ASYA FF - Battle of Memories *Complete* Notes on Pg 90

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

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Fabulous Update
So,Asad & Ayaan r undercover officer
&being a cop Asad runaway from his house sothat he won't have to marry some random girl but got rejected by Bl**dy B**ch Tanveer.
Seriously?
🤣 🤣 🤣 lol
Its kind of funny.
poor Asad 🤣

And love the growing bonding between AsYa

CONTINUE SOON

Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

So sweet update, i love it 😃

So Asad was a cop and he don't love tanveer, it was a bit confusing this part, I though (first chapter) he seemed madly in love with her. anyway, thanks to know that it was just to escape from his mother's demands

I love their newborn bond between them.

Thanks for the pm and continue soon

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

awesome

loved it

plz update soon

thanx for pm

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roxon

@roxon

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Good one... I hope asad is able to solve the mystery behind zoya soon before anything untoward happens to her or humeira... eagerly waiting for the next update...

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

this is getting more and more exciting day by day

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Lovely update...
well Asya have hit a comfort level unknowingly...
waiting fr more...
plz continue soon...

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

This just got a whole lot interesting, enjoying the read.

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Amazing updt😃

Asyaan r undercover agents

Zoya got scared knowing that

She cooked Pizza

he shared everything wid her

He wanted 2 make her happy

he agve her that sarri

unknowingly they r coming closer

thanx 4 PM

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Update asap. Can't wait to read more.

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Gisel

@Gisel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

*****Part 6 - Page 9
Episode 7
He was sitting in the hall, reading his newspaper. She opened the door and stood there in the door way, ''I don't want to come. You go'', she said feebly. He looked to see her draped in a beautiful cream white crepe saree with small blue flowers for a border, with simple but exotic designery. He could see that she was standing there uneasily. He got up. She went back hitting herself in the closed door of the bedroom. It was very evident that she was uncomfortable. He said, ''But, you have to come!'' and left the house expecting her to follow. To his surprise she didn't. He went back in, saying, ''You are the one who is wasting time now.'' She didn't budge. He got annoyed and held her hand to pull her. She just made herself free from his hold but didn't move, ''Don't come near me!'' Asad looked annoyed and confused at the same time, ''Huh? What's your problem?'' ''Woh...actually...This saree...this is..hm..'' being uncomfortable again. ''Oh my God, I thought you had a serious problem. This saree looks nice on you. Now come'', again holding her hand. She glared at him that he looked taken aback, ''Did I say the problem is with the saree?''''Then?'' Being more uneasy, she mouthed something. ''What?'' ''..blouse hook is in the back..'' ''What?'', not hearing it properly. She repeated the same but this time very loud that he started being uneasy. She continued, ''I managed the hook..but..the dori..I can't tie it..." slightly turning.Her hair covered her back. Unwillingly and slowly, Zoya took her hair and put it in the front. She closed her eyes tightly and bit her lips. She liked him but this was too fast, too fast; that she wished didn't happen. She felt weak. But, she had no other option. Asad could feel himself going weak. He could feel his lips going dry. Was he starting to sweat? He wiped his forehead, as he saw her. He couldn't help noticing the nape of her neck and the 'Z' tattoo. He slowly took his hand to hold the dori. He saw that his hands were shivering. He looked away and then swallowed and turned back again and took the threads and tied them in a knot. Unknowing to him, a smile escaped his face and he silently cursed his ammi under his breath. His finger-tips brushed by her shoulders when he was tying it. An electric shock crept through her and she jerked, which he noticed. She closed her eyes feeling more embarrassed.

When she knew it was done, breathing in and out, she turned to go, thinking he would have left by now. But, she bumped her head into his. Both of them rubbed their heads; looking at each other. She looked at him. He was looking at her keenly. She noticed that his look had softened. Was he also starting to like her? Casually she looked at him, he was looking at her with the same look. It was getting creepier, now. Why was he looking at her like that? Again she gave a casual look to see if he was still looking at her; he was. This time she kind of felt that he wasn't looking at her face but...in a sudden moment of realization she took a step back and crossed her hands over her chest. He became annoyed and looked up to her face and then he realized that he might have given a wrong impression. He took a step closer and put one hand on the door railing above and took the other hand next to her..."Stop! What are you doing?", closing her eyes tightly and looking down.He didn't answer. He held her chin and made her look up. She also slowly loosened at his touch, though inside she was fighting within herself to not yield in to whatever he does.

With their breathing deepening and heart pumping faster, he brought his lips to her lips and slowly kissed her, holding her cheeks in place. She couldn't resist it, but no; this wasn't right! She didn't know him! She didn't know her! No!"No!""Wait."She opened her eyes to see him standing with his hand on the door railing only. It was her imagination. She let out a sigh of relief. Now that she knew he hadn't kissed her, she didn't mind a kiss from him. He held her chin and made her look up. She opened her eyes wide. That was an imagination, right? But this? Was this for real? Then, he slowly took his hands down her neck to her pendant and said, "This looks like a pen-drive." and he removed the pendant and it came of easily and indeed it was a pen-drive.

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Password incorrect
Only one more trial allowed.
Asad turned to look at Zoya who was leaning on the chair and looking at the computer screen."Is this really necessary? No driver's license. No identification. Finally we find a pen drive and it is password protected...arggh...", hitting the table with his fist.She looked at him with a puppy face. He got annoyed and got up, "Come. Let's go to the RTO office.""One minute."He turned to look at her."Promise me that you will never leave me. Promise me that you will always be by my side."Asad looked confused.She held out her hand asking a promise.Breathing out, he went and kept his hand over hers...
(To be continued...)
Part 8 - Page 14
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Edited by Gisel - 10 years ago