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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hello... Hope u r fine and thank you sooo much for liking my new concept so i am here with chapter 1 hope u like it...

Happy Reading...

Adhoori Mohabbat

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Part 1:

Location: Delhi:

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The doctor who operated Zoya had a daughter named Ayesha Khan... Ayesha was in a relationship with her b.f and she got pregnant but her b.f ditched her which cause her to commit suicide but after meeting Zoya the doctor thought to give this girl the name of her daughter and he explains her that her b.f left her and all so now Zoya who is living a life of Ayesha Khan hates herself for giving a birth to a child without father's name but she loves her son more than herself...

Now Ayesha does not have any scar on her arm and there is no chance for her memory's come back and the doctor is also dead...

The most awaited wedding arrived and Maliks were already there bcox they were from bride's side so they have to welcome the groom...

Rehan, Arman, Maha and Aman came together to attend all the functions... Ayesha was not allowing Aman to go alone with Malik's but Arman was not listening to him and he took Aman with them... Ayesha was coming by a bus and it was the day of Sangeet and Mehndi...

Arman was very nervous with all these meeting a girl and her family and all but he knew that its time to settle down bcox now Maha is growing so they really need a woman at their home..

Ayesha was not fond off attending weddings and all but for Aman it was new so she has to attend and also Arman was going to meet a girl for marriage so she has to be there for him who always stands with her in good and bad times...

The wedding was arranged in a 5 star hotel and guests are also staying there only...

Khan's reached there and greets everyone but Asad was feeling some unknown attraction which he ignored as he was tired with traveling...

Khan's were allotted the rooms and Asad after fresh n up came to cafeteria and ordered his favorite Black Coffee... Yeah you heard it right after Zoya left him he again came back to his bitter coffee...

Aman was in cafeteria and ordered his favorite Coffee Milkshake...

Asad and Aman sitting in same place while facing their backs... But Asad can really feel some hidden forces or you can say that the power of love and blood is disturbing him...

The waiter misplaced their order and the father son are now having their orders but Asad was in no mood to ignore this silly mistake he called the waiter again and starts scolding him... Aman was watching this and came to his rescue same as his mother who always poke her nose in others matters...

Aman: Excuse me Sir...

Asad turn to his right side and face a cute young boy and God knows what happened to him, he forgot all his anger and give a little smile to that cutest dimpled child...

Aman: Sir I know enki mistake hai but apko pata hai galti sab se ho jati hai aap se or mjhy se bhi ho sakti hai to app enhy kuch mat kahen or yeh lejiye apki coffee...

The waiter thanked him left the place...

Asad: Etni choti si age main kafi badi badi batey kar lety ho aap or yeh raha apka milkshake or haan mjhy mere gussy pe control karwany k liye thanks...

Aman: Its ok sir wesy bhi meri mama kehti hain k acha kaam akrny k liye age matter nahi karti...

Aman smiles and was going back to his seat when he again came...

Aman: Aap yaha akely ho???

Asad: Hmm wesy to family ke sath aya hoon par cafeteria main akela hoon??? Wanna join???

Aman: Yeah... main bhi family sath aya hoon par akely milkshake pena acha nahi lagta to aap ke sath bethny ka dil kar raha hai... hope you don't mind...

Asad: No problem... apka naam kya hai???

Aman: Aman Khan or apka naam???

Asad: Asad Ahmad Khan...

Aman: Waooo that's nice hum dono Khan hain phr to friendship banti hai...

Asad: Hmmm why not...

They shake hands but Asad again felt a tingling sensation bcox he never be friendly with anyone in 5 mins but this boy has some strange impression on him...

After finishing milkshake..

Aman: I am done Mr. Khan and thank you for your company I really enjoyed it... Allah Hafiz...

Asad: Byeee...

Asad smiles and left for his room...

Arman told Aman that his mom will be here till evenging so they better get ready bcox they have to meet Khans...

Maha and Aman got ready and reached the wedding hall of the hotel where Arman was waiting for them...

