AsYa FF: Phir Milenge- Epilogue Updated on Page 81 on 22nd Sep

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As The Other Side Of Zoya will soon end, I have decided to write new FF. This story is also not related to the show. I have lifted this FF from my own FF which I wrote for the couple of The Buddy Project KiSha(Kiya-Keshav/KD). I had wrote 8 parts and left it discontinued because the members in that forum started getting less and disappearing and there was hardly any response. But I have decided to repost it here after altering the names of the characters as it was my 1st story there out of the show and I started loving that story. Now, I am reposting it here as I want to make use of that story again. I will repost the 8 parts regularly. But after that, I will have to think and write the furthur parts.
This story comes in crime, thriller, suspense and romance category. In this, Asad and Zoya will not be necessarily in each and every part. It will contain several violence scenes especially on Zoya. If you are uncomfortable with this then don't read. As I used to write all the stories in hindi earlier, the 1st 8 parts will be in hindi as it was as I will not waste my time in translating. But from 9th part, I will write in english. Hope you all like this story too😊.


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Main Characters

Asad Ahmed Khan(24): CID Officer, Zoya's childhood friend, loves Zoya. Asad is Zoya's childhood friend. They gets separated wen they r 12 as Asad's dad has a transfer in Chandigarh. He returns 12 years later n gets close to Farooqui family once again. He is on a mission wid Anwar to find Zoya who is mysteriously missing. He is very hurt to find Zoya missing as he was very eager to meet her after returning to Mumbai.

Zoya Farooqui(24): Journalist, Zeenat's younger sister, Asad's childhood friend, loves Asad. She goes mysteriously missing wen she is kidnapped by Gaffur n Razia Siddiqui who r most wanted dangerous criminals. She is kidnapped by them as cuz of her n her friend, they went to jail 16 years ago. She is held captive in an unknown location by them. She is forced to do robbery by them against her will. She tried to escape some times but is always caught n punished severely. She has almost lost all d hope but wen someone special 4m her past comes to her, she retains her hope.

Anwar Razzaq Ali(26): Asad's co-CID officer, Asad's friend, Zeenat's husband. He is like an elder brother to Zoya. He is also a friend of Asad, his co-CID officer.

Zeenat Razzaq Ali(26): Fashion designer, Zoya's elder sister, Anwar's wife. She adores n loves Zoya very much. She is very devastated wen Zoya goes missing.

Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui(46): Criminal, Razia's husband, Bilal's dad. He is a most wanted criminal along wid his wife Razia. He and his wife kidnaps Zoya for some old revenge. He n his wife r planning to forcibly marry Zoya to their son Bilal to make her life a living hell.

Razia Ahmed Siddiqui(46): Criminal, Gaffur's husband, Bilal's mom. She is a most wanted criminal along wid her husband Razia. She and her husband kidnaps Zoya for some old revenge. She n Gaffur r planning to forcibly marry Zoya to their son Bilal to make her life a living hell.

Bilal Ahmed Siddiqui(24): Criminal, Son of Gaffur-Razia. He is away 4m home for a short period of time. He is also an equally evil n ruthless person like his parents.

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Plot summary:

