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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


I know winter hit everywhere
Where r u from Ashii..??


i m from Pakistan (Multan)...
its winter nd 3 din se no Suraj 😡
aj paka update... 😊
kab ayegi yahan???
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...

thanks for the pm...



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Originally posted by: Linsie

nice update...

thanks for the pm...




thnxxx dear 😛
i m glad u like it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Salam...
Hope all are fine...
First f all thank you sooo much for ur love n support...
Without my reader i m nothing...
I know i m late but winter and typing are not a good combo 😆
Sooo i m back with an update hope u like it...
Ashii...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Separation... No Moreee


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Part 14:

Asad had finished his office work from last week and now he was at home with his pregnant wife... but sometimes he had to attend some outdoor conferences so he has to travel leaving Zoya at SM... actually Zoya knew that he wanted to be with her only but his work is also important so nowadays Asad is attending some meetings...
Zoya was in KV and Asad was out for a meeting... he was late and strictly ordered her to sleep but she was waiting for him... he came around 11'o clock and entered in house... he was really tired from driving and all so he sat on the sofa an removed his tie... but he felt Zoya's hand around his neck... he held her hands...
Asad: app is waqt yahan kya akr rahi hain... you should be in bed at this time... he asked sternly...
Zoya: I was missing you... she kissed on his cheek and hugged him from behind...
Asad: I m sorry baby... I m late... dinner kiya na... he said making her sit on his lap and kissed her forehead...
Zoya: hmm... she said placing her head in the crook of his neck...
Asad: sleepy???
Zoya: hmm... she again hum-ed in response...
Asad: okay baby... he picked her in his arms and made his way towards their room...
After changing in his night suit he too joined her and she placed her head on his chest while he roamed his hand on her back and his other hand was placed on her womb... he was sure that something was bothering Zoya...
Asad: kya hua Zoya???
Zoya: apko kesy pata mjhy kuch kehna hai...
Asad: main apko app se zaia janta hoon... btaiye kya baat hai...
Zoya: Mr. Khan apko Kashmir jana hai na conference k liye???
Asad: Zoya... mere liye app se zaida important kuch nahi hai... not even me... main Kashmir nahi jar aha... don't worry Zoe...
Zoya: par...
Asad: mene kaha na main nahi jaonga...
Zoya: par mjhy jana hai Asad... she said sitting up suddenly...
Asad: okay hum apny long due Honeymoon par Kashmir jayen gey... now sleep Zoya... you have to take extra care...
Zoya: Mr. Khan... mjhy abhi jana hai...
Asad: are you mad... he too sat beside her and rested his head on her lap...
Zoya: mjhy Jannat dekhni hai Asad... she said creasing his hair lovingly...
Asad: is waqt main apko Jannat nahi par Mannat lekar ja sakta hoon...
Zoya: very funny Mr. Khan... mjhy sachii main jana hai...
Asad: Zoya... hum abhi nahi ja sakty... you can't travel...
Zoya: Mr. Khan it's a normal delivery... I can travel... mjhy jana hai plzzz...
Asad: Zoya... no more mood swings plzzz... I m fed up yaar...
Zoya: you don't love me... its entire my fault... humy abhi baby plan hi nahi karna chahieye tha... she started crying...
Asad: stop crying Zoya... you are hurting AsYa too...
Zoya: apko bas AsYa ki hi fikar hai... Aman or main to matter hi nahi karty na... she cried more...
Asad: mere liye sab se pehly app hain... us k bad Aman or AsYa... app rona band kejieye plzzz... he tried to wipe her tears but she smacked his hand away...
Zoya: app mjhy Kashmir lekar ja rahy hain to bat dejieye warna... she warned him...
Asad: warna kya haan... he too played with her moods...
Zoya: warna main ammi k pass chali jaongi or app se bat bhi nahi karongi or AsYa to bilkul nahi mily gi... its my Aman...
Asad: app ammi k pass kyun jayengi... main hoon na apka khyal rakhny k liye... or Aman hi hoga... done... par no Kashmir that's it...
Zoya: Kashmir to main ja kar rahongi... apko ana hai to theek warna Rabert mjhy company deny k liye ready hai...
Asad: Ayan ko pata hai yeh sab... kal aye ga to pochonga...
Zoya: don't you dare to threat him... he is accompanying me to Kashmir... apko to uska ehsaan mand hona chahieye...
Asad: yeh sab dialogues Ayan k btaye huway hain na...
Zoya: ab apko meri bato se bhi problem hai... kahi nahi ja rahi main... happy now... she went and stood in front of the window...
Asad came and hugged her from behind... she smacked his hands but he was adamant...
Asad: kahan jana hai apko???
Zoya: kahi nahi... she said angrily...
Asad: Kashmir kesa rahy ga... He tried to cheer her up...
