ASYA FF - Battle of Memories *Complete* Notes on Pg 90

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

awesome

loved it

so its not zoya's marriage that is happening

its humeira's

but its whose name zoya's ring have with initial A

plz update soon

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Amulya

@Amulya9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

wohoo..this story is always very interesting...
OMG my Zoya baby tried 2 committ suicide..
n asad slapped her ...
aw he called her Zoya...
he's such a sweetheart... soo honest...
bt y he's worrying abt that evil tanveer ..make him forget her completely 🤢
this car vl cause trouble 2 them...
keep my babies safe n I loved asad last line...
continue soon

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

very nice

double updates

loved them

update soon

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

just read all parts together.

very interesting

please continue soon

if possible can u pm me

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

double treat i loved

it was amazing

Asad slapped her

I thought he'll say she's his wife

this way he can help her & himself 2

continue soon

enjoyed reading it😊

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Nice updates
Asad saved Zoya & slapped her. He made her realise the importance of life. Imran wanted to marry humeira bc of her money. Zoya was the hurdle along with her brother. Asad told her that he will find out abt her soon. She smiled. Asad told her that he won't believe her so he will sleep with her. Zoya shocked. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

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Gisel

@Gisel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Yes jas!

Even I wanted him to tell her that she was his wife, but didn't know how to go about it. So changed it!

Thank you all for your encouragement!!!

Edited by Gisel - 10 years ago

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Gisel

@Gisel

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

*****Part 5 - Page 7
Episode 6
She got up in utter shock, "What?"

He casually replied, "I'll sleep on the couch here and you sleep in the bed. I don't want to take risks. Then I'll be the one to land up in jail."

She looked at him little annoyed at the last sentence and then realized what he said was true. It had to be freaky to find a nameless girl and the girl attempts suicide in his own house. She felt foolish for having attempted suicide, when she looked at the sleeping face of Asad on his couch, facing her.

With eyes closed, he said, "Sleep. Please don't do anything foolish." She smiled and rested her face on the pillow, facing him, admiring him in his sleep. Slowly, sleep caught up with her.
It was barely one hour, someone started banging at the door frantically. It was Zoya who woke up first. She got up. The banging was obvious, not small knocks. Asad also woke up irritated, "Who on earth is itt..?". He turned to look at the girl, who was looking frightened. She asked, "Who? Why?" He sat up straight, "Don't worry! I'll check." He got up and went to the bedroom door. He turned and told her, "Don't come out." and he went out.
He opened the door. He found an anxious Ayaan standing there, "Ayaan?" As soon as Ayaan saw Asad, he let out a sigh of relief. Asad looked confused, "What happened?" He answered him sarcastically, "I should ask you that! What happened? The night duty police found your bike and mobile in the alley. Since it is my jurisdiction I went there and do you know how freaked out I was?" Asad had almost forgotten about it, "Oh that! Woh...actually...sorry for the trouble." Ayaan couldn't accept it, "You are a man of law too. You are an undercover cop. How could you? No courtesy to call and tell me." Asad, "Arhe. I didn't have my mobile also. I thought I would tell you tomorrow." Ayaan looked a little satisfied with the answer, but, "Why aren't you inviting me inside?" he asked him suspiciously. Asad looked at him debating within himself if he should allow him. Ayaan didn't seem interested in going in, he asked him, "Are you alright? What is that car outside? Looks pretty costly." The girl seemed to have trouble with the police, so he decided not to tell him anything, "What car? Not mine. Go home. I'm very tired", slamming the door at him. Ayaan looked shocked at his behavior. They were friends and this was a usual thing; slamming the door on the other's face, but definitely not in this kind of situation. Ayaan left the place, determined to investigate later.
Asad went back inside the room. He saw Zoya standing with crossed hands, fully awake, "You are a police, right? Why didn't you tell me?" Asad, walked towards her, "I just work undercover and technically no one should know it. Then why should I tell you?", He went closer to her, that she had to walk back till she hit the wall. He went so close to her that her heart started beating fast.
"So, now you know."
"So?", she managed to ask.
He put his hands on the wall jailing her.She couldn't believe her eyes. This man, who was so quiet and calm all this while, what was he doing now? He went closer to her. Look at those intense eyes! Oh my God, what am I thinking?Frightened, she asked, "What...what...are going to do?"He looked at her sarcastically, "I think I have to kill you for this."

