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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Oki chici your chapters are getting better and better.
This update was adorable!
Ahh I love imagining sanam blushing and her being ari'd :)
ahil trying so hard is super sweet.
And the relationship btwn him and rehan is so sweet.
Overall like usual loving loving this story.
I feel like I'm blushing along with sanam in this story.
You've permanently plastered a goofy smile on my face for the rest of the night.
Thanks tons!

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Namrata

@namzie

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#232

this is getting better Mandy !

awesome ...absolutely awesome ! want to write in details ...maybe laters

surely cant wait for more

have a great weekend

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kyph21

@kyph21

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#233

lovely update as usual mandy...

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JShukla

@JShukla

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#234

😉I am ARI'd too.. but then, that was your plan right? How come you and Sage are ahead in the queue. Somehow the woman in me was never satisfied with the lack of indulgence and dating for Sanam. She is someone who deserves it and thanks to you I can finally see it happeing.

I would not go over and just drool over your written stuff.
It have certainly not missed how you have written ARI , a good in his game playboy with a whole lot of respect for women ... I appreciated his taking NO for a NO(only for a while though...)

Sanam won't be the same after she is back from the drive..😉

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#235

awesome
update
loved it 👏⭐️
Tfs for
pm 👍🏼

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: JShukla
😉I am ARI'd too.. but then, that was your plan right? How come you and Sage are ahead in the queue. Somehow the woman in me was never satisfied with the lack of indulgence and dating for Sanam. She is someone who deserves it and thanks to you I can finally see it happeing.

I would not go over and just drool over your written stuff.
It have certainly not missed how you have written ARI , a good in his game playboy with a whole lot of respect for women ... I appreciated his taking NO for a NO(only for a while though...)

Sanam won't be the same after she is back from the drive..😉

Thanks! Yes even I wanted Sanam to be wooed a bit more! And finally when Aahil is being all sweet and romantic, it is a FAKE Sanam who is getting all of that? No wonder people hate Seher and AHER so much, coz people feel like the love and attention Sanam deserved, is being given to someone else, and that is a fair assessment!!

Yes, Aahil in my SS respects women. I think even the Aahil in the show does. He dosent use anyone? He is very clear about where he stands? In the show and in my story as well. In my story, he has fallen for Sanam, and he has never felt this way about anyone before? I guess the same can be said for ARI in the show as well? But in my story, I am able to give more time and attention to ARI who is trying to woo Sanam!

I think the courtship period is a very important factor in a love story, and what I liked about QH 1, is that they didnt get married for ages, so they had some sort of courtship? Sanam didnt actually get that? Yes Aahil was in love with her, but he didnt really get to express it before they got married??

Your right! Sanam wont be the same when she gets back from this "Long drive?" :)

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: najma123
when are you updating?

At least another day mate! I have had a VERY busy weekend and have had no time to write at all! I even watched the QH episode pretty late last night? So unfortunately at least a day or two, coz I have to update my other story too? That is coming to its conclusion soon!

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

At least another day mate! I have had a VERY busy weekend and have had no time to write at all! I even watched the QH episode pretty late last night? So unfortunately at least a day or two, coz I have to update my other story too? That is coming to its conclusion soon!

Oh... Okay. Mandy, I understand... Tomorrow, can we expect an update? Thanks bro... I will wait. You should convert this into an FF. Please. <3

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#239

First of all thank you for such a beautiful update - as always! I've just got the chance to catch up with the wonderful updates, and you have always made me speechless. 👏

Your writing style is amazing.

What I loved about the new update was the conversation between Aahil and Rehaan. Their brotherly bond is my ultimate weakness. You did a great job at portraying the teasing yet helpful brothers. 😳

Well, hasn't ARI fallen hard for Miss Khan? He goes on to get her flowers - and that also, beautiful red roses. ❤️

And she brought them home with her while blushing madly. It's the first step toward getting closer to his charm.😉

Totally loved Aahil showing up at her place. I was laughing the whole time seeing Sanam's state. I mean, wouldn't we all feel the same way as her? Haha.

Oh God! The last line was EPIC!

You are such a wonderful writer and I feel honored to read this.

I'm totally game on the next update, Mandy! Keep us posted.

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dundumol96

@dundumol96

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#240

Hai, iam new in this story thred as far as i read iam fully addicted to my charming ARI...u really correct i hav been ARI'D...and i cant wait to read more...