AaHer OS - Hasta La Vista, Dude.

Anisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hey, this was awesome !!

First time?? No way...

You sound like a pro !👏

Loved it!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: sageflower7

Hey, this was awesome !!
First time?? No way...

You sound like a pro !👏

Loved it!!

Thanks for liking it! 😳

Such an honour, coming from you. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi
nice

Thanks! 😃

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Originally posted by: navk
omg this is amazing

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fanraya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

😆😆 This is awesome, dude???😉😆 Amazing... Loved it..😃

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Originally posted by: fanraya
😆😆 This is awesome, dude???😉😆 Amazing... Loved it..😃

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Uzma Ahmed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Awesome OS👏 loved it😳

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sahil333

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Mehak ! 🤗 . Lovely writing and this is your first time ever? 👏 .

But, but, why isn't Aahil angry at Seher . He can't only be angry at her when Sanam will be hurt? Knowing Aahil from the show, he would be furious that his wife has been kidnapped. Oh, I've missed that he's truly PISSED OFF 😔! He's too soft here for my liking, coz Seher is still a stranger in his house roaming around.

And to investigate in the morning? Kidnapping his wife is a very serious business and I wished he had done it right away for a moment and then get some rest and later continue it the next day. I wanna see his angst and going crazy.

Alright, waiting for the next part. I wanna see a very pissed off Aahil. 😉

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kyph21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

mehak,
-Amazing OS, is this ur first attempt?? u write like a pro👏
-even i found aahil's reactions a little tame,but then maybe he can beat up the gunda's holding sanam captive
- As for seher, like her swag dude😉
best part is when seher thinks she needs to send all the people in the Ibrahim mansion to the mental asylum😆
keep it up, beautifully written, do continue soon
P.S: gamer?? so you😆

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Pagalpinky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Haha love it

Seher swears too much for my liking but otherwise love her pizza eating, fun loving, no care in the world character! She's hilarious

Ahil dreaming about his sanam. I really hope that's how they show us our sanam ahil scenes all in a dream and make reality all comedy. Qubool hai always did comedy so well. And if they make it all serious please please do write more so we can read your amazing creative funny stories.

Thanks tons! Do you have an index of your other work? If not please make one and write write write. You're great

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