The trio came inside where Rehan was alredy seated with Khans...

Rehan introduces Arman and Maha to Khans... they all greeted and settle down...

Aman stood up and went to Asad...

Aman: Hello Mr. Khan...

Asad immediately remembers Zoya who always adressed him as Mr. Khan...

Asad: Hi... Mr. Khan... Aap yahan kesy???

Aman: Main yaha apny mamo sath aya hoon pointing toward Arman...

Asad: Ohhh that's great acha main apko apni family se milata hoon...

Aman turns towards Asad's family and say a Salam...

Najma: Aap to boht cute ho...

Aman: Thanks for the compliment beautiful... and shows his dimples...

Ayaan: Waooo dimpled boy hmmm.

Aman: Yeah main same apni mom jesa hoon par unky dimples mere se bhi zaida preety hain...

Asad again remembers Zoya and her dimpled smile...

Arman: Heyyy iss se pehly yeh choto apni smile or dimple se ap girls ke sath flirt kary let me warn you eski mama ko yeh sab bilkul acha nahi lagta k yeh aisi cheesy lines boly you know strict mom and all...

Aman: Mamo aap aisy kyun bol rahy ho mene to just enki beauty pe compliment dia aap mama ko kyun involve kar rahy ho...

Arman: Kitna drama kartha hai acha teri mama ko nahi btao ga ab khush...

Aman: Yeahhh!!!

Khans really like Aman...

Maha: Achaa app main se wo kaun lucky girl hai jo mere chahcu se shadi karny ma interested hai hmmm...

Dilshad: Ohhh to aap ko larki se milna hai wesy yeh hain Nuzhat agar aap ke chachu or enho ne haan kar di to phir enki shadi kra dengy kesa idea hai???

Aman: Allah Miyan... etni jaldi shadi???

Asad and Khans got shocked by hearing this but Arman spoke...

Arman: Aman aram se bacha or aap log ghabraiye nahi yeh aksar aisi bato pe over react kar jata hai...

Aman: Sorry bas wo aisy hi keh dia par mjhy mami pasand hai to shadi kar dety hain na??? kyun mamo acha idea hai na???

Arman: No way jab tak aapi haan nahi kahengi tab tak no shadi???

Rehan: Arman har bat main Ayesha ki raza mandi lazmi nahi or Asad I hope you don't mind yeh to bas aisy hi hai...

Asad: Its ok par mjhy kuch pochna tha???

Rehan: Haan haan pochieye na...

Asad: Aapke ghar ma to koi lady nahi hai to yeh Ayesha kon hai or yeh Aman bhi Mamo keh kar bula raha hai its confusing me...

Arman: Actually bhai ki PA hain Ayesha Khan but mere liye saggi behn se barh k hain or unki rayee mere liye boht matter karti hai or Aman unhi ka beta hai...

Dilshad: Achaa or uski family and husband???

Arman: Aunty... wo akeli hain matlab unke father ki death ho chuki hai bs Aman hi hai unki life main...

Aman smiles at that moment but Khans really feel bad that child for not having his own family...

Rehan: Arry aap log Ayesha ko kyun discuss kar rahy hain I hope ab Nuzhat or Arman ko kuch time sath ma spend karna chahieye function start ho chuka hai par hum log kal nashty pe milty hain aram se sab kuch final karny k liye???

Asad: Great... to kal subha breakfast pe kuch personal baty bhi ho jayen gi abhi to function chal raha to thek hai bas haina abbu???

Rashid: Haan sahi hai bas ab bacho oe depend karta hai enhy kya pasand hai???

The function starts officially and bride and groom are seated together and than some cousins and friends came and dance but groom was busy waiting for someone...

Arjun (Groom): Or kitna time lagy ga unhy aany main???

Suhana (Bride): Bas aati hogi thora wait kro na...

Ayaan, Najma, Nuzhat, Aaliya (Ayaan's wife) and Arman are standing beside bride and groom...

