaha ?
Maulvi Sahab : Asalamoewalekum, Raziaji, asalamoewalekum Siddiqui Sahab
Gaffur : waalekumsalaam. Aapko yaha kisne bulaaya hai?
Maine Bulaaya hai!

They turned to see Haider standing there wearing a Sherwani.

Razia : tumne?! Tumne, maulvi Sahab ko kyun bulaaya?
Haider : Kyunki aaj Humaira aur main nikkah karne waale hai!
Gaffur : Kya!!!!
Haider : ji, aapne suna nahi ? Teek hai Phir bataata hoon. Maine Maulvi Sahab ko yaha pe bulaaya hai kyunki aaj Humaira aur main nikkah karne waale hai!

Just then Humaira comes. Razia runs towards her.
Razia : Humaira, yeh...yeh Haider kya Bol raha hai? Huh?! Yeh.. Yeh keh raha hai ki aaj tum dono nikkah karne waale ho!?
Humaira : Haider sach keh rahi hai Ammi! Aaj hum Dono nikkah karne waale hai!
Gaffur : tumne Aisa soch bhi kaise liya , huh, ki hum tumhe ye nikkah karne denge?
Humaira : Are abbu!

Humaira walked towards Gaffur.
Humaira : Agar aap mujhe bina bataaye, mere liye ek nayi Ammi laa sakte ho , to main bhi aapko bina bataaye aapke liye ek damaad to laa sakti hoon, hai na?!
Razia : Humaira! Aise baat karte hai apne abbu se?! Lagta hai Haider ke saath reh kar tum tameez aur tehzeeb ke Matlab bhul chuki ho! Aur Zara Ayaan ke bare mein bhi tho Socho! Pehle tho tum Ayaan se beintahaa mohabbat karti thi, ab kya hua?
Humaira : Ammi please! Aap kis insaan ki baat kar rahi ho? Vo insaan jisne mujhe itna bada dhokha diya?! Vo insaan jisne tab mera saath choda jab mujhe uske sabse zyada zaroorat thi?!
Razia : Nahi! Main uss insaan ke baat kar rahi hoon jisne tumse sacche mohabbat ki! Iss Haider ki tarha nahi! Humaira, beta, tum samajh kyun nahi rahe ho? Haider tumhari bholepan ka faida uttha raha hai!
Humaira: Bas Ammi!

Tanveer stood behind a pillar and watched the whole drama.
Tanveer to herself : Are waa Humaira! Jo kaam main itne dino mein nahi kar payi, Wo tumne ek pal mein kiya! Tumne Razia ko back answer ki! Waa! Are, yeh kya baat hai? Baaki sab yaha pe kyun nahi hai? Fikar mat kar beta, tumhari choti Ammi unn sab ko lekar Aayegi!

Meanwhile in AsYa's room...
Zoya : Sacchi?!?!?!
Asad : Ji!
Zoya : Allah Miya, what's wrong with you, Mr.Khan? Aapko itna bhi nahi pata? Jab log Sacchi Kehte hai tab aapko mucchi kehna chahiye! So. Let's try again! Sacchi?!?!?!
Asad rubbed his forehead and said: Mucchi!
Zoya: Yay!! Raburt vaapas aa raha hai! Yippee!
Asad : ha! Aaj finally mere chote bhai vaapas aa raha hai! Vaise aap itna khush kyun ho rahe hai?
Zoya : oh come on , Mr. Khan! Main khush kyun na ho? Aakhir meri Bachpan ka dost vaapas aa raha hai! She winked.

Tho jab hum yaha aaye tho koi humaare aane ke liye itna khush kyun nahi hue?
AsYa turned to see Tanveer standing at their room door.

Asad: Tumhari himmat Kaise hui yaha aane ki, huh?!
Tanveer : Are Jammy, hum tho bas...
Zoya : Khabardar! Khabardar jo Mr. Khan ko Jammy kaha tho!
Tanveer : Teek Hai! Hum tho bas yeh kehne aayi thi ki aaj Humaira aur Haider nikkah kar rahe hai!
Asad: What Rubbish!
Zoya : exactly! Humaira aur Haider sirf aur sirf acche dost hain! Humaira aur Ayaan ek dusre se mohabbat karte hai!
Tanveer laughed and said : Agar aap dono ko hum par yakeen nahi hai, tho khud bahaar aake dekh leejiye!

