AsYa TS - Message in a bottle, EPILOGUE, Page 25 (17/11) - Page 15

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Wonderful update dear
Asad missed zoya & wanted to meet her. His mind clicked their first meeting. He went to orphanage & asked for her. He left a letter for her, the same she put paper in bottle. He expressed his feeling & invited zoya to his home. Both rejoiced after getting know each other. Zoya was shocked & overwhelmed by seeing the letter which she wrote & asad found. Both were destined to each other. Plz give us epilogue as well. Thanks

Thanks Asif... glad you loved the story... will try to give you an epilogue.😃

Originally posted by: -ABI-

its simply Awsome👍🏼
Just Loved it.❤️

thanks Abi.. really happy to know you loved it.😃

Originally posted by: Peeves.

This is lovely ! ❤️ Like something out of a movie 😆 I kinda wish there was an epilogue of sorts 😳

. Aww thanks... happy to know that you loved the story... considering an epilogue... lets see.😃

Originally posted by: tashie

This was awesome. Very well written.

thanks Dear..😃

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

it was awesome... just lyk the previous two parts...
loved it...
Asad went to the orphanage to find Zoe n got to kno she still comes there..
he wanted to come n meet her but thn decided otherwise...
n then there came another bottled message... 😳
{mjhe laga tha parcel mai saari hogi... usually wohi hoti hai 😉 }
m glad that Zoe was not unknown to her feelings... n she decided to go n meet him...
beautiful ending... simple yet powerful...
waiting fr the epilogue now...

Thanks Heenu... i really didn't think you all will love this story so much... so i'm really happy everyone did... yea Asad made use of his Lawyer brain.😆
And Zoe got a message in a bottle for herself... oh you thought saari.. don't worry he will gift her saari's in future.😉.. he so smitten now.

Originally posted by: gowtu

it was simply superb...
It was an enjoyable read...
I loved it...
Zoya also had sum feelings fr him,..
Loved the way asad approached Zoe/zoya...
Nd I loved zoya expressions when she find the lttr again...
So beautiful prt that was..
Feel gud ts dear...
Waiting for epilogue :-)

thanks Goti... really glad you loved the story... yea Zoya never expected to find that letter especially with Asad... and she was too surprised and overwhelmed by it... will try to give an epilogue.😃

Kausser dear i read this TS all parts together

Originally posted by: p_s05

This is a beautiful story on destiny, faith, fate and finding love. Loved the culmination of Zoya's idea of falling in love and been swept of her feet and the content of the letter he wrote to her.

This story certainly deserves an epilogue with the culmination of Asad cooking for her as promised and Zoe massaging his tense muscles after an exhausting day just as he had desired.

Thank you Dear... that was exactly what i had in mind when i started writing this story and formulating it... that it would be a story of faith and strong belief in love ( on Zoya's side), finding love (for both Zoya and Asad) with a strong role that destiny plays in it... so i'm really happy to see you summarizing the story this way and understanding it...
I'm trying to write an epilogue and i will definitely try to incorporate those two things. 😃

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

... Loved it... Asad wrote her a letter!!! She met him again!! He confessed!!! Awww lovely!!! they were meant to be!!!!! Epilogue!!! I m waiting!!

thank you Afu... yea they were truly meant for each other... will try to do an epilogue soon.😃

Originally posted by: Amulya9

finally finally I got time 2 read ...
its awesome...
I really loved it kaussar...
aww asad is such a nice person helping poor people n fighting fr justice...
zoe 's letter is so cute...she's so crazy 😛
loved ASYA encounters..
ye lawyer n doctor ki jodi mujhe qh qh qh. 😳

Destiny had guided him and even made him realize his feelings and it was up to him now to do something about it...

I loved this part d most... destiny guides n gives us hints rest it is up to 2 us 2 make it happen or not..

asad's letter is lovely...n so perfect.
confession is so beautiful...
I watched a Telugu movie In which gal leaves a msg fr his lover like this 2 trace her...her Parents seperated them.. eventually he finds her again
this concept is unique n loved it a lot
epilogue pleeej

Thanks Amu... glad you finally caught up with it and read it and liked it..
@ bold... yea even i strongly believe in that... thats the reason why i wrote it in the story that way.😃.
Or the movie must be nice... you should read this novel by Nicholas sparks... it doesn't have a happy ending like in my story and it is very different... but the story and letters are so heart touching...