AsYa OS: ONE DAY AS ASAD AHMED KHAN - Page 7

this is one of thet best os i ever read really cute and sweet os

Hi...srashti...well i use to be a silent reader before not anymore...well i have followed your story UNITED WE STAND and it was a beautiful story...one of my FAV'S on this forum...now this OS it is a very well written and defined update...ASYA are as cute as adorable...they have so much of the spark and you showed it beautifully...the deal between them was actually a good idea and both got to know what they have to face...and feel when they are angry or ignorant towards each other...a lovely OS ...continue more with your work...

SHO SHOLLy for late reply kaan pakad ke

My god..

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Originally posted by: aniha20

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Uhh..First of all sorry for this late shrash..
And am reading your work as first time . I can simply say you are the best and talented writer 😳

One day as AAK
vrusha part was very funny. They both burning in jealous 😆 and zoya is proud too

She finally found about her mr.khan's hardwork and sincerity in his work..

All the time, Zoya's eyes
lingered on Asad's face. His handsome face
looked relieved today...no tiredness and no
frowns. She felt silly for fighting with him...for
no fault on his behalf.
I can imagine him now

Loved that ending na !!

PLEASE DON'T KILL ME AFTER
READING THIS...I FEEL I AM NO MORE A WRITER
AFTER WRITING AND RE-READING THIS
Dont you dare to tell this okie 😡

Do write more !!

Love ya ❤️

thanks for the long comment anu
no problem at all 😊
i am glad u liked it 😆

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome + Cute Os...👏

Just Love It...😊

Writte More Os In Future Soon...😉

thank u 😃

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Wonderful OS
Zoya accepted asad challenged. She started work & realised that it was not easy. Varusha zoya meeting was awesome. The way zoya told her that she is asad fiance was good. She reached home & hugged asad. Both apologised for their acts. Thanks for pm

thank u so much 😳

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Wonderful os loved it
thanx for pm
plz pm me for your other work

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

awh this was soo sweet 🤗

thanks 😛