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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Awesome and very interesting
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part

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ZoyaAsadKhan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

plzz update soon :)
is it a ring with AZ initials ??????
hehe :P
just a wild guess

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sweetnandu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

thats a real marvelous start...
so beautiful..
enjoyed their CS.. pls do update soonish..
in the pocket it might be something related to zoya's childhood possession
pls do give us an asad's pov if possible

Edited by sweetnandu - 10 years ago

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treasure11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

What a great start!!!!

Am curious to know whats in the pockect !!!

And waiting for Asad's POV 😳

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Prazeena Bhattarai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

All i wanna say is, I NEED THE NEXT CHAP NOWWW! PU-Lezzz Anjali!

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Hey there, that's an awesome start. Looking forward to the tale of the frenemies. I loved the way they took digs at each other. It was hilarious how she baught 50 blueberry muffins only to piss him off and how he remembers she likes cheesecake and hatesnto see anyone bite into a KitKat rather than eating strip by strip.

Oh and please update soon so we know what she found in his pocket.

Have sent you a buddy request 😃

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Anjali baby it was rocking chapter😃

Asya faniemies i loved😛

Loved Zoya's convo wid her Subconscious mind😆

I remember in CL Zoya used 2 do d same but wid Khushi😉😆

there is lot of sexual tesion by Zoya's POV she clearly wanted 2 jump Asad's bones😳😉

I m looking forward 2 read Asad's POV soon😊

D way they fight annoy yet care 4 each other😆

& d fight over muffins & KItkat😆

Sold out story dear loved it👏👏👏

PS- Love u dear 2 glad 2 see u back wid new Asya story😃🤗

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

It's brilliant what you did there!

You got them to talk! And I love conversations! And yours are just so easy and smooth. So natural. I love that so much! I get all in the spirit when characters are given sassy lines to say. Sexy too. Sassy and sexy.

I feel like am right there with them. Listening to their exchange...and it's such a warm fluttery feeling! Totally the kind of read I'd spent time reading and again and again...such is the pull! Great spell I'm under here. I don't want out of this stupor! Beautifully enchanting.

What's in the pocket? If it's predictable then yes I'd say it's a ring...but if it's not..?

Is it something that screams Zoya. Something that's hers?

Oh and yes love.

Eagerly waiting for the update! I know you don't (and won't) disappointed!

;).

Mwah mwah!

Thanks for this! Made me smile! And think happy thoughts !!

Love the banner! A gift box? And the colours to it! And the pictures you picked.

And well love the title too! Ate they the clueless ones...?

Heee!