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Posted: 10 years ago
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Salam... I know i m quite late but exams u know... Acha i m soryyy na for being late and thnx for wishing me luck.so here the next part hope u will enjoy...

Adhoori Mohabbat

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Part 6:

Location: Delhi:


Later that night Asad came to the reception and ask about those guys and a waiter told him that those guys belong to rich families therefore they tease girls and all... Asad was really angry he got to know that they spend night at nearby pub... Asad made his way to that pub and after spotting them near bar counter he drag them in parking area and beat them with all his power...

Asad was really shocked with his behavior bcox that lady was not his Zoya then why he took revenge from those guys but he concluded that being a respectable lady she deserves to be respected and he can do it for the name of humanity...

Next day Arman and Nuzhat agreed to tie a knot in front of their respective families...

Rehan: Asad I think this wedding should be celebrated more bcox its last wedding in both families...

Asad: Why not... yeh shadi boht hi achy se hogi akhir meri behn ki shadi hai...

Rashid: Haan bhai yeh shadi to pury Bhopal ko yaad rahy gi...

Ayesha: Sorry to interruption Sir... lekin mjhy lagta hai k pehly Nuzhat ko aa kar ghar dekhna chahieye aakhir ussy apni puri zindagi guzarni hai to usy pata hona chahieye na k vaha sab kesa hai or phir shadi k bad usy apna ghar smbhalny main aasani hogi... it's just a suggestion Sir baqi aap log family members hain apko zaida achy se pata hoga...

Arman: Aapi you are family and mjhy apki yehi baty pasand hain yaha sab shadi k bary ma soch rahy hain but nobody paid attention to such matter... I hope aunty bhi agree karein gi iss bat ko haina???

Dilshad: Jo bat mere mind main nahi ayi tumny etni aasani se uska solution bhi dy dia Asad I think she is right Nuzhat ko sab dekh lena chahieye...

Asad: Ammi mjhy koi aitraaz nahi hai bas Rehan...

Rehan: Arry mjhy kya problem hogi bas aap aik kam kejieye sab log Mumbai ayiye hamary ghar iss tarha Arman Nuzhat aik dosry k lifestyle bhi check out kar lengy...

Rashid: Sab log to nahi par ayen gy zaroor...

Rehan: Nahi uncle aap sab aarahy hain and that's final...

Asad: Okay to next week ka plan kesa hai???

Rehan: Perfect to next week aap sab Mumbai aa rahy hain and sab se zaroori baat koi galti se bhi hotel main rehny ka nahi sochy ga...

Ayan: Hana iss tarha dono families or pass aa jayen gi...

Ayesha: Sir apko next week Dubai jana hai vaha k clients ke sath boht important meeting hai so...

Rehan: I m so sorry Asad mjhy yaad hi nahi raha never mind or wesy bhi main kaam hai Arman or Nuzhat to thora time dena to mere ghar pe hony se koi fark nahi parta...

Dilshad: Par beta tumhy bhi ghar pe hona chahieye na...

Rehan: Aunty mera vaha 2 3 din ka kam hai aap log aayiye main jaldi hi aa jaonga or Arman ghar pe hoga na or Ayesha bhi vahi hogi and I promise wo apko kisi cheez ki kami nahi hony dy gi...

Ayesha: Ji aunty aap ghar pe aaiye and main puri koshish karungi k apko shikayat ka moqa na mily...

Dilshad: Tumny keh dia vohi boht hai...

Rehan: So that's final...

Asad: Yeah...

Location: Mumbai:

The week passed in a blur and now Rehan is in Dubai and Arman is in court when Khans inform about their arrival so Ayesha made her way towards airport to receive Khans but fight was late so she was waiting from last 2 hours at arrivals...

Around 1:30 pm the most awaited flight landed in Mumbai and Ayesha spotted Khans and she greeted them...

Note: Asad, Ayan, Najma, Nuzhat, Dilshad, Rashid, Asma, Haya(Najma's daughter), Zaara(Ayan's daughter)

Imran was out for business and Nikhat is happily married in US...

Maha is 12 years old...

