AsYa (KaBhi) ff Mujhse Dosti Karoge! (part 14- Updated pg54)

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

good 2 see updt is long this time

enjoyed reading

u made little changes in d script

well good job😊

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loveassh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: aman1605
Hey Aarushi🤗
How r u?
Fantastic update😃
Myrah went 4 auditions🤔
Loved Zoya n Humi's convo❤️
I'm really excited to know what happens
Zoya loves Asad n Asad loves Myrah
Can't wait 4 the next part😳
Tnx 4 pm😉
Love always Aman❤️

Hii I am good

Thanx😃

Yes mayrah went for auditions because I wanted to add some AsYa moments

I will update the next part soon

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loveassh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: oldooz
amazing update
loved the flashback part so much
i'm excited to know if asad will recognize zoya when he will see her
thanks for the pm 🤗

Thanx😃

The flashback I planned because really didn't want only Zoya and Mayrah to know about the Emails the flashback will play a very important role later in AsYa's reunion or confession😃

THANX again for your comment🤗

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

wow tis is fabulous...

mindblowing...

luv it...

asya are in love with each other...

they are going to meet with each other...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

First of all,I'm sorry😭 for late comment actually I am busy with My Project Work.

Thanks for PM.

It was So Interesting and Nice Part.

Mayrah went to Mumbai for her dance auditions,So Zoya will meet Asad(KSG)it was so interesting😊Asad(KSG) and Ayyan conversation was so nice.😊

Humaria read Zoya's diary and She asked her to meet Asad(KSG),it was so nice.😊

Waiting for ASYA(KABHI) meeting.😊

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry.

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loveassh

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
First of all,I'm sorry😭 for late comment actually I am busy with My Project Work.
Thanks for PM.
It was So Interesting and Nice Part.
Mayrah went to Mumbai for her dance auditions,So Zoya will meet Asad(KSG)it was so interesting😊Asad(KSG) and Ayyan conversation was so nice.😊
Humaria read Zoya's diary and She asked her to meet Asad(KSG),it was so nice.😊
Waiting for ASYA(KABHI) meeting.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
___________________________________
(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PriyaCherry.

Its ok dear😃

Thanx for the lovely comment😃

And good Luck for your project🤗

I will update the next part soon😊

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Nice update

Thanks for clarifying it will be an asya story more

So mayrah will not love asad but asad is coming totally in love with mayrah

His beauty queen or so he think

So mayrah is gone for 2 wks so tht gives asya time hope asad see some sign in that time

So zoya is a nervous reck she has been living a lie

She loves asad but he is thinking of mayrah the person he has been writing for 10 yrs

So Humi knows hope she does something to help her out

Continue soon

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loveassh

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: anopama
Nice update
Thanks for clarifying it will be an asya story more
So mayrah will not love asad but asad is coming totally in love with mayrah
His beauty queen or so he think
So mayrah is gone for 2 wks so tht gives asya time hope asad see some sign in that time
So zoya is a nervous reck she has been living a lie
She loves asad but he is thinking of mayrah the person he has been writing for 10 yrs
So Humi knows hope she does something to help her out
Continue soon

Thanx for leaving a comment dear😃

I will continue as soon as possible😊

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loveassh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Chapter 4

Zoya's POV

I promised humz that I would tell Asad everything but I can not until Mayrah comes back when Mayrah comes back I will see what has to be done. I just hope nothing affects this friendship.

I have always loved Asad, if Loving Asad means sacrifising my Love then I'm also ready to sacrifise I know what ever happens, happens with allah's will and I'm ready to accept it.

Next morning India bhopal(on the road)

Humaira- Aapi drive a little bit fast their flight will land in 20 mins and why are u driving with 60's speed normally you drive with 120's speed I have to tell you to slow down and look today I'm telling you to drive fast are you nervous to meet your LOVE 😉(she said stressing on the word Love).

Zoya- Shut Up humz here I'm so nervous no I'm sacred no I'm happy aggghh I really don't know how I'm feeling😕

Humaira- Its okay aapi these feelings are pretty normal once you will look at your Love you will forget everything uffo I feel like I'm Your Big SIS the things you need to give me advise on I'm giving you advises on those things 😛

Zoya- hmmm we here humz go inside I will park the car and come😊

Humaira- Okay appi come soon 😃

With that humaira went inside and zoya went to find a closest parking area

Inside the Airport

Ayaan- where is every one they just left me Alone with the luggage

Asad- Ayaan miya don't worry we are here only we only went to have some coffee as the girls didn't come yet, well did you think we ran away 😆

Ayaan- well I thought you people ran back to London looking at the heat here 😆 EIiisshh its soo hot here its so much better in london

Dilshad-Shut up you two, where are these girls😕

Humaira- we are here only phupi😊

Every body turned to see a beautiful girl standing there in a pink and blue anarkali suit

Dilshad- who are you dear and you came Alone

Humaira- phupi you forgot me I'm humaira and aapi came with me she is parking her car

Dilshad- no dear how can I forget you it's just that you have gone so big and bautiful😊

Najma- Humzz 🤗Im so happy you came to fetch us I missed you said while hugging her

Humaira- naazi I missed you too said and hugged her back😃

You are Rashid and right she said pointing towards Rashid and rashid smiled she saw two handsome boys standing there with big smiles on their faces she got confused between who is asad and who is ayaan as they had same height Only Zoya Aapi can guess who is Asad bhaijaan from these two😕

Dilshad- dear where is your aapi

Humaira- I don't know she said she is going to park the car and come

Ayaan- Najma only I will win the bet

Najma- hff look who's talking I know I will win the bet

Humaira- Look there is Aapi😊

Everybody turned in the direction humaira was pointing what they saw took their breath away A very beautiful girl like greek goddess was standing there in a white and red combination saree playing with a small baby who was crying and started smiling as soon as she took him in her arms😃

Asad- Your picture is printed in my heart and I don't need any picture to recognise my heart and I will recognise you as soon as you come in front of me the (These words from his last email came flooding his mind) I'm sure she is the queen of my heart my beauty queen my Mayrah 😊

Dilshad- how are you dear 😊

Zoya- Phupiii🤗and threw her arms around dilshad and took her in a big fat hug and dills hugged her back

Ayaan- let me guess who you are

Najma- no I will guess first

Ayaan-nope I will guess first coz I know who she is

Najma- no I will guess first As Only I have the correct Answer

Zoya- STOP you both can say it together okay

Dilshad and humaira- good idea

Ayaan- Mayrah

Najma- Zoya both said it together

Humaira- you know only one of yous are right by the way how do you know she is mayrah

Ayaan- yay I knew it she is mayrah

Najma- singhed sadly

Humaira- when did I say you are right by the way who agrees with him that she is mayrah aapi

Asad- ME I agree with him

Najma- Bhaijaan you were supposed to support me not him

Asad- I'm supporting him because I know hez right

Humaira- aapi I guess only you can give them the right answer

Zoya- Hmmm sorry guyz to dissapoint you I'm ZOYA not Mayrah

Ayaan and Asad- WHAT!!! both said in union😲

Humaira- yess she is zoya aapi😃

Dilshad- Mashallah you are soo beautiful she took some kajal from her eyes and placed it behind her ears and said May allah protect you from the evil eyes😊

Najma- I knew it that you are zoya yippieee I won the bet😃

Asad and Ayaan were still shock😲

Looking at their conditions najma and humaira burst out laughing😆

Ayaan- Zoya are you sure YOU are Zoya Farooqi

Zoya- Yess Ayaan I'm zoya farooqi

Ayaan- What did you do with our Zoya who used to wear the big fat glasses and who hated make-up?

Zoya- I'm still the same zoya ayaan

Humaira- and aapi doesn't put make-up it's her natural beauty😃

Zoya- by the way Najma how did you recognise me 😕

Najma- I went to humzzi's FB account and I got your and Mayrah's pic from there😆

Ayaan- you CHEATER😡

Najma- you shouting me as if you never ever cheat😡

Zoya- calmed down both of yous we will go home and talk about this matter okay ammi abbu and uncle are waiting😊

Asad was dissapointed as Mayrah didn't come but was also mesmerised by zoya's beauty

Asad- Ammi you people go so long I'm bringing the luggage

Humaira- Aapi you help bhaijaan as he doesn't know where the car is parked so long I we will go she said with a smirk😉

Zoya- OK😳 lets go Asad

Asad- hmmm come

Zoya- so meeting after 10 years how have you been

Asad- yeah I'm good You look different and beautiful

Zoya- thanx

Asad- so are we still friends😊

Zoya- that's what I thought why are you asking this question anyways

Asad- 10 years zoya and everything changed anyways Mayrah didn't come I'm sure she must be at home and must be planning our surprise😃 isn't

Zoya- Asad woh ... woh actually mayrah before she could complete her sentence her leg slipped she closed her eyes in fear waiting to hit the ground but a strong pair of arms went around her petty waist she opened her eyes to see the beautiful brown eyes it was asad her Asad she couldn't help but admire how cute and handsome he looked...

Precap- AsYa eyelock and a new Twist😃

Sorry guys for the late update Enjoy reading😃