Beautiful Chaos Thread ll - Pt 6 (a), Pg 74

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sardeeeeeep

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Sardeep!

Bro.

It's okay. It really is okay!

Come here.

Hugs!

🤗

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

wonderfull...

fabulous...

thx fr the pm...

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scarletmalik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#423

wonderful update

loved it❤️

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@ChamakChallo91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#424

Wow!!! So many twists and mysteries revealed in this part!!

Loved sanam and ahil making up 😳

Can't wait for the next part!!

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noesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#425

Omg yay!

SO hot wooowww

And um rlly interesting!

Thanks for the pm!

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Tannu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#426

HOLY f**kING SHIT.

THIS IS CRAZY.

WHAAA????

I CANNOT DEAL.

I AM SPEECHLESS.

BREATHE.

First of all, their sexy time was absolutely amazing! The chemistry, the way you wrote it was spot on; fantastic!

The panic attack for Aahil was enthralling! It was so well described, you can feel the emotions, especially when he's calling Sanam and trying to hold on to her dupatta!

I loved Sanam's reaction! I thought it was well attuned to her character, especially the doctor bits.

The plot is bloody brilliant! The fake pregnancy, the true face of Begum Sahiba, the fact that Aahil knew, Sanam's look alike! It's all piecing together perfectly! This is deffo a story to keep reading. 👏

HIS DAD IS ALIVE????

Yes. I think "DEAD" is the appropriate way to end the chapter, for I am actually dead by how superb this chapter is.

Well done dude. Well done.

Tannu

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sahil333

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Posted: 10 years ago

#427

Thanks for an awesome update. So many things going on in this chapter.

Woot woot, Hot & sexylicious romance ☺️

Finally they spoke to each other, glad all is cleared now

😲 His dad is alive and he's still getting into him

Yeah, who is miss muffet !!! 🤪 , I have my suspicion 😆

Ending in a suspense 👍🏼

Thx for the pm!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 10 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: kals82
hai farz..
thank you for the pm.. and sorry for the late response...

cught betwwen so much of work...

Heyya Kal!

Thanks for dropping by love!

to the story...

so u r continuing from were sage left off... i actually thought everyone will write individual story on the couple.. so one thread for one writer... is it...

Yup! It's one story written by all of us...making it all chaotic, thus the name- BEAUTIFUL CHAOS!

seher makes an entry.. with rehaan...

Yes she makes an entry! With Rehan ;) Hee!

atlast sanam mind blinked.. like her dad.. though late.. atleast now...

ROFL! LIKE HER DAD!!! Hehehe! YES!

waiting for the confrontation and revelation...

Already up, in Parts 5A and B! By Madame B herself! OH WHAT A TREAT THESE BOTH PARTS ARE!!

loved my rehan.. the way he stood up to aahil and asked for more..

i wish he does the same in Serial too... to his mom..

YES! I wish so too! Oh how I want him to!

awesome update..

keep wriiting...

Awww!! Thank you so very much love! Idk about writing but hey...who knows! ;)

will be late.. but will be here.. for sure...

Thank youuu!

Replies as you can see ... all GREEN!

Mwah mwah love! Thank you so much for such amazing response!

Hugs!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 10 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: urvisaini
Farz it was awesome
Sanam has made up her mind to begin fresh
rehab s head is working...
he's a smart guy and will figure out soon
seher is introduced

Loved it

But I STILL DID NOT GET A PM!!!!!
NEXT TIME I WANT A PM .

Omg!

I'm so very sorry love! I had no idea that I missed the pm!!

Forgive me?

And awww!

Thank you so much!!!!

Mwahhh!!!

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#430

It was a wonderful update
Sanam & aahil convo was nice. He told her everything & sanam was shocked. He confessed her again & requested her to not leave. Sanam was relieved after hearing aahil. She crushed herself in aahil arms & both promises each other. Rehan was stabbed by sunheri but no he is safe. Aahil got a black box contained sanam picture with crossed. He shouted her name & she came & hold him. Aahil old her abt his dead father. Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

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