Zoya: app nahi lekar jayengy... stop fooling me... she was about to go back in bed when he grabbed her hand and made her sit on couch near the window...
Asad: Zoya... I was scarred what if???
Zoya: app mere sath hain to kuch galat nahi ho skata Mr. Khan...
Asad: but why Kashmir...
Zoya: hamar dream house Mannat hai to kyun na hum Jannat dekh kar ayen or AsYa ka room redesign karen...
Asad: AsYa k Aman???
Zoya: AsYa... but only for you...
Asad: acha hum kal doctor k pass jayengy or agar...
Zoya: let me inform you Mr. Khan... mjhy doctor traveling allow kar chuki hain sooo...
Asad: par mjhy sab arrange karna hoga...
Zoya: sab kuch arranged hai Mr. Khan... kal subha ki tickets book hai...
Asad: tickets... you mean by air??? Nooo way... Is mosam main vaha by air jana boht risky hai Zoya...
Zoya: Mr. Khan next 2 days koi snow falling nahi hony vali or hum kal hi ja rahy hain or phir vaha snow fall dekh kar weekend pe wapis...
Asad: app sab plan kar chuki hain na???
Zoya: Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan hoon... sab kuch achy se plan kar k execute karti hoon... she sai pecking his lips...
Asad: or agar main allow na karta to???
Zoya: to thora or rona parta but I was sure app maan jaty... she said winking at him...
Asad: so smart haan... he picked her again in his arms and placed her on bed...
Zoya: akhir biwi kiski hoon...
Asad: yeah... biwi to app meri hain... now sleep my AsYa needs a proper sleep baby...
Zoya: okay boss... I love you... she kissed on his cheek and placed her head on his chest...
Asad: not more than meee... he dropped a kiss on her forehead...
AsYa slept that night in each others arms... Next day they packed themselves and boarded on a flight to Kashmir leaving a worried Dilshad behind... yeah she was worried for her daughter and but she was scarred for her son after all he is AAK...
AsYa landed in Kashmir... Zoe was extra excited and Asad was worried for her but he was happy to see her happy... They came to their hotel and Asad asked her to rest full day otherwise he will not allow her to roam around in cold weather... she pouted but nothing was going to budge AAK from his saying so Zoe rested all day so she can enjoy tomorrow...
Next Morning, after having breakfast, AsYa made their way to the local markets and Zoe being Zoe started shopping for the entire family... and Asad was paying bills like a good hubby... They had their lunch outside... Asad was getting worried for her... he was controlling himself from a long time but suddenly some jerks came and they were drunk... they were drooling over Zoya... Asad glared at them and asked Zoya to finish this as they have to go... but Zoe was not listening to him...
Zoya: Asad... don't be a spoil brat... I wanna shop more...
Asad: Zoya abhi yeh jaga safe nahi hai... come na plzzz... he didn't wanted to spoil her spoil her mood also...
AsYa were seated in their car when the jerks hit their car and zoomed off... Aasad was about to go after them but Zoya's sudden shirk stopped her and he rushed towards Zoya's side...
Asad: Zoya... you are fine... don't worry... hum abhi doctor k pass ja rahy hain...
Zoya: Mr. Khan I m fine...
Asad: no... you are not fine... hum abhi hospital ja rahy hain... just relax haan... he was about to go when she held his hand...
Zoya: I m fine... AsYa bhi theek hai... bas hotel ja kar rest karongi sab sahi h jaye ga...
Asad: par...
Zoya: hum hotel ja rahy hain bas... I m fine Asad...
Asad: you sure...
Zoya: yeah... now can we leave...
AsYa cam back to their hotel room and he asked her to take rest and she obliged... Asad was worried for her but she assured her that she is fine... Asad too ied down with her to assure himself that she is fine actually... Meanwhile, the Curfew was implemented due to some strikes and all... Later that evening, Zoe again felt some pain but ignored bcox Asad was already worried but when the pain get unbearable she started walking in the hotel room... When Asad felt her missing beside him he too wakes up and rushed towards Zoya...
Asad: what happened... you fine???
Zoya: its paining Asad... she said with teary eyes...
Asad: oh shit... mjhy btaya kyun nahi... stop crying... hum abhi hospital ja rahy hain... don't wory Zoya I m here only...
Asad immediately wrapped a shawl around her and made his way towards the reception and asked for a cab but they inform him that in Curfew no one will come to drive as its risky... Asad wanted to shout at them but now his Zoe was important so he took his car keys and moved towards hospital...
The roads were deserted and nobody was there so he reached hospital soon... he picked Zoya in his arms and rushed inside yelling for a doctor...
Asad: call the doctor... my wife is pregnant...
Ward Boy: is waqt to doctor nahi hain... Curfew ki vaja se sab chuti pe hain...
Asad: hospital hai oi to doctor hoga na... call him/her...
