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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

This has really been a lovely read!

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Awesome Story😃😊...Zoya saw d awful scene n got drunk...How can Ayaan give her alcohol n hide himself?...Zoya sud not have supported Asad so much but showed him her anger for never trusting her n still trusting his Tanu...Asad listened to Zoya n found out d truth only after her lots of efforts...Asad sud not have been easily forgiven by Zoya...He can't get away easily after wat all he did to Zoya n even made her to apologize someone...Wats wid Zoya not wanting to call Asad by name but want him to call by her name?... Their confession was awesomeTheir date was nice... Bedroom scene was good.

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@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Hey... Really nice update...

Earring scene was so cute...

Liked it very much..

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Aah!! another mind blowing update!!

Asad took her to the cliff for surprise and propose her!!
How cute😳

and then...the life time confirmation came!!
Loved it😊

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Loved it

Aww he took her back where it all started

Love the petals the dinner the dance

Then laying on the petals watching the Stars

Love how she movies to his room

And him asking and telling her abt knocking

He said he was married to her since he put that ring on her finger

Awww he give her her earring back

Loved it so much love

What is meant for u u always get don't matter how much evil is around

And so is Asad and zoya

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Lovely update
Proposal was wonderful.
Thanks for pm

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Aishu !! loved it !! its superb!

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Wooh!!! Such a mind-blowing TS it was!!!
starting with a sad note and ending with a happy one!! Andl all's well that ends well!! You have developed a great writing skill, SOTY!! Must say IF has helped you a lot in that!!
Nywayz the update was really good!! I loved the entire chappy!!