Ayesha: Welcome Sir... I hope apko aany main koi problem nahi hui hogi...

Rashid: Nahi beta bas flight late thi I hope tumhy wait nahi karna para...

Ayesha: No Sir... any way aayiye aap sab...

She had arranged cars for them to reach Malik's place... Rashid-Dilshad left in one car... Najma-Nuzhat left with kids in one car and now only was left for Asad, Ayan and Asma...

Ayesha: I m so sorry Sir actually aik driver Maha ko school se leny gya hua tha to bas 3 cars arrange ho saki I hope you don't mind...

Asad: It's okay Mrs. Khan we will manage...

He addressed her as Mrs. Khan but again reality hit him that she is not Zoya...

Ayesha: It's Miss. Khan Sir and aik or problem hai actually aj aik driver chuti par tha to yeh car main drive kar k ayi thi to aap main se kisi ko drive karna hoga...

Asma: Arry par hamy ghar ka rasta to nahi pata...

Ayesha: Sorry for inconvenience mam but I can text you address so you can move ahead...

Ayan: Aap aik kam kejieye na hamary sath hi aa jaiye...

Ayesha: No Sir I can't actually mjhy Aman ko school se pick karna tha to apko late ho jaye ga aap log jaiye main aa jaongi...

Ayan: School time to kab ka ho chukka hoga na...

Ayesha: Yeah wo flight late thi to mjhy yaha rukna para...

Asma: Achaa to thek na aap sath hi chaliye warna Aman ko or late ho jaye ga...

Ayesha: No mam aap log jaiye I'll manage...

Ayan: Ayesha you are coming with us and that's final...

Ayesha: Okay...

They reached the school and Ayesha went in... Asad was waiting to meet his new friend after 10 minutes she came with Aman...

Asad: Hello Mr. Khan... How are you??? I hope hamari vaja se apko zaida wait nahi karna para???

Aman: I m fine Mr. Khan... aap kesy ho and mjhy wait karny ki aadat ha imam daily late aati hain...

Ayesha: I said I was busy na...

Aman: I know app boht busy ho issi liye mamo kehty hain k main Maha aapi sath aa jaya karon but no...

Ayesha: Aman mjhy kisi ka favor lena acha nahi lagta na so just keep quite sab log disturb ho rahy hain...

Aman: Okay mom...

Asad: Aman don't be sad apko to khush hona chahieye na apki mama etna busy hony k bad bhi khud apko leny aati hain or jaha tak humey disturb karny ki bat hai you are a family so don't hesitate...

After reaching Malik House Ayesha told servents to show them their respective rooms and told them that lunch is ready so they just have to fresh n up and have lunch till then Arman will be back from court...

Dilshad: Beta etna formal hony ki zaroorat nahi hai or tum bhi hamary sath lunch karo gi...

Ayesha: Sorry mam but mjhy office jana hai Rehan Sir bhi yaha nahi hain to sari responsibility mjh pe hai but meri taraf se Aman aap k sath hoga na...

Dilshad: Pehli bat to yeh tum mjhy mam nahi kaho gi or agar office jana hai to lunch kar k hi jana...

Ayesha: Aunty mjhy boht urgent kaam hai plzzz don't mind or wesy bhi...

Maha: Aunty aap na janti nahi hain k Ayesha Khan kabhi bhi apny kam k aagy khany ko importance nahi deti so don't worry main or Aman hain or chachu bhi aany valy hongy...

Dilshad: Beta kaam k sath sath khana bhi zaroori hota hai...

Ayesha: Sorry aunty par lunch time paka... Okay Allah Hafiz... or haan Aman jaldi se jao change kar k ao and plzzz kisi ko tang mat karna warna mama ko acha nahi lagy ga and be a good boy...

Aman: Okay mom aap jao or jaldi se aana Byeee...

Ayesha left for office... Aman was about to go when Asad spoke...

Asad: Mr. Khan where are you going lunch time hai or mama ne abhi kya kaha yad hai na???

Aman: Mr. Khan main apny ghar jar aha hoon change karny...

Asad: Ohhh apka ghar pass main hi hai... Can I come???

