~Bring Me Back To Life~ AsYa SS UPDATED!!!!! Page 30 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Nice prologue
Rashid & Dilshad came to ghafoor for asya alliance
He was shocked at first but then said them that he will talk to family first & let them know
Continue soon plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaanu013

interesting concept...asad and zoya doctors? both work at same hospital..continue soon...

thank you so much... just gonna ud part 1
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice prologue
Rashid & Dilshad came to ghafoor for asya alliance
He was shocked at first but then said them that he will talk to family first & let them know
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much.
Part 1 up in some time... stick around😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: siyasharma94

continue soon..awsm concpt

thank you... just stay tuned :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1
Only If You Want to...


They were having dinner when Ghafoor narrated the whole incident to them. Well their reactions were as expected, all of them were shocked! Shell Socked.
The dinner was a quick affair, their appetite was lost. Everyone dispersed soon as possible.

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Zoya had overheard the conversation on the dining table; she had just come out to have some water for herself as she had dinner in her room. Forgetting everything she just ran back to her room, she didn't know what to do! Where to hide... what will happen now?... Will it happen again? She just slid by the wall contemplating the possibilities of what would happen next. Tears started to flow uncontrollably out of her eyes as she held her head between her hands. Fear engulfing her once again.

She looked up, her body stiffening as the door knob turned, but as the door opened slowly, she knew who it was, her body relaxed.
Muskaan, her only friend, her Bhabhi, entered the room. As she came closer her heart twisted to see her in this condition.
"Zoya... are you OK?", she said sliding down beside her, she knew that zoya had heard the conversation.
"Bha-bhi I didn't... wo me ne nahi... ab..ab kya ho ga bhabi?", she said crying.
"Shhh bacha... relax me hoon na, I won't let anything happen ok?", she tried to console her.
They were in the middle of this conversation when the door opened again, Zoya's whole body turned ice seeing her brother there. What now?, she thought.
As he took closer steps, her tears flowed faster and she started sobbing frantically.
"I didn't... Please no...please I didn't", she said palming her whole face in the anticipation of what might happen.
"Don't worry, me...me sirf ye kehne aya tha k wohi ho ga jo tum chahti ho", Raheel, her brother, said and went away, although he should have said more but then... only if...

"Dekha Zoya, I said kuch nahi ho ga, chalo ab yahan ao", Muskaan helped her to the bed.
"Tell me zoya, do you want us to say yes?", Muskaan asked with utmost affection.
Zoya's eyes shot up. They were red. Blood shot red. She didn't know what to say. She didn't know why had Asad sent his parents in the first place.

"I want to talk to Asad first", she spoke finally. Muskaan knew this was end to this discussion for the time being. After some more time of consolation she left her alone for some peaceful sleep. Little did she know that Zoya never slept peacefully the whole night ever since that day.

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"I want to talk to you", she said as she spotted him in the locker room.
Asad smiled and turned around, His dimples appeared as he saw her ever so beautiful face, and although they hardly ever talked other than work Asad was very fond of Zoya and well he himself never knew when he had fallen for her. But there was something in this sinfully beautiful woman that twitched his heart, something deep, in her eyes. Something that was there but it never came out. And whatever it was, He just wanted to throw it out of her life.

"Yeah sure", he said flashing his megawatt smile. "Coffee?"
"Umm no... I mean... can we...just", she fumbled.
"Ohk! I'll just meet you on the terrace in about five minutes?", he offered sighing.
This was one thing about her, whenever she was around him or any of the guys of her own age group she would fumble like anything and on the contrary she would be as confident in front of the seniors or elders, be it the doctors or the patients.

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"So what is it that you wanted to talk about zoya", Asad asked once they managed to be in a secluded corner of the hospital terrace.
"You sent your parents over?", she asked coming straight to the point, yet looking anywhere but him.
"Well", he said "I told you that-"
"Please Asad!", she cut him, while he noticed a shadow cross her eyes making his heart stop. "I...I cannot do it..." she finalized.
"Kyun?", defeat visible in his every pore.
"Asad I ... I cannot... I am not kind of a person you or any-anyone would like to spend rest of their lives with, I am no one Asad...no one! I don't have a life, nothing outside these white walls of the hospital", she finished crying and turned to leave...
"Zoya please ruk jao", he held her by her shoulders and turned her around "please zoya, I'll keep you as happy, me...me tumhe bohot pyar karta hoon, or bohot pyar karun ga... Hamesha... ", his eyes pleading.
The truth had been spoken before he could even think of holding it back!
"As-ad", she looked at him baffled.
He stopped and looked at her while she turned and left, not missing the Honesty dripping from every single pore of his beautiful face.

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OK everyone, here is part 1!
I know it is short but then it is the preamble of what is coming next!
I hope you like it. Do give me you precious opinions.

P.S: Please add me for the PMs

Regards,
Nayab
Edited by janaa_way - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
There you go...
Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Interesting Plot
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its good U see U back with an update 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Anticipate the narrative progressing further!
Edited by p_s05 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nice plot..
Liked it... Do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Nayaab its an interesting concept
I loved it so much

Why is all behaving wierd of Asad's marriage proposal?😲

Is Zoya an orphan?

Pls update soon

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