A beautiful revenge | AsYa SeHan SS chp 4 Pg5 -08/12 Updtd

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"Tu TUM meri beti se shaadi karna chahte ho? MERI beti se?" Asked an astonished & proud Zoyaa
"Jee Aunty", said Rehan with his usual facial tactics that can melt anyone... but not asad or zoya

"Aunty kisko bhola bhe?? Call me Zoya", zoya putting hands on her hair acting all cool.

"Miss Farooqui ye aap kya keh rahi hain? " Asad peeping in

"Allah Miyan what's wrong with you Mr Khan?? Shadi ke 22 saal baad bhi Miss Farooqui?? Its Mrs Khan.. Mrs Asad Ahmed Khan..😳"

"Okay Mrs Khan lekin Rehan aap inhe Zoya nahin bhula sakte kyunke ab tak meine inko ye nahin bhulaya tu aap kaise.. mere mathlab tehzeeb bhi tu koi cheez hoti hain"

"NOT AGAIN ABBU", said both the Mum & daughter before Asad could finish.

"Jee mein samajh gaya Mr Khan", nodding Rehan.

"Rehan how dare you?? Tumko nahin pata ke inko Mr Khan bulane ka licence sirf mere paas hain? 😲

"Sorry Zoya Maam.. I meant Sir.. Theek hain Sir"

"Miss Farooqui aap chup rahenngi please taakr kuch baat hosake?"

"Mr Khan aap ne phir se mujhe Miss Farooqui...

"MOM DAD can u please stop with your name addressing thing? A rose if not called a rose will still smell sweet", Seher popping in the middle

"Miss Farooqui seriously aapne ye Shakespeare kaha se paids kardi? Aakhir kispe gayi hain ye larki"

"Aapne poetic maa pe", zoya blushing. "Acha tu ek shair arz karti hoon..

Rehan Asad & Seher together " nahin nahin... koi baat nahin.."

"Okay Ammi.. Abbu.. ye Rehan hain. Hum dono ek dosre se bohut mohabbat karte hain aur shaadi karna chahte hain😳 "

"Jee sir.. Seher mere liye kya hain ye aap log kabhi nahin samajh sakte lekin ithna zaroor kehna chahta hoon ke isko na dekho tu aisa lagta hain meri zindagi mujhe root gayi hain.. meri zindagi se barh kar hain ye"

"Hayee Rehan", said zoya.. " hume ye rishhtaa..

"Qubool nahin hain", Asad continued but not with zoyas words. "Aap ke ye do lafzon ki wajah se mein aapko apni beti nahi desakta.. aap us shakhs ke bethe ho jis shakhs ne meri zindagi tabah karde thi.. mein wo sab nahin bhula sakta.

"Meine unse bohut pehle hi rishhtaa khatam kardiya tha"

Meanwhile Seher in her head thinking "tumhara rishhtaa khatam karne se ye khatam nahi hojata tha ke tum uske bethe ho.. tumse nikaah tu tumse badla lene ka zariya hain Mr Rehan Qureshi."

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Now I get why it's a AsYa and SeHaan story.. 😃
REVENGE!!! Sweet, sweet, revenge!!
Update the next part soon!! I'll be waiting for it!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Jee Aunty", said Rehan with his usual facial tactics that can melt anyone... but not asad or zoya

"Aunty kisko bhola bhe?? Call me Zoya", zoya putting hands on her hair acting all cool.

Aww rehan yeh kya kar diya shaddi krne ka irada sach mein hai ya nahi jo zoya ko aunty bola 😆 Miss Farooqui ye aap kya keh rahi hain? " Asad peeping in
"Allah Miyan what's wrong with you Mr Khan?? Shadi ke 22 saal baad bhi Miss Farooqui?? Its Mrs Khan.. Mrs Asad Ahmed Khan..😳"
UFF aSAD v na still miss farooqi but I can imagine KSG saying that with her hands folding in his chest Embarrassed
Okay Mrs Khan lekin Rehan aap inhe Zoya nahin bhula sakte kyunke ab tak meine inko ye nahin bhulaya tu aap kaise.. mere mathlab tehzeeb bhi tu koi cheez hoti hain"
"NOT AGAIN ABBU", said both the Mum & daughter before Asad could finish.

"Jee mein samajh gaya Mr Khan", nodding Rehan.

"Rehan how dare you?? Tumko nahin pata ke inko Mr Khan bulane ka licence sirf mere paas hain? 😲

"Sorry Zoya Maam.. I meant Sir.. Theek hain Sir"

"Miss Farooqui aap chup rahenngi please taakr kuch baat hosake?"

"Mr Khan aap ne phir se mujhe Miss Farooqui...

"MOM DAD can u please stop with your name addressing thing? A rose if not called a rose will still smell sweet", Seher popping in the middle

REHAN POV HEY ALLAH KAHAN PHAS GAYA KYA FAMILY HAI KYA KEH I BULAYUN AAB INKO

I LOVED THIS ONE totally
AWW sehar is going for revengegame ahannn...
Sehar gl be careful you gonna fall for him so hard Embarrassed
hey you gonna update soon pleaseee


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Posted: 10 years ago
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i just love these kind of stories
bring it on
and plz don't forget to add me in the pm list for this story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally an asya Sehan story.
Very nice start
Asya! How much I miss them these days. Asya was super cute. Mr. Khan & ms. Farooqui! Even after 22 yrs of marriage? Only asya can do that.
Asad: aapko in he zoya nahi bhula saktha kyun ki Aaj tak mein in he zoya nahi bhula! Lol! Asad!
Zoya: mr. Khan sirf mujehy bholna ka haq hai! How cute!
So asya knew Rehan is tanveer's son. That's why asad is against Sehan. Seher wants to take revenge from tanveer by marrying Rehan. I think Rehan really loves seher & eventually seher too will fall for him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow asya n sehan cntinue plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing start! And that more amazing end!

