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Posted: 10 years ago

will update today dear 😛
paka...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

interesting start...



thnxxx dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Salam...

I know i m too late...
but i m here to thank all of you for your wonderful response... i really loved ur feedback... thank you sooo much for encouraging me... so i m back with an update... hope u like it... but i will update next part till next week as studies are demanding more time so hope u understand... and i know u r wnderful readers so plzzz be with me thanks again...
Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Adhoori Mohabbat


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Part 15 A:

Asad and Ayesha were working together from last week... They shared a special bond that was beyond friendship but they very well knew their limits... The PI was in Mumbai from last 3 days in search of clues regarding Zoya... Asad was desperate to know the results... but at the same time he was enjoying with Aman... his true friend indeed... he shares his secrets regarding Zoya with Aman only... sometimes he found him just like his Zoya but the totally changed and matured personality of Ayesha always disappoints him...
Ayesha was in a great mess... she was working with Asad but her thoughts drifted back to the day when she saw the flashback of his teary eyes... she was confused as well shocked... she was feeling a tug towards him... she just wanted to erase his pain which was evident in his eyes...
Haider was broken after knowing that Ayesha is not his Chutki... he had prepared "Kajoo ka halwa" and offered to Ayesha which she politely refused... actually Aman is allergic of dry fruits so she avoid dry fruits in her and Aman's diet... but she didn't mentioned the reason to Haider...
Aman was there in Asad's house along with Najma... Ayesha was in office obviously with Asad... Najma too shared a blissful bond with Aman as he reminds her Zoya... his smile, his talks, his antics were like her BFF... she prepared a cake for Aman following Zoya's recipe...
Najma: Amana b jaldi se taste kar k btao cake kesa bana hai...
Aman: aunty app na boht achy ho... apko pata hai mama mjhy cake nahi khany deti... he pouted...
Najma: awww don't worry apki mama ko koi nahi btaye ga taste na...
Aman took bite and chewed it slowly...
Najma: acha hai na... yeh Zoya ki recipe hai...
Aman: its taste or apko pata hai mjhy... started coughing... and his cheeks turned red due to sudden coughing...
Najma panicked rubbed his back...
Najma: Aman... what happened... she handed him a glass of water but before he could drank, he fainted...
Najma rushed towards Dilshad's room and called her... they were trying to bring Aman back to his senses but he was nt esponding... she called Ayesha and informed about Aman's health...
Ayesha went and informed Asad and was about to leave when he too joined her... they reached there in 15 mints...
Ayesha: Aman... open your eyes... Najma kya hua tha...
Najma: I m sorry Ayesha mene bas Aman k liye cake banaya tha or...
Ayesha: mjhy se poch to liya hota... how can you do this Najma...
Najma: I m sorry... Asma bhabi aati hi hongi...
Asad: Najma exactly kya hua tha... cake se aisa thori ho sakta hai... he was on verge of crying by seeing Aman in such state...
Ayesha: Sir yeh cake ki vaja se nahi hua... wo Aman ko allergy hai dry fruits se to...
Asad forgot to blink his eyes on hearing about allergy... he was also allergic but... is that possible...
Dilshad: allergy??? She to ask with shock visible in her voice...
Ayesha: haan aunty Aman is allergic or injection bhi ghar pe hai... Najma I think we should go to the hospital... Aman is not responding... it's not good for him...
Dilshad: nahi... tum ruko main abhi ayi...
Dilshad went in Asad's room and brought his first aid kit that also included the injection...
Dilshad: yeh lo... yehi injection hai na... she said handling a injection to Ayesha...
Ayesha: haan par yeh app k ghar kesy???
Najma: Ayesha pehly app Aman ko injection dy do... yeh sab bad main bhi poch sakty ho na...
Ayesha injected Aman, and after 15 mints Aman was back to conciousness...
Aman: mama... he sounded weak...
Ayesha: feeling okay na...
Aman: hmm fine mama...
Ayesha: app rest karo mama abhi aati hain...
She went to Najma and placed a hand on her shaking hands...
Ayesha: relax... he is fine...
Najma: but meri vaja se...
Ayesha: tumhy pata thori tha... but plzzz next time no dry fruits...
Najma: paka promise...
On the other hand, Asad and Dilshad were going through the same confusion... how on the earth Ayesha has to look like Zoya only... okay leave that... she doesn't even have a family... and on top of that Aman's father is not there with her... and Aman... he too have allergy like Asad only...
Dilshad: Asad wo...
Asad: ammi app janti hain na main kya soch raha hoon...
Dilshad: haan par main yeh bhi janti hoon k Ayesha jhoot nahi bol sakti...
Asad: I know ammi lekin...
Dilshad: Asad lekin ki koi jaga nahi hai...
Asad: apko hamesha se meri hi galti nazar aati hai na...
Dilshad: kyun k tum har waqt galat hi hoty ho or agar Zoya mil bhi jaye to...
Asad: to kya ammi???
Dilshad: main nahi chahti k wo tumhy maaf kary... jo dard tummy usy dia hai wo sirf maafi se khatam nahi ho sakta...
Asad: sahi keh rahi hain app... meri saza aik maafi se khatam nahi ho jati... par Zoya k milna boht zaroori hai...
Dilshad: or haan Ayesha ko kuch kehny ki zaroorat nahi hai... main nahi chahti k tum usy...
Asad: main ussy kuch nahi kahonga... I promise... saying so left from there...
Ayesha was hearing their talks and she felt really bad for Asad... he was searching Zoya from a long time but his family is not supporting him also... she prayed for him...

Scroll down plzzz...