Zoya: Mr. Khan stop yelling... plzzz... its irritating me...
Asad: I m sorry... app plzzz doctor ko bulaiye...
Ward Boy: Sir... doctor to nahi aa sakty par haan kuch Interns hain wo apki madad kar sakti hain???
Asad: Interns... call them now...
Ward Boy came to the common room and informed about AsYa... but there was only just 1 intern who was about to go bcox her duty hours were finished...
Dr: app ek kaam karo... patient ko room main shift karo main aati hoon...
Ward Boy came and told Asad... he laid down her on the bed and assured her that she will be fine... actually he was assuring himself... Dr came inside the room but when she looked at Asad, she stopped in her tracks... she was drooling over the man in front of her... actually she was young n sweet girl but the magic of AAK was driving her crazy... Asad turned and found her at the door...
Asad: Dr plzzz help us... my wife is pregnant and she is in pain from last hour... actually we are visitors... she is in 8th month of pregnancy and its normal... she is not in labor but why is she paining then???
Dr was busy in starring him... she was looking at him with a cute smile and noticed the movement of his lips... she just wanted to be with such man for entire life... her train of thoughts was stopped by the shouting of AAK...
Asad was telling her about Zoye but the Dr was busy in checking him out... he ignored that thought and waited for her reply but no she was busy in her drooling section... his temper lose and he shouted...
Asad: stop drooling over me Doc and attend my wife plzzz...
Dr: huh???
Asad: I said attend my wife... do you???
Dr: yeah... I m here for your wi... wife... you are married???
Asad: of course... yeh meri biwi hai to main married hoon na... aaj kal ki generation... Oh God... app mjhy interrogate karna band kejieye and attend my wife... will you plzzz...
Zoya: Mr. Khan that was too rude... she said painfully...
Dr: sorry ma'am... she came to her and started checking her BP and sugar level...
Dr was busy with Zoya when Ward Boy informed her due to critical circumstances the roads had been blocked and nobody can move out till Morning...
Zoya: I m sorry Dr... meri vaja se apko rukna para or ab...
Dr: its my duty ma'am... main app k kuch test kar rahi hoon us k bad hi kuch keh sakon gi... I m not too experienced but I will try my level best...
Zoya: come on Doc its my 1st experience too... or yeh ma'am kitna weird sound karta hai call me Zoya...
Dr: Zoya I must say you are too cool in such situation...
Zoya: haan mere hubby kafi panic ho jaty hain to mjhy hi control karna parta hai...
Dr: Love Marriage???
Zoya: yeah... pehly arranged thi tab hum dono nahi many phir etny time bad ja kar love marriage ki...
Dr: he is possessive about you...
Zoya: haan agar app 2 mint late karti to shayad...
Dr: mjhy deewar main chunwa dety haina???
Zoya: apko kesy pata???
Dr: unhy dekhty hi pata chal gaya tha k wo Jahpanah Sixpacks hain 😳... she said dreamingly...
Zoya: Doc he is my husband... mjhy bhi wesa gussa aa sakta hai...
Dr: oh sorry I was just...
Zoya: relax... I was kidding 😉... apka naam kya hai...
Dr: Heena... Dr. Heena Sheikh...
Zoya: nice name Heenu...
Heena: Heenu??? Okay... App rest kejieye main abhi aati hoon...
Zoya: Doc I m fine na... and mera baby...
Heena: app or apka baby aik dum fit hain... don't worry... app aisy dekho gey to apky hubby samjhengy k mene achy se treat nahi kiya...
Zoya: okay Doc... come soon...
Heena left and Asad followed her till her cabin...
Heena called her senior and informe about Zoya's case... Asad heard her talk and when she put the phone down he asked her about Zoya...
Heena: Mr. Khan... apki wife kafi strong hain... but now she can't deliver a child normally...
Asad: you mean to say cesarean???
Heena: yeah... normal delivery main boht complication aa sakti hain... so its good if we go with cesarean...
Asad: but she is 8 months pregnant...
Heena: Mr. Khan apki wife k test kiye hain... baby is fine and mature enough to deliver... app ne kaha tha app yahan visitors hain... agar apki wife ne or travel kiya to case main complications aa sakti hain...
Asad: app kab operate karna chahti hain???
Heena: actually I was talking to my seniors... I m alone here... but he was saying its best to operate her now...
Asad: now???
Heena: haan agar abhi operate kiya to boht easy rahy ga...
Asad: but you are just an intern here... not an experienced Dr...
Heena: I know but I have to do it... it's not my 1st case... haan sath main senior nahi hain but I can manage...
Asad: are you sure???
Heena: 101%...
Asad: okay go for it... but...
Heena: but???
Asad: agar Zoya ko ya baby ko kuch bhi hua to...
Heena: to... she asked scarily...
Asad: I will kill you... and I mean it... saying so he left from there leaving a shocked Heenu there...
Precap: Nervous Heenu...
Dangerous AAK...
Zoe in OT...
AsYa or Aman...


