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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: nilusoni
It's superb loved it
Zoya is awesome
Hope to see second part with truth out
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for other work
Plz write second part

Thanx a lot !!
Glad u liked it ..
Yeah..I hope I can write too ..
U're welcome..Will do sure...
Let's see..If I can..I will do ..

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: anopama
Very nice
A drunk zoya
But ah sis not leaving Asad she wants to talk to him
He is her prince
Hope Asad finds the truth
Part 2 plz

Thanx Dee!!
Glad you liked it ..
I Hope too..
Hehe ..Let's see ..I will write when I get time ..

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Amulya9
aish.. its awesome...
I know both ASYA r in pain bt phir bhi I loved it kyun ki Zoya didn't leave him
drunken Zoya wants her Mr.Khan only that's was so cute...loved it
awww my asad 😭 iss billi ki tho main 😡
I loved d way Zoya told everything n billi ka challenge bhi...
this was so missing in show
last scene is lovely...
I loved it a lot when she called him asad
I want u 2 continue this n Get them married pleej...

Thank u Dee!! Glad u Liked it..
Yeah...Indeed they were in pain..😭
I didn't want Zoya to run away from the probs ..🤢
Let's see Dee...Time mila toh zaroor likhunga !!

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Amulya9
banner is lovelyyy

Yes !! Thank u !!

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ksen
amazing.please continue
thanks for the pm

Thank u !! Hope I can ...Let's see...

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sasir
awesome
loved it
amazing
plz continue it

Thank u !!😊

Glad you Liked it ..

I will try to..But not sure..

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: gowtu
Its amzng aishwa
Lovedit... Long one yaar.. Uuufff :-P

Thank u Dee !!

Yes ! Indeed a very long one ..

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: jas91

Aloo🤗

Awesome OS Aish👏⭐️👏
Can't tell u how much i loved it
Zoya drunk was actually cute😆
Her amazing dialogues
I miss Asya so much😭
She still trusts him
& revealed Biili's tricks
plz plz 1 aur part likh iska
wid Billi's revelation & Asya wedding
pretty plz😳

Thank u so much Dee...😛
Yeah..I can understand..😳
Glad you liked it .. 😊
I miss too.. 😭
Maybe..I will..but still not sure...

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Aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Heyyy Aish...well a very good O.S...Zoya what she did here in unconscious state...she should also tried to do something like that in the show where she was well conscious but it took her almost 2 months and that to in ajmer to realise that Asad didn't do anything...but letting bygones be bygones...did Zoya asked Ayaan to bring her alcohol so that she can explain to Asad...about all this...well a well written O.S.

Thank u !! Glad u Liked it ...

No !! Not like that ...Stay tuned i will clear that point in Next Part !!

Thanks Again !! Stay tuned..