Aman: Arry hamara ghar to seaside pe hai or wo yaha se boht door hai to mama ko office aany jany ma kafi time lagta hai to Arman mamu or Rehan uncle k kehny par main or mama yahi bahir outhouse main rehty hain to bas vahi jar aha hoon... Apko aana hai to poch kyun rahy hain you are always welcome Mr. Khan...

Asad: Okay let's go...

Aman and Asad came back after 15 minutes and then they all had lunch and chit-chat for some time when Arman came and greet everyone...

Arman: Assalam o Alaikum... I m so sorry mjhy airport aana chahieye tha but hearings were like never ending hope you don't mind...

Asad: Arry nahi koi problem nahi hai tum sunao kesy ho...

Arman: I m fine bhaijan... main bas 2 mint main fresh ho kar aya and Maha Aman hope you are doing well???

Aman: Yeah mamu apko to pata hai aapi or main boht achy hain so no complaints haian Khans???

Ayan: Hmmm yeah dono to kafi achy se humy entertain kar rahy hain...

Arman: Bhaijan yeh dono jitney masoom hain utny hi dangerous bhi bas thora sambhal k rahieye ga...

Aman: Suna mene...

Arman: Haan to tumhy sunany k liye hi kaha tha ab tum dono jaldi se apna homework finish karo bcox aapi k aany se pehly kuch program banaty hain kal Saturday hai na to hum sab k pas 2 din free hongy so hurry up...

Aman and Maha left and after sometime Arman joined Khans and they chit-chat on Arman's daily routine...

Later that evening Arman and Nuzhat were forced to go for a walk to the nearest park... Aman and Maha too joined Khans and all were enjoying a quality time when Landline phone rings...

Maha attend the phone call and spoke...

Maha: Hello...

Ayesha: Maha... Arman kaha hai ???

Maha: Chachu to ghar pe nahi hain kuch kaam tha kya...

Ayesha: Nahi bas wesy uska cell out of reach aa raha tha... or Aman kahan hai call him na...

Maha: Aunty 1 mint...

Maha came and told Aman that Ayesha is on line...

Aman: Mama aap kab ao gey its already 6pm...

Ayesha: Aman mama ko yaha boht kaam hai try to understand na... achaa mamu se kehna sab ka khayal rakhen or haan dinner mene order kar dia hai kuch time taka a jaye ga...

Aman: Okay main unhy bta donga... Aap ne khana khyaya???

Ayesha: No baby mama k pass time nahi hai...

Aman: Acha apko yad hai na nexy 2 days hum free hain hum sab picnic ka plan bana rahy hain...

Ayesha: Okay to acha hai na app mama k aany tak sab k sath enjoy karo mama phone rakh rahi hain okay bye bacha...

Aman: Bye mama...

Aman came and tell everyone that Ayesha is busy so she will be late and they have to make them comfortable...

Najma: Par apki mama etna kaam kyun karti hain???

Aman: Kyun k hamari family main or koi nahi hai na...

Najma: I m so sorry but...

Aman: Its okay aunty or wesy bhi etna sad hony ki bat nahi hain main or mama sath main hain hamary liye yehi boht hai...

Dilshad: Par beta app k koi or relatives to hongy na...

Maha: Aman k nanu thy par jab Aman boht chota tha unki death ho gai so now Aman and aunty are part of our family...

Najma: Or Aman k father...

Aman: Mere papa hamary sath nahi rehty actually unhy meri mama achi nahi lagti thein so he left her... but acha hua na ab meri mama o emery darmiyan koi nahi aa sakta not even my so called biological father...

Dilshad: Beta aisy nahi kehty...

Aman: Meri mama ne aj tak mjhy kabhi kisi cheez ki kami nahi hony di wo hamesha apni needs ko side pe rakh k mery liye savings karti hain... we are not too rich but we are happy and moreover my mama is my papa for me... or mjhy aisy father nahi chahieye jinho ne kabhi meri mama ki care nahi ki...

Aman left the hall in anger...