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Part 15 B:

On the coming Friday, there was a function, actually there was a party going to held to celebrate the 30th wedding anniversary of Radil... Arman was also coming... not only for his in laws but for his Aman also... Aman was going to complete his 5 years... Ayan had planned everything... he had organized a grand party for his parents but also he wanted to make it special for their new family member Aman... Ayesha was not in mood to celebrate Aman's birthday with them but what she can do with blackmailer Khans... she agreed... PI was coming back on Friday also, Asad was beyond nervousness... his life depends on that results only...
Ayesha and Aman were in KV... duo were excited as it was 11:55pm and 5 mints were left for Aman's birthday... both were planning to spend some quality time... as the clock stike 12 Ayesha wished her son... Asad was also eager to wish Aman... he called at Ayesha cell phone at 12... her cell phone rang...
Ayesha: Aman... Sir is calling... I think it's for you...
Aman: mama put on speaker na...
Ayesha answered the call and put on speaker...
Asad: Happy Birthday Mr. Khan...
Aman: thanks Mr. Khan... apko yaad tha???
Asad: main apko kesy bhool sakta hoon...
Aman: that's good...
Asad: acha to kya gift chahieye apko???
Aman: abhi kuch plan nahi kiya but kal party tak bta donga...
Ayehsa: Aman... she scolded him for demanding a gift...
Asad: Ayesha he is birthday boy... stop scolding him... its an order... he faked anger for Aman...
Ayesha: okay Sir...
Aman: Mr. Khan apko pata hai aj mjhy pehli dafa mama k ilawa kisi ne raat ko wish kiya hai...
Asad: so I m the lucky one...
Aman: yeah...
Asad: okay now go to sleep... see you tomorrow... bye...
Aman: bye Mr. Khan...
Next day, Ayesha along with Khans went at Dargah, thanked Allah for showering His blessings at them... Asad just prayed for Aman and Zoya... bcox only these too persons matters more than himself in his life...
In the party, all were enjoying when Ayan asked Ayesha to sing as its double celebration... she refused politely but he blackmailed her using Aman... so she promised to sing after cake cutting... Radil cut the cake along with Aman and all clapped for them... now it was Ayesha's turn to sing but she asked the couples to join her at the dance floor...
Ayan: Ayesha app kis k sath dance karo gi???
Ayesha: main Aman k sath or app sab apny apny partners k sath...
Ayan: that's good... okay competition ho jaye???
Ayesha: okay...
They considered the hall as dance floor and all coupled came there while Ayesha sang...
tere nam hamne kiya hai, jiwan apna sara sanam
ho o jiwan apna sara sanam
tere nam, tere nam
tere nam hamne kiya hai, jiwan apna sara sanam
ho o jiwan apna sara sanam, pyar bahut karte hai tumse
ishk hai tu hamara sanam, ho o ishk hai tu hamara sanam
tere ishk ne sathiya mera hal kya kar diya
tere ishk ne sathiya mera hal kya kar diya
Asad was observing her moves... how she danced with Aman and the satisfaction on her face were telling him that she can't be his Zoya... if she could be Zoya then she will never be that happy without him...
nindo me aankho me pyase khwabo me
tuhi tu hai yara mehaki sanso me
har bechaini reh rehke ye kahti hai
har dhadkan me teri chahat rahti hai
tere bina, tere bina
tere bina namumkin hai, zindagi ka gujara sanam
ho o zindagi ka gujara sanam
tere ishk ne sathiya mera hal kya kar diya
tere ishk ne sathiya mera hal kya kar diya
Ayesha was looking at Ayan and Asma and her thoughts went towards Aman's dad... if he could be there then they will be together as a happy family...
duri hai majburi hai tanhai hai
teri yad hame kis mod pe layi hai
apni to manjil hai teri raho me
jina marna hai teri baho me
tere liye, tere liye
tere liye is dunia ka, har sitam hai gawara sanam
ho o har sitam hai gawara sanam
tere nam hamne kiya hai, jiwan apna sara sanam
ho o jiwan apna sara sanam
Ayesha finished the song with teary eyes and hugged Aman... Arman knew the reason of her tears and placed a hand on her head... she looked at him with pleading eyes that were demanding the reason of all this... and he wiped her tears and hugged them...
Asad was also looking at them and he felt bad for Aman as he was living without the shelter of a father but he was happy for Ayesha who had fulfilled the duties of a mother as well as the father... he was brought back to reality by the vibration of his cell phone... he looked at the called id and a smile crept on his face... his PI was back and calling him with final results... he answered the phone and hang up immediately... he informed Ayan about this and left the party...
Precap: Aman's wish to Asad...


Sooo that's it...
kesa laga????
plzzz ignore my mistakes...
hit like and leave ur replies...
next update till 45+ likes and 25+ replies...
with love Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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res for Aarzoo, Jas, Hena, Arooo, Nilu, Amu, Niya
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome and sweet part
so aman also had same allergic problem
excited for next part and aman's wish
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
res...
unres...
beautiful update ashii...
loved it...
allergy... thankgod aman is fine... but the incident surely created ripples among the brains...
dilshad doesnt want zoya to forgive asad 😔... i think asad has suffered enf...
and now the truth is all set to b disclosed...
PI is back vd the facts...
ab dekhte hai wt wud this friday turn into...
asad ka reaction n thn the tym he vl take to reveal it all... n thn sab ka reaction...
plz continue soon...
Edited by aarzoo50 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update ashi
Aman has allergy just like his father
dilshad really angry with asad for zoya
hope the truth will be revealed on aman's birth day itself
best of luck for your exams
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashiii333

res for Aarzoo, Jas, Hena, Arooo, Nilu, Amu, Niya

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