#2||AsYa FF: Strings, Tying Us Together||CH Twenty Five(B) ~Pg 146 - Page 81

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Aditi... 😊
Well Finally we got an update to this story...and Iam Thankful to you for that...😳
The Update was long due...And I deliberately ignored your earlier post..😉 because I don't believe in that...😳
This Update was Wonderfully written👏 , Fantastic... ⭐️ and a Very Good part..👏
Zoya's fear and state in which she was found was very horrible..and painful..
I feel anger rush through me...when I read such news in real life also.. about molestations...then anger at myself...ki Iam just wasting my energy commenting on that subject not doing much about the issue... 😡
But the whole first part was a very well written scene...AsYa's confrontation , Hug...then Zoya telling about this incident.. Asad's rage...Ayaan's advice and then the ride back home...very good executed part... 👏
Ayaan seemed quite matured...here but he still have that innocent mischeviouness in his thinking... 😛
Zoya's monologues about Asad's behaviour were funny to read...but right also... 😳
All and all a brilliant comeback chapt for this story Aditi... 👏
Loved and enjoyed reading it... ⭐️😊
Continue soonish... 😃
# Update ArSh's also...soon.😛