Maha: I m sorry but Aman apny dad k bary main bat nahi karta par pata nahi kyun app logo k samny but app plzz chachu ya Ayesha aunty se mat kahieye ga...

Najma: Maha app boht samjdar ho... and don't worry koi bhi Ayesha ko nahi btaye ga...

Till then Arman and Nuzhat came...

Arman: Kyaa nahi btaye ga...

Maha: Bas wo aisy hi chachu or Ayesha aunty ka phone aya tha or wok eh rahi thi k dinner order kar dia hai ghar pe nahi ban'na or wo late ayengi...

Arman: Aapi bhi na boht careless hain har time kaam main lagi rehti hain or apny khany ka sochti bhi nahi hain...

Ayan: Wesy tum dono etni jaldi kyun aa gaye...

Arman: Wo bas humny socha sab k sath time spend karty hain akely waqt guzarny k liye puri zindagii pari hai...

Aman came back and spoke...

Aman: Ohhh mamu aap to etni jaldi sab seekh gaye not bad...

Arman: Haan bhai jab etna cute teacher hoga kon nahi seekhy ga...

After sometime dinner arrive and they all were having dinner except Aman...

Asad: Mr. Khan aap bhi aaiye na...

Aman: No Mr. Khan main mama k sath khaonga...

Arman: Aman come na mama late ayengi or unhy acha nahi lagy ga agar app aisy unka wait karo gy so be a good boy and join us na...

Aman: Okay...

After dinner all retired to their respective rooms bcox they were tired from traveling and all... But Aman was waiting for his mama in hall...

Asad was also feeling restless in his room so he joined Aman...

Asad: Papa k bary main soch rahy ho na...

Aman: Apko kesy pata...

Asad: Bas wesy hi... acha btao abhi ap ne kaha apki mom or app k darmiyan kisis k liye jaga nahi hai phir yeh sad look kyun...

Aman: Mr. Khan he is my father or mjhy iss baat ka afsoos hai k unh one kabhi bhi humy aa kar nahi pocha or wo kabhi mjh se bhi milny nahi aaye... main or mama boht khush hain or yeh bat boht matter karti hai... apko pata hai mama or main kabhi bhi unky bary main bat nahi karty par hum dono janty hain k wo har time hamary sath hain...

Asad: Wo kesy???

Aman: Kyun k hum dono unn se boht pyaar karty hain... un k pass hmary liyr time nahi hai but hum to unhy miss kar sakty hain...

Asad: Amam I think you should give him a chance... actually na main bhi apny dad se alag rehta tha but jab mjhy pata chala unki galti nahi thi to mjhy boht guilty feel hoa noe see we are together...

Aman: Sab kuch etna aasan nahi hota Mr. Khan... main chahy unhy jitna bhi miss kar lon par jo unh one meri mama k sath kiya wo main nahi bhool sakta apko pata hai he left her just bcox she got pregnant before marriage... I mean unhy mama ka sath dena chahieye than a...

Asad: I m really sorry mjhy ap k personal matters main interfere nahi karna chahieye par jo hona tha ho gya now what???

Ama: Ab bas main or mama hain or kya... or hum dono k liye vohi boht hai...

Asad: It's quite late you should go to bed...

Aman: App ja k rest kejieye main mama ka wait kar raha hoon unhy khana bhi khilana hai na...

Asad: Okay Mr. Khan good night...

Aman: Good night Mr. Khan...

Asad was about to go when Aman stops him...

Asad: I know mama se kuch nahi kahonga... Bye...

Aman was waiting for his mom and Asad retried to bed but unknowingly father-son shares a lot...



Sooo its done... hows it... let me know...

Plzzz ignore my mistakes...

