SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED - Page 26

Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: Ihopelove

Hi, interesting story. Loved it. Finally four of them reuniet.

Asad is right its not commando. I really doubt on zoya. Her behavior is fishy. Somethings definatly wrong with her.

I loved full of suspence n thrilling stories.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: BurstingBubble

Hello again Saima Di,

This is such an amazing story...

The thrill, the suspense and the emotions... everything's sooo perfect😳

The reuinion of the AZ family... Beautiful

AsYa's kiss☺️

...but is it really him...I don't think it is'. This really makes sense. It might not be the commando.

Anyways,

Loved the chapter

Continue sooon😳

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Sorry for late comment😛

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

So, Zoya finally met her family😃

Zoya is so smart n tomboy type😉

Zoya ke actions ko dekhkar kabhi kabhi lagta tha ki vo aurat nahi aadmi qki vo sab kitne achhe se lead kar rahi thi aur Asad ko double seat bithai thi apne bike pe😆

Commander ko kaise pata chalta hai ki AZ team kaha kaha jaati hai aur uske kaise pata ki bacche bade hone k baad kaise dikhte hai?❓

Asad n Zoya talks were emotional n lovely😃

Loved AsYa's various kisses😳

Originally posted by: H.e.n.a

Again a brilliant concept!! Nice story. They decded to part. Hope nothing bad happens..

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy

Aapi !!!!!!! 🤗
This is awesome !!! 😲 new story + fresh storyline + AsYa ! What can i ask for more ?!
Loved the concept and its amazing to see the bonding of ZAZA ! 😳
Here Asad and Zoya r already in love ! ❤️

Love u Aapi !! 🤗 mwah ! ❤️

(PS : can't sleep so thought of coming and checking upon ur stories ! 😉 )