Asad Ahmed Khan n Zoya Farooqui r childhood best friends who cud not imagine themselves widout each other. They got separated wen they were 12 years old as Asad's dad got transferred in Chandigarh. 12 years later, Asad returned to Mumbai as a CID Officer only to find Zoya missing. His co-CID officer Anwar Razzaq Ali who is also Zoya's elder sister Zeenat's husband told Asad dat Zoya who is a journalist went mysteriously missing while she went to cover a news in Delhi. Unknown to them, Zoya is kidnapped by a most wanted criminal couple Gaffur n Razia Siddiqui who r in their 40s. They kidnapped her for revenge as cuz of her n her friend, they had to go to jail 16 years ago. How cud Zoya n her friend caused them to go to jail @ d tender age of 8. Zoya is held captive in an unknown place. Her cell-phone n her other necessary things r taken away 4m her as they don't want to give her a chance to escape. Zoya is a brave n strong woman as a journalist but she is not able to do anything wid dangerous n cruel people around her all d time making it difficult for to even think of making any move to escape. She is forced to commit crimes like pick-pocketing n robbery against her will n punished for doing any mistakes. She tried a few times to escape but she was always caught. Her kidnappers wud punish her for rebelling, protesting n trying to escape by slapping, beating, locking her in dark rooms, starving her n even whipping her big mistakes. D Siddiquis r planning to forcibly marry Zoya to their equally evil n ruthless son Bilal to make her life a living hell. Bilal is away 4m home for some days. Anwar n Asad r on a mission to find Zoya. Zoya steals a phone 4m sum1 n calls home teln them dat she is kidnapped by d criminal couple Gaffur n Razia Ahmed Siddiqui n also tells them dat she does not know where she is. She is unfortunately seen by sum1 who sees her wid d cell after she finished talking. Her kidnappers r very mad wid her for daring to steal a cell. She is whipped for it n locked in d store room for 2 days wid 1 meal a day. Zoya was on d verge of losing all d hope. After 2 days, Bilal returns home but wid a lost memory n new face. 2 days earlier, his parents got a call dat Bilal had met wid an accident a week ago n lost his memory. He even had to do plastic surgery as his face was disfigured. His original face(Neil Motwani) is changed to new face (Karan Singh Grover). Zoya is brought 4m d store room n d Siddiquis reveals their plan of getn her married to Bilal. Zoya protests very much asking them d reason for kidnapping her n forcing her to marry Bilal. They tell her evrythng abt d reason of her n 1 of her male friend being d cause of them havng to go in jail 16 years ago. She is even forced to stay n sleep in Bilal's room dat also before marriage. But Bilal does not do anything wrong wid her n he makes her sleep on d sofa instead on d bed wid him. But he behaves rudely wid Zoya. Zoya is shocked dat Bilal is not like how she heard a lot abt him. Even Bilal seems mysterious on his return which is ignored by all giving it d reason as d effects of memory loss. Zoya is confused abt all dis n decides to find abt him. Is d one who returned wid a new face is really Bilal or sum1 else pretending to be him? If he is not Bilal then who is he n y he is not harming Zoya a bit apart 4m being rude n unfriendly wid her? If he is really pretending then where is d real Bilal?

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Character sketch is nice
Plot interesting
Asad as a CID officer & zoya as Journalist
He came back to find out that zoya was missing
Now on mission to find her
So Asad will replace himself to bilal & enter in Gazia house for saving his childhood friend & his love zoya.
Will read part 1 soon & comment
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Part 1

In Mumbai, there r various news abt missing journalist Zoya Farooqui going on 4m some days. There r many talks abt it but none of her team knows where she has gone.

In a house, a beautiful woman is sitting on a sofa wid her husband.

"Anwar, Zoya ka ab tak kuch pata nahi chala hai," said d woman worriedly.

"Zeenat, hum use dhundne ki poori koshish kar rahe hai," replied her husband Anwar Razzq Ali, a CID Officer.

Anwar Razzaq Ali was married to famous fashion designer Zeenat Farooqui. Zoya Farooqui is Zoya Farooqui's younger sister. She mysteriously went missing wen she went to Delhi to cover some news. No one has any idea how she went missing.

"Zoya ka phone bhi nahi lag raha hai. Usne hume 1 phone tak nahi kiya hai," said Zeenat worriedly, "Pata nahi kaha hogi vo?"

Scene shifts to a bank. Some ppl come on their bikes. They moves inside d bank widout removing their helmet. They all were wearing black leather jackets n leather gloves. They removed their guns arming @ d ppl.

A man signals a woman in d grp to go to d cashier n get d money.

D woman goes to d cashier n threatens, "Iss bag me paise daal do varna acchha nahi hoga."

D cashier got afraid n did as she was told. Before going 4m there, d woman tries to remove her helmet but a man caught her hand.

Scene shifts to a large home. All d ppl who robbed d bank reached d home. They were removing their helmets. A couple in their 40s were waiting for them. Both of them were dressed in business suits.

"Kaam thik se hua na?" asked d man among d couple.

"Isne apna helmet utaarne ki koshish ki," said 1 of d man pointing @ d woman who threatened d cashier.

D woman removed her helmet n she is none other than Zoya Farooqui.

D couple got angry. D woman of d couple stepped forward n slapped Zoya hard.

"Helmet utaarne ki koshish karne ki himmat kaise huvi tumhaari? Tum kahin firse bhaagne ki koshish to nahi kar rahi thi na?" asked d woman angrily.

"Muje robbery aur pick-pocketing jaise koi galat kaam nahi karna hai. Aap logon ne muje q aise kidnap kiya hai? Mere gharwaale bahot mere liye pareshaan honge. Plz, muje ghar jaane do. Main tum sabke k baare me kisise kuch nahi kahungi," requests Zoya.

"Tumhe ghar jaane ki bahot jaldi hai. Hai na? Thik hai, hum tumhe ghar jaane denge par uske liye tumhe vahi karna hoga jo hum kahenge," said d man of d couple.

D couple n others went 4m there leaving Zoya alone in d hall. Zoya is shocked by wat d man said just now.

"Pata nahi mere parents, Zeenat di aur Anwar jiju kitna pareshaan honge mere liye," said Zoya to herself sadly.