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Next update till 30+ Likes...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Lovely update
good that asad and aman r developing their bond
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
beautiful update...😊
aman is really matured...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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gr8 update
little emotional but loved it
i hope truth comes out soon
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi aashi
good 2 see u back
updt was awesome
but want 2 point out a thing
I know u showed Aman very mature
but d way he was talking about his Dad wid Khan's & later Asad was much mature 2 his age
I mean if u put Zoya's name instead of Aman it won't make a difference, it looked like an adult was talking not a kid. So i guess while writing keep in mind that he is 5yr old kid not an adult
other than tis d updt was wonderful👏
glad ki Asad & aman r getting alone well

PS- I m just thinking that how will Zoya's identity will b revealed she lost her memory & u said she won't get it back ever, d Doc who treated her told her she's his daughter & she is living wid his daughters identity, her scar is also removed now will her identity will never b revealed.😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
So asad went and beat the guys up later nice
Yea in the name of humanity
So the yea to nikaah for arman and Nuzat
The khans come to mumbia to see arman lifestyle
Ayesha takes care of them but she is busy with work too and don't have time for the or aman
So aman and his feelings towards his dad he is 5 yrs old a child tht age will crave for his dad
Even zoya as an adult wanted to find her abbu so it is impossible for aman not to want that
Love asad and aman convo father and son so nice
He asked him to give his dad a chance
I really want to see how they will find the truth and is it gonna be a long process for tht to happen
Or is the truth not gonna be reveal and asad will fall for Ayesha or vice versa
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jas91

Hi aashi

good 2 see u back
updt was awesome
but want 2 point out a thing
I know u showed Aman very mature
but d way he was talking about his Dad wid Khan's & later Asad was much mature 2 his age
I mean if u put Zoya's name instead of Aman it won't make a difference, it looked like an adult was talking not a kid. So i guess while writing keep in mind that he is 5yr old kid not an adult
other than tis d updt was wonderful👏
glad ki Asad & aman r getting alone well

PS- I m just thinking that how will Zoya's identity will b revealed she lost her memory & u said she won't get it back ever, d Doc who treated her told her she's his daughter & she is living wid his daughters identity, her scar is also removed now will her identity will never b revealed.😕


first of all thnx for being here...
actually i know aman is more mature than is age but u knw what hardships of life... he had seen his mother doing job and spending less tym at home but main point is that he knew that his father left her mom thats why he is behaving like that...
honestly i have met with such typ of kid who had faced such type of hardships so thats why i m portraying aman mature enough...
but if u suggest i will take care for the nxt tym...
Ayesha is not going to discuss such things with Asad...
hope u got my point f view regarding aman...
hope u enjoy nxt parts as well...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So asad went and beat the guys up later nice
Yea in the name of humanity
So the yea to nikaah for arman and Nuzat
The khans come to mumbia to see arman lifestyle
Ayesha takes care of them but she is busy with work too and don't have time for the or aman
So aman and his feelings towards his dad he is 5 yrs old a child tht age will crave for his dad
Even zoya as an adult wanted to find her abbu so it is impossible for aman not to want that
Love asad and aman convo father and son so nice
He asked him to give his dad a chance
I really want to see how they will find the truth and is it gonna be a long process for tht to happen
Or is the truth not gonna be reveal and asad will fall for Ayesha or vice versa
Continue soon


thanks for being here...
hey have some patience na father son will come to know the reality and there is no chance for ayesha's memory come back but asad will come to know with a twist sooo i m sure u will be here with me to reveal the truth...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: falak333


first of all thnx for being here...
actually i know aman is more mature than is age but u knw what hardships of life... he had seen his mother doing job and spending less tym at home but main point is that he knew that his father left her mom thats why he is behaving like that...
honestly i have met with such typ of kid who had faced such type of hardships so thats why i m portraying aman mature enough...
but if u suggest i will take care for the nxt tym...
Ayesha is not going to discuss such things with Asad...
hope u got my point f view regarding aman...
hope u enjoy nxt parts as well...


I understand some kids r mature but knowing he was 5 yr old i felt a little odd but its ok i'll ignore next time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: falak333


thanks for being here...
hey have some patience na father son will come to know the reality and there is no chance for ayesha's memory come back but asad will come to know with a twist sooo i m sure u will be here with me to reveal the truth...


U r welcome love being here
Only the Hindi gets me down
But patience is hard can't wait
How will father and son come to know
And a twist and asad will come to know she is zoya
Cant wait but will try
Loving it
Love the mr.khan and mr.khan bond

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