New Asad-Zoya FF - Page 9

Nice and interesting prologue. Why dint u send me a PM.

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wow new story :-D :-D :-D
I just love ur writing... Heartbeat warfare is my fvrt ff..
Plz write another os on it..

It was Nc prologue...
Intrstng one... I loved it..
Continue soon

Thank you.

One more OS on Heartbeat Warfare? I had planned on writing two more, but now I think they will never be written. Enjoy what we already have.

Originally posted by: Amin21

New asya ff ?!

Yeppieee👏

party time

Sound very very interesting😛

do continue and pm

love it

waiting for the update

Thank you.
Will PM you.

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Hi, Good morning.

I am a fan of yours and loved the heart beat warfare. I read it(at least a part of it ) everyday.

When I saw that you are writing a new FF i am on cloud nine. My only request is please update in regular intervals.

Loved the prologue. waiting for the story to unfold. pl.update soon.

Thank you very much.

I will try my best to update at regular intervals. But I can already feel that this story will require lots of work just like Heartbeat Warfare.

Originally posted by: Noe123

Hey, thanks.

If it seems confusing that's because I had not fleshed out complete storyline and I wrote just based on a broad idea. Yes, it will become clear as the story progresses.

Heyy...Again Noe..
Well just talking about your other works...
What about the O.S"s on Heartbeat warfare...and the NAVRAS SERIES of yours...?

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Heyy...Again Noe..
Well just talking about your other works...
What about the O.S"s on Heartbeat warfare...and the NAVRAS SERIES of yours...?

Heartbeat Warfare OS's are most probably not happening.

Navras series - it will be mostly series of short stories/one shots. Haven't got a chance to work on it.

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

The last phase of Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes.

I am not so sure how I feel about that.

Oh Noe. It's coming to that again...The letting go part.

Every step now will be extra cherished!

Okay I'm crazy. But you did this. What with your style and story and simplicity of it all.

Love.

You are little crazy, but I like crazy like a crazy person likes crazy. 😉😊

*******

Now now.

That scene from You've Got Mail remains one of the few that affects me even today. The sense of loss is palpable.

It is...

And then there was Meg Ryan.

And more because it is Meg Ryan. Isn't she always as happy as daisy flowers? When she feels lost, it is something 😒

And then you mentioned Anna Kendrick in Up in the Air. Her role there got me to take her as a serious actor. Not your typical Disney role kind. I mean this made Pitch Perfect more than just a musical. She's got it. That X factor thing people rave about.

Have you watched 50/50? Somewhat an extension of sorts I feel to her character in Up in the Air.

Actually, I haven't seen her any other movie. Now because you are saying it, I will check out those movies. I didn't even remember name of the actor. I remembered character.

Okay so. My point is... I see Zoya in these characters. Very Zoya.

And then you posted this.

When I thought Zoya in this story. Anna's character just popped in my head so maybe even I connected them at some level without me knowing.

Anyway.

I remember how you find Asad more writable and relatable and explorable and you just get him...but this is not quite the situation with Zoya.

And now look! With your characters, you've matured too. Going the depth and exploring possibilities. And yes Zoya.

Thank you. Yes, Asad is Asad. I love to write him, explore him and I get him instinctively, while Zoya always proved illusive. But working with Emma really helped. That was one of my aim in writing 'Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes'. With every story that I write, I want to improve as a writer and try out new things, so, yes, ready to explore Zoya and frankly to do so I will have to go well beyond show-Zoya which IMHO was not a properly developed character. Wait...I already did that with Emma/Zoya, but need to go even beyond that.

I am already excited with anticipation of just how this is to unfold. Just how. And really. Zoya a lawyer.

So...If medicine is your thing, and not law...then maybe this would be the right time to tell you that...While I'm absolutely not sure how this would help, law happens to be a thing for me. Yes, I say this with uh, disdain (and fine a lil lost pride)!

But really. ...this is just to say that I count on your creative liberties. I need. Take all the liberties you need. Just gimme this fine story.

So, law is your thing? In this story, field of law won't be as prominent as medicine in Heartbeat Warfare. I need to know more about the profession but not exactly about the profession as in I need to know working environment, culture, career paths, etc. to add more to Zoya and Aunsha's characters. Will definitely bug you if I need help.

Khan and bookstore. Losing livelihood.

And Zoya works for the firm responsible for causing him that.

Oh this is no fun job.

No, not a fun job. Or, maybe it was in the past and not any more. Or, she was trying to keep a facade of a fun job which is now crumbling with Khan proving to be the tipping point.

Khan. Hayyyeee.

We had enough of Mr Khan..so Anusha calls him Khan, but Zoya...our Zoya here will be back to Mr Khan.

*******

You did it again Noe.

Autumn feels, you say?

;)

Mwahhh.

Thanks for this!

Thank you very much for such an enthusiastic response to this story. Being overwhelmed never gets old. Hope to keep you guys entertained and at the same time pull a heart string or two.

🤗

Originally posted by: Noe123

Heartbeat Warfare OS's are most probably not happening.

Navras series - it will be mostly series of short stories/one shots. Haven't got a chance to work on it.

Heyyy...Noe its a request...if you still have ideas on those O.S...plzz...continue them...not now may be later...
And A Title for this story ?

Originally posted by: jas91

Hey Noe another story

I m loving😃

Zoya lawyer something new & unimaginable from bubbly Zoe😆

Asya lost his livelihood now some struggle period ahead😲

Khan is d man ruling her mind in prolgue hope it stays😉

I m die hard Romantic Asya fan so give me that & i m always happy😃

My fvrt fiction till now is Heartbeat ⭐️⭐️

Kuch kuch hota hai Noe tum jarur samjhogi😆😉

I know imagining Zoya in a lawyer's garb is difficult, but you know how much she argues, right? A handy skill for a lawyer. But not so handy because Zoya doesn't practice criminal or even family law, so doesn't go to court. She practices property law and corporate law - pours over contracts and wills. Won't Zoya baby get bored? 😉

Yes, tough time ahead for Asad and it is not just financially.

Ok...main woh kuchh kuchh samaj gayi.😛😆

Enjoy this story! 😃

Originally posted by: lasya13

wow!! a completely new story with zoe as lawyer!!!

am in!!!!

nyc prologue... waiting for more

Thank you 😃