ASYA FF - Battle of Memories *Complete* Notes on Pg 90

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 11 years ago

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😊awesome story...plz pm me..

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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice update
Waiting for story to unfold so many questions answered
Continue soon. Thanks

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Zoe is quite a mystery here, why would she want to commit suicide without attempting to discover her identity?...

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Sanjhari

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Posted: 11 years ago

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getting more and more interesting day by day

loved it

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

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sorry 4 late reply was not here

God Zoya was trying 2 commit suicide

Poor girl felt bad 4 her

Tanveer clearly doesn't acre 4 Asad

God knows why Asad loves her

continue soon

its getting interesting😊

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Gisel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Thanks for the lovely reviews!

I'm so sorry for such a late update!

I guess I owe you two chapters😉!

Read n Review!

Thanks! Love you guys!

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Gisel

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Posted: 11 years ago

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*****Part 3- Page 5
Episode 4
She slowly let go off the blanket with tears. He blinked his eyes thinking if it was a dream. He rubbed his eyes again expecting it to be a dream, but it wasn't. The girl was standing there holding the blanket to her hands crying. He went near her. She got down from the bed and stood right in front of him. She was still weeping. He kept one hand on his pocket and one on his head and then on his lips and then his chin and then
*SLAP* *SLAP* *SLAP*
Right. Left. Right.
She fell on the bed because of the force.
"What is wrong with you? Do you know how precious life is? Hello. Life is not what you think it is. Even you can predict when you will get money and when you will lose it. But life?! Instead of being thankful for being saved after that accident, is this what you want to do? One day, life will disappear without your permission. Every man born is going to die. Can't you wait for that? Can't you live till then? WHAT'S YOUR PROBLEM?"She got up, "Don't you know? Well yes, you do not know. Who am I? Do you know?" holding his collar, "WHO AM I?" crying even harder, "I don't know my parents. I don't know if I'm married or not. I don't know anything about me. I don't even know my name. Why should I live? For whom should I live?" Asad looked helplessly at her; for a moment, he had forgotten of what she was actually going through.
"Listen!"
She let out a smile, "See. You have to say, 'listen'. I don't even have a name", turning around walking away from him in despair. He called out, "Zoya!"
She stopped walking.
"Zoya, listen to me", she turned to look at him.
Asad went near her and held her shoulders, looked into her eyes and said, "This is your name. Zoya."
Feebly she asked,"Zoya?"
"Yes. Zoya."
"You know me, right? Tell me everything! Please! I can't go through this hell! Please tell me that you know me", looking back into his eyes with new found hope.
(To be continued...)
Part 5 - Page 7
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Gisel

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Posted: 11 years ago

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*****Part 4 - Page 7
Episode 5
In the same marriage house, in the groom's room, A lady, "Son, this is just an eyewash marriage. This marriage is very important for our political party. We need money to flow in from Gaffur's business into our political party. You know all this, dear. As soon as the business gets transferred to your name you'll divorce her. Don't get too attached to that sad girl Humeria. Understood Imran?"
"Yes, mother.."
An elderly man comes inside, "Listen to your mother, Imran this marriage is very important", he turns his wife, "Haseena, that girl..", browing his forehead to remember her name, "..arhe, that Humeria's friend, I forgot her name. Our men have not been able to find her. If at all any problem happens it is going to be only because of her brother or her."
Imran, "I saw her take Humeria's car and go, today morning. File a report that the car is missing. In no time the police will find her."
The lay proudly says, "This is my boy! This is Haseena's son! Did you see how brilliant he his?", patting his back.
Her husband smiles and says, "I want this marriage to happen at any cost. Go to sleep. It's going to be a big day tomorrow."
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"Tell me, Asad", holding his collar but this time without any anger, "Tell me that you know me. Tell me that you are just playing with me thinking that I'm playing with you. Tell me that you know me,Asad. Tell me that you know me", tears welling up again as she looked down. She had this sudden urge to hug him tight as if he really was hers. Asad looked at her pain and stood helpless. He was going through a difficult phase too, his best friend had told him that she was leaving the country and the thought that he would miss her and with his parents forcing him to get married soon, had made him ask her to marry him. To which she rejected and told him never to talk to him again. He had just lost his best friend this morning, but this girl in front of him had lost her past, her name, her whole identity.
He slowly said, "Zoya..."
She looked up at him, "Huh?"
"Zoya. I don't know who you are. I don't know where you are from. I have no idea what your name is."
She looked at him more confused and let go off his collar, "But, forgetting your past doesn't mean you should give up your future!"
She looked down again as if she wasn't interested in what he was saying, "Zoya..""Why do you call me 'Zoya'? Is there someone special in your life by the name 'Zoya'?" looking at him. He looked at her childish, sparkling eyes, with the teary effect; for a moment lost in them.
"No. Not at all. Just guessing it. Your real name could be Zoya."
"How?", being enthusiastic like a new student getting to learn new things.
"Well. Your ring. It looks like a 'Z' So your name must start with 'Z". It can't be your husband's name, because I don't see a mangalasutra. And wedding rings don't look like this."
She looked at the ring, "Hm..ya..I missed the 'no mangalasutra' part. But is this really 'Z'? It's got a 'A' too."
He held her hand to take a closer look, her heart skipped a beat and she looked at him, for the first time, properly.
He was the first and rather the only person she knew now and somehow she felt that this man here, who stood in front of her, was enough for her whole lifetime.
She heard him say,"Let it be 'Z' only. You even have a tatoo with just 'Z'" touching the nape of her neck to indicate it to her. A cold tingle crept slowly down her back, she closed her eyes . He looked up and she turned away, "..uh..", she managed to say, "My name could be any name starting with 'Z', why specifically 'Zoya'?" regaining her voice.
"Very simple. 'Zoya' means 'gift of God'. And that's what I see you as". He turned to remove the blanket from the fan. She kept observing him. He had saved her from the accident. He had taken her into his house when he knew that she was in danger. He was courteous to let her sleep in air conditioning while he slept in the hall. He had saved her the second time. He looked handsome for the first time. "...Zoya, I checked your car but I couldn't find any details. Weirdly, not even a driver's license. Tomorrow, I'll go to the RTO office and find out about the car address and we will easily find your family. Don't worry and go to sleep. Ok? Zoya?"
"Huh? Ya. Thank you."
He gave the blanket to her, "Use this for what it is used", and went out of the room.
She sat down on the bed, smiling; for the first time.

He came in suddenly, making her jerk, "What happened?"
"I don't believe you...hm...what if you do something again?", thinking with his hand on his chin, "...hm...we should sleep together."
WHAT?
Zoya blinked her eyes wondering if she had heard him right?
SLEEP TOGETHER? WAS THAT WHAT HE JUST SAID?
(To be continued...)
Part 6 - Page 9
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Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago

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Abi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

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well it was pretty Amazing Dobbule Update
LOVED IT

PS: thanks for PM&Please Update Soon

Edited by -ABI- - 11 years ago

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love.asad.zoya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

It is awesome !!!!! Ahh it's wonderful ❤️
I loved it ... Asad is so sweet 😳
Zoya ???? She is mysterious but its good 😛
Plss update soon and update fast 😃