ASYA FF - Battle of Memories *Complete* Notes on Pg 90

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#411

pls update soon
cant wait for next

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#412

Completely unpredictable and awesome chapter... Loved it

I guess if I didn't knew about it... I would have slapped him hard 😆

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#413

we are on page 60 now
can we get next update soon

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Gisel

@Gisel

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#414

So sorry, especially Sanjhari! I'm updating!

Was held up in a stupid class!

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Gisel

@Gisel

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#415

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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Gisel

@Gisel

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#416

I had to review my self for this part! Just loved it!

Originally posted by: Gisel
"Zoya," cautiously and hesitantly he placed his left hand on her stomach and applied a little pressure. She jerked at his touch and unfolded her hands; looking utterly clueless. He held her gaze and urged her to follow his line of sight. She saw what he was looking at. On the wall, there was a picture of a baby. Her heart beat increased.
In a voice little louder than a whisper, he said, "It's true."

Edited by Gisel - 10 years ago

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Gisel

@Gisel

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#417

Zoya's reaction, quite unexpected han?

Ok! I was just dreaming and imagining myself in her shoes. That might be how I had reacted if I had sensed how much he loved me and how much I had started to like him. I don't know. I just wanted something different from the cliched slap, yelling and running away. I hope you can accept it.

Give me your genuine reviews!

Thank you so much for your reviews so far. That's what got me going!

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#418

UnRes.. 😉
Heyy Gisel... 😊
Thanx for the P.M... 😛
This was a brilliant , awesome and wonderfully written part...👏 👏⭐️
I soo agree with your views and display of Zoya's emotions on this whole incident...and i guess it suits and justify her inner turmoil also...😃 And Heyy i also said if i was at Zoya's place i also wouldn't have slapped him but yes yelling part was their..😉
Bechara Asad...there is no one to tell him also that Asad tu bechara nahi hai..
Fabulous update...👏
Continue soon.. 😛

Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago