AsYa (KaBhi) ff Mujhse Dosti Karoge! (part 14- Updated pg54) - Page 36

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Posted: 10 years ago

Will update it in an hour😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

OMG!! sh seriously married!!😲

without everyone!
AsYa...will they clear their misunderstanding???
waiting for the truth revelation... update soon!
thanks for PM

Yeah she is married😆
They will clear their misunderstanding soon
Will update soonish😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rabiamunawar

Yipeee new update

Oh myrah was going to trap zoya
Asad want to kiss
What is surprise?
I am very impatient
Update soon


You will know the surprise in the coming chapter dear😉
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Originally posted by: -.-Mariam-.-

Read whole story in one go..

Loved the concept..
AsYa is adorable..
Mayrah-Rehan is Cute together..
Loved everything..
PM me the updates from now on..
Would love to read more updates..
Waiting for PM & Update..


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Finally catching up after so long

This was awesome
Ohwiee rehaan n mayrah married
Cool
Poor asad
Loved mayrahs meet with everyone
Seriously she is one lucky girl
Hehe
Their short convo...
Hmmm
Lovely update
Loved it soo much
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Update soonishesty


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aashiisayyed

Hey

Amazing read your whole story in one go
Loved it
Love the way you changed the story
Waiting for the next chapter eagerly
Plzzz continue soon
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Hii muski😃
Finally you joined IF
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Posted: 10 years ago
P.S. Sorry guys for the really late update I wrote this like 4 days ago on the mehndi night with my Bestie I saved it in my personal memo and got busy with all the rituals after the wedding and I forgot to post it really very sorryy... I guess this is the lamest update I have ever written but hope you people enjoy it... And Rehan and mayrah=(RehMa)
CHAPTER 14
Asad couldn't believe what just happened he was shock by his own actions how could he think about kissing zoya she is his best friend he just wanted some answers from her he didn't intend to kiss her...

Asad's POV

So Not only me Zoya is equally affected by me now I need my answers and I know whose going to answer my questions...

I went inside my room and threw myself on my soft bed. I can't get over it I really can't I almost kissed her if she wouldn't have pushed me I would have definitely kissed her what was wrong with me...

Ya allah are you happy now I screwed up..I screwed every bloody thing with her what will she think about me she probably thinks I'm a jerk one side I tell her I don't love her and on the other side I almost kiss her but the way she closed her eyes and parted her lips I'm sure even she wanted that kiss.. The way she was looking at me with her brown orbs her brown orbs only showed Love..ya right Love she doesn't Love me she said that day she loves someone who does she love oh god does she love rehan..

No can't be the way she was so happy for Rehan and Mayrah does she Love me no she didn't ever say it oh god this is so damn confusing anyways tomorrow morning no matter what happens I will get my answers from mayrah she has to answer all my questions

Ya allah I never asked for anything in my life but I really want to know about my feelings towards zoya, why was I not feeling bad when mayrah said she is married isn't I'm supposed to feel sad/hurt then why do I feel sad/hurt when I see zoya with someone else it hurts me to see her crying I can't bear the fact that she loves someone else why please help me figure out my feelings...

End of Asad's pov
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Author's POV

Asad didn't know what to do he was confused, he decided to confront mayrah next morning he closed his eyes he was tired the same confusion and those wired alien feelings exhausted him he really wanted to figure out them he didn't realize when he slept

Asad's POV

I was sleeping peacefully when I heard some soft romantic music the white curtains in my room were moving with the wind..my room illuminated with romantic candles and atmosphere

I saw a petite figure standing by my window I couldn't see her face as her back was facing me her hair were open straight and curled at the bottom they were silky, she was wearing a peach colour net saree with backless blouse she wore matching bangles and earrings I didn't see her face but I bet you she is looking beautiful...

I started walking towards her with a big smile on my face
As I reached by her side I slowly slide my hands on her bare waist I heard her gasp I smiled and pulled her closer she collided with my hard chest and I rested my head on her shoulder and then I slowly moved my head on the crook of her neck and inhaled her scent that fragrance always drives me crazy

BG Song (TUM HO - From Rockstar)

Oooh ho...
Tum ho
Tum ho paas mere
Saath mere ho
Tum yunnn...
Jitna mehsoos karoon tumko
Utna hi paa bhi loon

(I moved a little back held her shoulder gently and turned her around so I could see her face, now it was my turn to gasp she was looking beautiful gorgeous no words to describe her beauty I was totally mesmerized by her I kissed her forehead and hugged her)

Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, tukmko main jeeta hoon

(We broke apart from our hug I was going near her she walked backwards until she was against the door she traveled her hands from my biceps to my face and I closed my eyes, when I opened my eyes she was nowhere to be seen I started looking for her everywhere finally I spotted her in the garden that was attached to my room she was twirling around)

Oooh ho...
Tum ho
ahmmm...
Aaah haa aa...hmmm ohhoho ahmm

(I got hold of her hand and pulled her towards me she kept her hands on my shoulder while I kept my hands on her bare waist we started moving together on that romantic music)

Kahin se.. kahin ko.. bhi
Aao bewajah chale
Poochhe bina kisi se
Hum mile

(I pulled her closer and turned her around so her back was pressing my front ,I put my face in the crook of her neck and kissed her there she got shy and was walking away when I got hold of her wrist and pulled her back)

Bandishein naa rahi koi baaqi
Tum ho
Tum ho paas mere
Saath mere ho tum yun

(She was facing me her eyes were close and her hair were covering her angelic face I moved my hand towards her hair and pushed the strand of hair behind her ear and traveled my hand from her forehead till her lips all the while her eyes were close)

Jitna mehsoos karooon tumko
Utna hi paa bhi loon

Oooh ho ho...

(I twirled her around and pulled her to my chest she kept her hands back on my shoulder and I moved it back on her waist and pulled her closer scared to lose her)

Kis tarah chheenega aa
Mujh se ye jahaan tumhe
Tum bhi ho main
Kya fiqar ab humein

(I kissed her forehead and hugged her tightly she was shock but she also hugged me back with equal force)

Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, Tumko main jeeta hoon

Oooh hoo ho...
Tum ho
Hoo aa...

We broke apart, both of us were still lost in those magical moments but I got my words first

Asad- "hey chasmish your looking beautiful and I can't seem take my eyes off you..I said in a husky voice"

She blushed at my statement her cheeks went crimson

"Thanks" she mumbled

Asad- "you know what I want something from you"

Her almond like eyes went wide "What do you want" she asked

Asad- "I want..."

"You want"...

Asad- "A promise"

"Okay..about what"she asked

Asad- "chasmish please promise me you will never leave me I'm scared to lose you"

"I can't Asad, I can't Asad I Love you and you don't love me I can't hold on to you it hurts me" she stated and started walking away

Asad- "No please don't leave please stop wait" I couldn't see her anymore it was all hazy tears formed in my eyes "NOOO PLEASE COME BACK"

Zoyaaa

I woke up with a jerk I looked around everything was normal no candles no music and no zoya

I realized I was just dreaming. Is it a sign from above that I Love Zoya and I shouldn't let her go he looked at the clock it was 10:30pm what the hell how come I slept so early..never mind I need to speak to zoya right now I want to know if Zoya really loves me...

End of Asad's POV
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In Zoya's Room

Zoya- self thought- Ya allah what was I thinking I should control myself, I can't hide this anymore from him I should stay away from him its not right he doesn't love me he always loved mayrah he never liked me

She couldn't handle the pressure that was building inside so she broke down into tears

" why me, why me I always loved him but he never ever looked at me he was always behind mayrah, I don't want the whole world under my feet I just want that little Love from him"

She walked towards her cupboard and took out one picture and caressed it, it was Asad's childhood pic

"You know what Asad I have always loved you but you have always considered me as your friend Yes I wrote those emails to you with mayrah's name I didn't had the courage to write my name on them I thought if I did I would lose a piece of my heart,"

"Asad I can't marry you I will tell ammi that I don't want to marry you, Asad I can't marry you with the guilt of betraying your trust I just can't..."

She broke down she was sitting on the floor hugging herself crying...

"I love you asad please stop me asad please stop me from breaking this nikaah please tell me you Love me pleasee"

She didn't ever share her feelings with anyone but today unknowingly she shared her feelings with someone, and she doesn't even know it...

Asad just came to ask her if she loved him but she gave him the biggest answer of his life he didn't know how to react zoya was the girl he loves not from now but since 10 years ago how could he not get it...he wanted to go and hug her but then he thought no he can't he has to prove is his love for he needs to make her realize that she isn't bad in fact she is his soul

"Zoya I really took a long time to understand my Love for you but now everyday you shall see my Love sorry zoya for now I can't tell you anything yes I'm angry because you lied to me but I the love that I have for you melts my anger"

He walked away from her room...
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Precap- *mayrah's flashback
*Asad and his gangs plan
*Asad's romantic side😉

That's it please leave your views behind
This was the surprise updat for those who were waiting for it, it is above😉
That's it guys hope you guys like it though I think its very lame though

Next update after 40+ likes
Silent readers please like and comment...


Edited by loveassh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: loveassh


Hii muski😃
Finally you joined IF
Welcome to the India Forums🤗
Thanxx 😛
Will continue soon
Already accepted ur buddy request
Will surely PM u





Hii aruu 😃
Yup finally I joined 😊
Thanxx sweetie😊
Will wait for the update
Thanx for accepting😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Aaru🤗
I'm the first one to comment 😛
And coming to the update loved it
It wasn't lame at all my darling
I enjoyed Asads dream sequence
And you took my favourite song
I'm still lost in that sequence
So sad for zoya she really needs to grow up and tell asad everything
Yippee finally Asad got to know the truth
Loved the whole update dear specailly AsYa romance
Precap amazing
Continue soon
Love Muskaan❤️


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