Dayum girl! You got me good with the Seher and revenge bit!


Awesome!




Oh yes you gotta continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And how great was Mr Khan and Miss Farooqi!

:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2:


"Theek hain tumhe mere saath mere office mein karna hoga for one month under my daughter & myself. You will get your appointment letter tomorrow Mr Rehan", concluded Asad & went.
"Best of luck sweetiepie tumhare MIL ki dua tumhare saath hain.. Rock it baby", said a cheerful Zoya & she exited too.

"Tumhare Mom & Dad opposite personalities hain I swear Seher"

"Wo tu hain so finally we ll get married. Ye khwab tu mein bachpan se dekhti arahi ho"

"Kyaa??" A confused Rehan

"Mere mathlab aap jaise ache ladke ke saath nikaah tu har larki ki khwaish hain"

"Aur tum jaise nahin tum hi se nikah karna ek khwab nahin meri zindagi ki sabse barhi aur haseen haqeeqat hain Seher. Tum mujhr us waqt mili jab mera koi nahin tha. Jab meri khud ki ammi ne mujhe paison ki khatir chor dia. "

"Rehan ye sab baatein choro please. Mein nahi chahti aapka mood kharab ho. See you tomorrow at 8 am office mein"

Next day

Seher is already busy checking the files when Rehan enters.
"Assalamualaikum meri jaan..kaisi hain aap?" Rehan being in a romantic mood.

"Aaj aap barhe ache mood mein lagrahe hain qureshi saab😳", seher continues.

"Jee kyunke mein aapko poore 10 hours 24 minutes or 32 seconds ke baad dekh raha ho"

"You are very good in Mathematics"

"I am good in Romance too.. or let's say I'm too good in Romance😳 He puts her hair behind her ear & starts to kiss her.

"Rehan... abbu"

Rehan gets frightened by her scream & turns around " Sorry Sir mein tu bus woh.. & finds no one there.

Seher starts laughing badly... " Sir.. wo..bus..meinn... ye..woh", imitating him😆

"Awle awle awle... baby ko ghussa aaya", Seher saying while pulling his both cheeks.

"Zoyaa aap yahan", this time its Rehan.. & Seher gets scared.

"Ammi ye meri ghalti nahin..', scared seher looks back n finds no one & gets angry at Rehan..

"Awle awle awle baby ko ghussa aaya", this time Rehan pulls her cheeks for revenge while Seher is giving 😡 these expressions😆😆

"Abbu aap yahan", says Seher because this time Asad is actually here but Rehan doesn't believe his nautanki seher..

"Jaa mein nahin darta tumhare abbu se.. hamesha unko naam lekar darati ho.. mein manta ho wo hitler hain par ab aur nahin.." & he turns around finding Asad. His jaws drop in shock after finding he overheard all the insults. An angry Asad leaves from there and bechara Rehan has no idea what to do.

"Teri tuuu...", he goes towards Seher in utmost speed but moves back. "Ye sab tumharri wajah se hua... ab tumhare abbu kabhi nahin manenge"

"Arrey is mein meri kya ghalti hain", said Seher.

"Apology email bhejta ho followed by bouquet of flowers. Wo professional hain na tu professional tareeke se manenge"

& He does all this which not only reduces Asad's anger but he gets amused by Rehans tactics of impressing anyone he likes. Asad adds this into Rehans plus points.

"Sir tu khush hogaye maam ko khush kar leta ho".. He rings Zoyas bell. Zoya opens the door.

"Hi Maam.. a rose for a rose😳"

"You should be saying this to my daughter not me idiot"

"Anyway Zoya Jee .. I have bought a book.. & I have noted all the poetry you have made us hear till now. You see I want inspiration from someone and u r the best person for it"

& like this he impresses his MIL too.. ab koi rehti hain tu wo hain Seher.

Seher comes tired from the office and finds a box. She opens it & finds a green churidaar dress with a note inside. "

Is shaam ko haseen banane ke liye ek chotha sa tohfa..
aapke liye Seher.

Tumhara Rehan"

Seher blushes this time no revenge is in her mind. She smiles at his saying "aap" to her, she blushes at "tumhara rehan". She happily goes & dresses up. When she comes out she finds her room decorated with heart shaped balloons, candle lights & in the middle her man standing. Seeing all this she runs to Rehan and falls into his arms.. & in background the song plays.

Ang laga de music plays in the background. Seher slowly moves away from Rehan.. thinks about Rehan & her plan to revenge ,makes up her mind but seeing Rehans innocent eyes filled with pure love she melts...

"Raas hain raat mein, teri har baat mein", pointing at him from a distance frustrated at herself for falling for Rehan. " Bol mein kya karo aise halat mein? ", questioning him with those helpless eyes.
"Mein ho teri malang tu hi mera nasha", this time tears falling from her eyes.
"Charha de rang charhe de prem ki rang charha de re", she takes her hand & touches her neck with it so he can feel her breath.

The music still plays. They both go into a hug but this time both with teary eyes, uncontrollable feelings & a lonely heart.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh god it was a cute update.
Omg! Seher making scared of Rehan by asad's name & finally when asad came, I could imagine his facial expressions.
How cute that cheek pulling scene.
Asad is professional. So send an apology note & flowers. Lol! Seher!
A rose for a rose. Zoya: u should say this for my daughter u idiot. My god Rehan made a book full of zoya's shayeris? He is still alive. But I should say I am missing zoya's shayeris a lot.
Seher too is falling for Rehan. As said Hatered can be won only by love!
Edited by Az07 - 10 years ago

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