AsYa TS - Message in a bottle, EPILOGUE, Page 25 (17/11) - Page 14

Originally posted by: Devanshivaish

😳 enjoyed both the parts

waiting for the last part

cant wait for the last part😳

thanks.😃... hope you have read the last part.

Originally posted by: arshi.zoha

I am so much in love with this flick !

Keep writing...

thank you Dear..😃

I am speechless Actually ,

I read all this three parts in one go ..

This concept was a Amazing one ...

I love this story a lot se bhi zyada ..

This is perfectly Beautiful ..

You penned it wonderfully ..

Asad's life style and Zoya's letter for stranger defining what love means for her ...

And Asad and Zoe's unexpected meetings ..

Asad remembering Zoya after so many years ..And that letter ..

Them meeting again in Goa ,

That beach talk and Asad connecting all the dots ..Realizing Love ...

Wishing Zoya to be Zoe was something so realistic ..i loved it ..

And Asad proved his qualification as a lawyer by remembering each points and going to the particular places where he met her .

and The Letter he left for her in the bottle ,in Orphanage was something so heart - touching ..

And the Evening ,

Asya -Dinner and Love Confession ..

I loved this Whole TS completely ..

Each and everything was penned down beautifully,..

This TS is a total package of Love, Destiny ,Realities of Life ...

I Loved each and everything so much ..

Awesome ,

Beautiful ,

Wonderful ,

Heart-Touching ,

Lovely ,

and Very Cute ..

Loved it ...

I definitely need a Epilogue for this and I need Asad to cook for her and Zoya to massage his tensed muscles of his neck ...

Pls ,Say ok for an Epilogue ...Pretty Pls ...

Love ,

Aish...

Wow

Originally posted by: sasir

aww

awesome

more interesting now

plz update soon

thanks.😃

Originally posted by: Amin21

Hey never thought to read something with this concept .

once my elder sister told me about it

how they were writing something n then putting the paper n bottle n leaving it in river n about two months ago when I went with my friends for a picnic n saw the river the same idea came to my mind n then I dropped it

but after reading this I think next time I will definitely try it 😆

Lovely update yaar .

Beautifully written .

Eagerly waiting for next update

Yea its something people really do... although in rivers i don't kno if the current would really carry the bottle as it does in sea... and theres real life stories of people finding messages thrown in to sea in bottles... and one couple found love too... so its not an entirely fictitious thing either even though it sound very unreal and fantasy like... may be you can try it in river next time.😉..
Thanks Amin... hope you read last part.😃

Originally posted by: zoyaah

awesome

update soon

waiting

Thanks Dear.. updated.. hope you read part 3.😃

Originally posted by: mayurchan7

Heyyy...Kaussar...well was just waiting for your update...and what a beautifully and excellently written update it is...I think Asad did the right thing by giving her the letter first to know her reaction on this...Zoe's reaction to it and the dinner date at Asad"s house were beautifully written...i really liked the content of the letter very much so simple yet so touching...waiting if there is a epilogue to it...continue soon...with your SS also...pm me if possible.

Thanks... really glad that you waited for update and i could make you happy with the update... and happy to know that you liked Asad's letter.. wanted it to be simple yet heart touching.😉... will try to do an epilogue.

Originally posted by: annanyaksgian

after reading 2nd part i was eagerly waiting for last part

its really awesome and beautiul

tthanks for pm

Thank you Annanya... glad you loved it.😃