AsYa walked out of the room with Tanveer following them. They were shocked to see what was happening there.

Humaira : Chalo Haider, hum nikkah kar lete hai!
Humaira and Haider sat at their respective places.

Humaira : Maulvi Sahab, shuru keejiye!

Maulvi Sahab: Haider Sheikh vard Sikandar Sheikh kya aapko Humaira Siddiqui se nikkah qubool hai?

Razia to Gaffur: Sikandar Sheikh , Haider ke abbu the!

Haider closed his eyes and he remembered his Chutki, Ammi , Abbu and Mausi, and how because of GaZia they all died.

He opened his eyes and said : Qubool Hai, Qubool Hai, Qubool Hai!!

Maulvi Sahab : Humaira Siddiqui vard Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui kya aapko Haider Sheikh se nikkah Qubool Hai?

Humaira: Mujhe yeh nikkah...

Look Who Is Back!!!

All turned to see Ayaan standing at the door.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay Me First!!!
😆 Agar aap mujhe bian abtaye ere liye ek nayi ammi la sakte ahin toh amin aapke liye damaad kyun nahi la sakti
Loved it

Also I loved what she said about Ayan leaving her the way he had

Razia B tameez tehzeeb ki baat aap na hi karen toh accha hoga

I love AsYa Sacchi Mucchi I thought a kiss or an attempt to kiss would be inserted The way Mucchi is said with an extra pout of lips is just cute I love to say it Zoya is right whnever someone says Saachi mucchi is the right response

Yeh Billi is always roaming around AsYa room and eve dropping kya? Kuch aur kaam nahi hai

So Nikaah surprise tha but Ayaan gave a shock by coming back na? esp to HaiRa

So Haider said QH thrice what will Hunaira jee do?

Waiting for more
Edited by Chahanya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Wow!
Awesome
Read both in one go!

Chapter 1- Beautifully explained! 👏
Loved how Humaira was feeling!
Haider 😡 but still I love him
Yay! My Ayaan is back!!!!!

Chapter 2 - Humaira and Gaffur conversation 🤣
Aww... My AsYa so cute

Love the way u mentioned in the character sketch that KSG is AAK!

Haider accepted the marraige ab Humaira ka kya?!
Ayaan is back! Wahoo!

Awesome Story Sis! Update soon!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Yay Me First!!!
😆 Agar aap mujhe bian abtaye ere liye ek nayi ammi la sakte ahin toh amin aapke liye damaad kyun nahi la sakti
Loved it

Also I loved what she said about Ayan leaving her the way he had

Razia B tameez tehzeeb ki baat aap na hi karen toh accha hoga

I love AsYa Sacchi Mucchi I thought a kiss or an attempt to kiss would be inserted The way Mucchi is said with an extra pout of lips is just cute I love to say it Zoya is right whnever someone says Saachi mucchi is the right response

Yeh Billi is always roaming around AsYa room and eve dropping kya? Kuch aur kaam nahi hai

So Nikaah surprise tha but Ayaan gave a shock by coming back na? esp to HaiRa

So Haider said QH thrice what will Hunaira jee do?

Waiting for more



Thnx Chahat
Glad u liked it
About that kiss part
Nice idea though
But... No happy stuff in the next few chapters
Anth mein sab kuch theek ho jayega!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: RagNa294

Wow!

Awesome
Read both in one go!

Chapter 1- Beautifully explained! 👏
Loved how Humaira was feeling!
Haider 😡 but still I love him
Yay! My Ayaan is back!!!!!

Chapter 2 - Humaira and Gaffur conversation 🤣
Aww... My AsYa so cute

Love the way u mentioned in the character sketch that KSG is AAK!

Haider accepted the marraige ab Humaira ka kya?!
Ayaan is back! Wahoo!

Awesome Story Sis! Update soon!!!!


Thnx Dude
Will update tomorrow 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579



Thnx Chahat
Glad u liked it
About that kiss part
Nice idea though
But... No happy stuff in the next few chapters
Anth mein sab kuch theek ho jayega!

Anth bhala toh sab bhala
It is not a happy ending it is not an ending

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