Sooo that's it...
ignore my mistakes plzzz...
hit like n leave ur replies...
Now Heenu ur turn...
kesa hai???? AAK ki dhamki se darna mat... main hoon na 😳
or haan nxt part k liye tjhy boht kuch btana hai...😉
jas i hope teri mama ne acha role play kiya abhi tak...
with love Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 4 aarzoo, jas, aroo, hena, nilu, sasir, asif, abi, anopama, mayur, amu, yumi
sorry if i forgot some1 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
UnREs...
Salaam Ashiii...
Well i have no proper words to describe this update...
It was funny ( role play part ) , somewhat panicking ( for ASAD )...and cute and adorable ( ASYA parts..)...
Loved the whole update...Dr.Heena's entry was well written ...but Zoya was having serious pain when she was in the hotel but she talked very well with Heenu... very easily...and even tried to scare her...when she spoke about Her Jahanpanah' Six packs...
Asad's shouting at poor Dr.Heena...and even threatining her...
This whole roleplay part was so hilarious to read ...good concept...
Well whether it is going to be AsYa or AmAn...or Twins...i don't know...but one thing is for sure...it will be fun to read that part though...
Continue soon...
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thats superb part
Zoya's demand to go to kashmir in that condition
Strike and then only intern doctor thats amazing
Excited for next part
I think its gojng yo be asya
Hope both baby and zoya is going to be fine
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm
Special thanks for res
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update! 👍🏼

Men drooling over Zoya even when she is pregnant. 😆

I hope Zoya and baby is fine.

Thanks for the pm.

Do continue soon dear. 😊
Edited by Cinderella3 - 10 years ago

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