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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#461

I'm so loving this. .!!
This was awesome. .!!
I'm falling in love with asad..!!
Hes just amazing. .!! :)
Thank u for d pm..:)

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#462

Love the update obviously bcuz it asad pov

Tht man so in love with. This woman he can't breath in peace without worrying about her

So hi entire family knows and they have no problem even where humera is concern too

So he drops everything to go save her and breaks all the laws to reach her

He have to have so much self control when he is near her

Oh the entire family is ready to interrogate him

Poor thing his Abu the only sane one 😆

So even zoya made it on his fact board haha

Love how he couldn't write her a note prasad laughed

So he assist ayaan to reach the farmhouse nice

Such a great big brother

So th pe next update will be the farmhouse wher she console him make out with him and avoid him

Can't wait to see his pov on tht

Continue soon

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#463

Heyy...Anjali thanx for the P.M dear...well as expected...a brilliant update...even i feel that saying it as brilliant , excellent or exceptional is so less to even compliment it ...it deserves more...this story is so intrguing and engaging that as we are reading the first few updates...but Asad's POV but still it feels different...and one more thing the points which you listed in that list by Asad were Dang on...you must have gone through in so much of thinking before writing this Update...continue soon.

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#464

Anjali loved the update again.

Asad is so damn cute yaar loved how he notices small details about her.

👏 excellent update.

P.s. sorry for the one liner. Its almost 1:30 and am dozing off. Better comment next time.😃

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#465

love reading it from asad's pov

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rakshaanra

@rakshaanra

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#466

Omg you write so well, and I am craving for pizza, love the way you keep the authenticity for ASYA

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annanya

@annanyaksgian

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#467

woow again amazing chapter

asad s pov is really needed

thanks for pm

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rakshaanra

@rakshaanra

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#468

Ayaan looked at me and his eyes grew wide, he looked down at the pizza and the cans before looking back up at me and then at Asad. It was comic, his mouth was open in what I would suppose was shock and he kept blinking for some reason. I'd have to get him checked before I let him marry Humeira, CAT scans, fMRIs and everything in between, I was sure there was something wrong with him.

Wow that's hilarious!