D woman of d couple comes in d hall n shouts @ Zoya, "Saara din yahi rahogi kya? Apne room me jao. Aur haan, agli baar agar koi chalaaki karne ki koshish ki to dekh lena."

Zoya goes to her room. It was a normal room. D couple who kidnapped Zoya r d most wanted criminals Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui n his wife Razia Ahmed Siddiqui. She was kidnapped by them wen she was driving on a way wen no one was around. Sum1 overtaked her car. Zoya came out of d car. D driver of d other car also came out who was none other than Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui. Then unknown to Zoya, sum1 hit her head 4m behind n evrythng went black. Wen she opened her eyes, she found herself in dis room. D Siddiquis were standing by her bed. Zoya asked them d reason of kidnapping her but they did not said anything. They had taken her cell-phone, laptop, purse n other things to avoid any means of her escaping.

Scene shifts to Gaffur n Razia's bedroom.

"Gaffur, tum kya sach me Zoya ko ghar jaane doge?" asks Razia.

"R u crazy? Maine to aisa hi kaha tha usse. Us ladki ne apne 1 dost k saath milkar hume 16 saal pehle jail bhijwaaya tha. Un dono k vajah se hume 10 saal jail me kaatna pada jisse hum apne bete Bilal se door rahe. Ab Bilal bhi Zoya se badla lega," replied Gaffur.

"Matlab? Tumhaara aage ka plan kya hai?" asks Razia.

"Zoya ka Bilal se jabardasti shaadi karvaana. Aisa karke hum Zoya ki zindagi ko narak bana denge," replied Gaffur.

"Brilliant idea. Hum Zoya ko ye good news Bilal k vapas aane k baad hi denge," said Razia wid an evil smile.

They hi-fived n laughed @ d plan.

Zoya has changed d robbery attire to a red sleeveless T-Shirt n black jeans. She is sitting on her bed lost in thoughts.

"Muje yaha se nikalne ka koi na koi raasta dhundna hoga," said Zoya to herself.

"Par kya?" asked Zoya to herself, "Maine isse pehle 3 baar try ki hai par humesha pakdi jaati hu aur fir mere saath bura hota hai. 1 baar to aaj hi try ki bank me apna helmet nikaalne ka par pakdi gayi. Agar main inse lad-jhagad padu ya kisi cheez protest karu to ye muje bahot tang karte hai par muje yaha se baahar nikalna hi padega."

Zoya recalled wen she tried to escape for d 1st time by trying to go out of d house on d 1st day but Razia saw her as she was abt to open d main door. Razia got angry n slapped her. Zoya slapped her back n pushed her but Razia shouted calling her husband n others. Zoya was then locked in d basement for a day widout food or water. On her 2nd attempt on d 2nd night, Zoya came out of d house @ night wen evry1 slept but she was caught by d guards near d main gates who informed d Siddiquis abt it. Zoya was then slapped n beaten by d couple. Zoya also recalls 2day's threat of Razia warning her dat if she again tries to act smart then it vl not be good. Zoya shudders thinking of dat.

"Main karu to kya karoon?" asked Zoya to herself, "Yaha main akele itne khatarnaak logon k beech kya kar sakti hu aur unse kaise bhaag sakti hu? In logon ne mera saara saamaan bhi le liya hai. Mere paas mera apna cell-phone tak nahi hai jisse main ghar call kar saku."

Zoya then comes of her room. She steals a cell 4m a servant's pocket widout his knowledge using her pick-pocketing skills. She then hides in a corner. She dials her sister's number. Zeenat receives d call wid an unknown but answers it anyway.

"Hello," said Zeenat.

"Hello di, main Zoya. Plz, muje bacha lo," said Zoya.

Zeenat got worried.

"Zoya, tuje kya hua? Kaha hai tu itne din se?" asks Zeenat worriedly.

"Muje Delhi me Gaffur aur Razia Siddiqui naam k criminals ne kidnap kar liya hai. Muje nahi pata main kaha hu. Plz, muje bacha lo. Ye sab bahot khatarnaak hai. Ye mujse jabardasti robbery aur pick-pocketing bhi karvaate hai," said Zoya in a frightened voice.

Zoya then sees dat d servant 4m whom she stole d cell was around. Zoya quietly moves 4m there unknown to him.

"Zoya, r u there?" asked Zeenat but Zoya cuts d call.

She decides to quietly place d cell on d floor to make it look like d cell fell 4m d servant's pocket. As she placed cell on d floor, another servant saw her. He came near her n picked up d cell 4m d floor. Zoya got very shocked but while standing up, she purposely pushed d servant a bit to make d cell fell down n some water 4m d jug he was holding in his other hand fell on cell causing it to destroy so dat none gets to know dat she made a cell but she made it luk like an accident. Zoya was still very afraid of wat wud happen to her.