She pushed him forward, "What? No!" and looking here and there for a weapon of protection.He started laughing, "What a changeover! One minute you wanted to kill yourself and now this. Just go sleep!"
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"Get up! Get up!"Zoya was shoving Asad. Pulling up the bed cover over his face, he said, "Just 5 more minutes!""Huh? Wake up, Asad."He woke up irritated at the nagging. He looked at his watch, "Come on! It is just 8 and it is a Sunday.", going back to his bed.Zoya, "Wake up, Asad. You have to go to the RTO office."Asad sat up straight, "Ok! Fine! Stop nagging me! You are worse than my mother."Zoya pouted childishly. He woke up and went to the washroom to freshen up. He came out and saw her sitting in the bed, worried. He saw that she was looking cute and childish. He then shook the thought of his mind, "I'll go buy breakfast and come." She looked up, "What? Why? Don't you cook at home." Asad nodded his head no.She got up, "Well! I took the liberty to make food today."Asad, "Really? What did you make?"Zoya replied, "Yes! Some home made pizza.", making her way to the dining room.Asad, "Really?" following her, "Pizza for breakfast?!", though still enjoying the aroma.Zoya, "It's quite healthy.""Ya! Very!", he answered sarcastically; nevertheless sat down to eat, "Thank you, Zoya. Even more weird. You can remember how to cook and not remember your name?" Asad immediately regretted it. But, Zoya just smiled sadly, "Eat fast. You should go to the RTO office.""Why are you living alone? Don't you have a family?" Asad who was enjoying his breakfast, stopped eating. Zoya realized she had stuck the wrong cord, "I'm sorry. I just wanted to know. Sorry if I disturbed you. Eat." Asad saw how disappointed she was. He hated himself for that. He didn't know why he had the feeling to make her happy always. He smiled and continued eating, "Nothing as such. I'm the only son. Ammi is in Bhopal. She wants me to get married so I kind of ran away. Not exactly, because this house in Delhi is still a family house." Zoya silently said, "Oh! Why not? I mean, do you have a girl friend? or something?" Asad stopped eating again.Zoya, "Who will you marry?" she didn't know why but she wanted an answer to that question, but didn't know what answer she expected.
Asad smiled again, weakly though, "No one." he said silently. Zoya blinked in surprise, "No one? Why?" she insisted. She didn't realize she was invading his personal space. But he was bothered the least.Asad, "Well I don't know. When my ammi kept on pestering me, I even decided to marry my best friend. But she rejected me.I don't love her or anything. It's just that I knew her for a long time." The truth came out before he could stop himself. May be there was something about those mellow eyes that he didn't want to lie to.Zoya still not understanding, "But why? You are handsome. intelligent. kind. generous. Any girl would want to marry you. She is stupid to have missed you."Asad, "Huh?" looking at her surprised. She was eating casually. She looked up, "Do you want more?"Asad, "No", getting up, "It's time. Let's go."Zoya, "Let's go? But you said you'll go."Asad, "I can't risk you being alone here."Zoya, "No. I won't suicide. And I won't come out in this dress", looking down at her badly wrinkled dress.Asad looked at her from head and toe, "Hm..I might have a solution."He went in and brought back a cover, "Here. Take this. My ammi gave it to me to give it to my wife. Get ready fast."Zoya looked at him a little amazed at what he was saying. Did he realize that he was giving away the saree which was meant to go to his wife to her? He gave it to her and saw her expression and it looked like he had understood what he had just done.
(To be continued...)
Part 7 - Page 11
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Edited by Gisel - 10 years ago

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Nice update
Asad is undercover cop
Ayaan & asad talk was nice. Slamming door on his face was usual but his behaviour isn't
Ayaan wanted to investigate on this matter
Zoya cooked pizza in breakfast
She asked so many question abt his personal life
Asad gave her sarree which his ammi gave it to him for her DIL
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

oh my goodness...I'm here bina pm ki...
awesome update...
it was lovely...
so asad is undercover cop...wohooo
Zoe made pizza fr them.. soo sweet...
wat I liked d most in this update.. is he said that he don't love tanveer 😃
aw he gave her saree..
now they r gng 2 RTA office bt it vl create problem fr Zoya na...
pls don't seperate them...I'm in love with story
I want 2 read next update like right now...
pleeej update asap