"Tum iss cell k saath yaha kya kar rahi thi?" asked d servant.

"Kuch nahi, ye cell neeche gira tha," replied Zoya.

"Aur tum ise uthaane jaa rahi. Hai na?" asked d servant.

Zoya became quiet due to shock unable to think wat to say.

Scene shifts to Zeenat's home. She is talking wid Anwar abt Zoya. She tells him abt Zoya calling her n teln her dat she is kidnapped by Gaffur n Razia Ahmed Siddiqui.

"Anwar, muje bahot darr lag raha hai. Kuch to karo na. Zoya bahot badi musibat me hai. Usse thik se baat bhi nahi ho paayi," said Zeenat in a worried tone.

"Gaffur aur Razia Ahmed Siddiqui, ye dono to bahot bade criminals hai jo 10 saal jail me the chhote bacchon ko kidnap karke unse chori karaane aur pocket marvaane k liye. Ye dono jail Zoya aur uske bachpan ka dost Asad Ahmed Khan k vajah se gaye the," said Anwar.

"Haan Anwar, us waqt vo dono sirf 8 saal k the. Un dono ko bhi baaki bacchon ki tarah kidnap kar liye the. Muje lagta hai Siddiquis ne Zoya ko kisi tarah pehchaan liya hai aur vo usse badla lene k liye use kidnap kiye hai," said Zeenat getn more worried.

"Zeenat, calm down," said Anwar.

"How can I calm down, Anwar?" asked Zeenat worriedly, "Zoya is in danger."

"Zeenat, hum Zoya ko dhundne k liye kuch na kuch jarur karenge," said Anwar.

"To jaldi karo na. Pata lagao kisi tarah ki Zoya kahan hai," said Zeenat, "Pat nahi vo Zoya k saath kya kya kar rahe honge," said Zeenat beginning to cry.

Anwar hugged her for comfort.

"Don't worry, dear. Zoya ko hum bahot jald dhundlenge," said Anwar comforting her.

Scenes shifts to d Siddiqui's house. Zoya, Gaffur, Razia, servant 4m whom Zoya stole d cell, servant who caught her n some others were there in d hall.

"Sir, acchha hua maine ise time pe dekh liya nahi to ye us gire huve cell ko jarur utha leti thi," said d servant who caught Zoya.

"Pata nahi mera cell kaise mere pocket se gir gaya aura b mera cell bhi kharaab ho gaya iss Zoya k vajah se," said d servant 4m whom Zoya stole d cell.

"Tumhaari himmat to badhte hi jaa rahi hai, Zoya. Tum uske gire huve cell ko uthaakar apne ghar call karnewaali thi na?" asked Razia in an angry tone.

Zoya did not answered.

"Answer me," barked Razia.

"I am sorry," said Zoya in a frightened tone.

"U r going to be surely sorry for wat u did," said Razia, "Maine tumse kaha tha na ki koi chalaaki mat karna varna acchha nahi hoga par tumne meri baat nahi maani."

"Lagta hai iski chamdi bahot moti hai(meaning dat sum1 who is not easily affected) isliye to ispar itni baar pakde jaane aur tumhaare warning ka bhi koi asar nahi hua," said Gaffur.

"Iss moti ki chamdi ka ilaaj bhi moti chamdi se hi karna padega," said Razia.

"Matlab?" asks Zoya in horror.

"Matlab tumhe pata chal hi jaayega, darling," replied Razia wid a smirk.

"Tumne kisi ka cell use karne ki koshish ki taaki tum yaha se chhutkaara paa sako isliye tumhe iski bahot badi saza bhugatni hogi," said Gaffur in a stern tone.

"Kya karoge tum sab mere saath?" asked Zoya timidly.

"Abhi pata chal jaayega," replied Gaffur while lukn @ a whip which was kept on a table.

Zoya sees him lukn @ d whip. She recalls Gaffur n Razia's 'moti chamdi dialogue' moments ago n gets very scared.

Precap: #Zoya is whipped n locked in storeroom for 2 days wid 1 meal a day.

#Bilal returns home wid a new face due to his face disfigured in d accident n also memory loss. Zoya is made to share Bilal's room as she will soon get married to him.


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Very interesting !!

Looking forward to the Updates...

Continue Soon ...

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Interesting Story-line
Awesome First Part
Looking Forward for Updates
And I guss it was Asad who came in place of Bilal to rescue Zoya
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i reallyy liked it!! do continue soon!
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Originally posted by: Aishwa09

Very interesting !!

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