Ayaan: Arjun kya hua bhabi sath bethi hai phir bhi bar bar entrence pe kyun dekh raha hai???

Arjun: Yaar meri 1 hi saali hai wo bhi abi tak nahi ayi??? Usi ka wait kar raha hoon???

Arman: Aapi aa chuki hain bas ready ho rahi hain or aati hi hongi...

Ayan: Tumhari aapi eski saali kesy???

Arjun: Actually Ayesha or Suhana or Arman best friends hain to Suhana ki na koi sis hai na koi cousin to iss hisab se Ayesha meri saali hui na...

Ayan: Ohh achaa...

Aman and Asad were sitting and having some friend's chit-chat...

Suddenly Asad became restless and feels the presence of Zoya but he was in dilemma and turns around and got shocked...

Asad was on cloud 9 bcox he was seeing his wife his life after long 5 years... A tear dropped from his eyes...

" Hamara Zikar To Har Bar Hua Afsaano Main...

To Kya Hua Jo Thori Dair Ho Gayi Aany Main..."

All turn around and some got shocked and some got happy...

Khans are just shedding some tears while Arjun, Suhana and Arman were happy...

Asad got more shocked when Aman just ran to Zoya and she immediately bent down and took him in her arms...

Asad was too shocked bcox from afternoon he was feeling an unknown bond with Aman but he never imagined that his new friend can be his son only and he sent a silent prayer to Allah for such a wonderful gift and now he has only a mission that was just hug his Zoya and Aman and never let them go far from him...

Sooo hows it let me know with your precious and valuable comments and hit the like plzzz

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Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago

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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome update
Asad attracted towards Aman. They became friends. Everyone in family like Aman & remembered zoya. Zoya lost her memory & hate her bf. Asad felt her presence & saw her. He got a shocked that his life, standing in front of him & Aman is his son. Waiting for next update soon plz
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Madhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wonderful plot... asad meets zoya...but zoya doesn't remember him...aman is asyas son...hope they join soon

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Great story!! Love the concept!!
Aman is adorable!!
So Zoya doesn't remember Asad.. OMG
Looking forward to see what happens next!!
Update soon.. :)

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Madhu

@surbhi163

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wonderful plot. ...asad meets zoya. ...But she doesn't remember him. ...aman is asya's son...hope they unite soon

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Tunailuvsahil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow nice updt now aman and asad god friend.asad and zoya meet with eachother asad realise aman hs won song nice story

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Suganti Kularaju

@suganti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

nice story

wonder how will zoya find out her truth

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

amazing update
can't wait to read more...
cont plz...
u have 25 likes nw
plz plzp lz

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nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Awesome part
wow asad saw zoya and aman
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Hi... I hope u r all fine... Thank you sooo much for liking my story and giving ur precious comments so now i m back with next part hope u like it...

happy reading...

Adhoori Mohabbat

Banner Credit goes to Immortal Love... 🤗

Part 2:

Location: Delhi:

Asad was more than shocked... he was unable to believe that Zoya is living a life with new people but also she hide the truth of her being pregnant and on above all she never try to contact him or tell him that they have a son...

Come on,,, after all that happenings he believed that he was wrong he made a mistake but she is his culprit now and moreover she is giving her own son a life without a father when she herself experienced that bitter truth... yes he was at mistake last time but now she is the only sole reason for creating such situations...

But all his anger flew away when he sees his wife and son smiling at each other and then he really wanted to be there with his cute little family and he made his way towards them...

Ayan and his sisters were watching their bhaijan moving towards Zoya but they were just praying bcox Asad's anger may disturb someone's family function...

Asad stood in front of Zoya and Aman with teary eyes and suddenly she looked up at him with a full dimpled smile but her words bring Asad out of is trance...

Ayesha was listening to Aman's talks when a man no correction plzzz a handsome man came and stands in front of them and he was looking at them... it make Ayesha self conscious and she asks him...

Ayesha: Excuse me!!! Can I help you???

Asad was thinking that why she is behaving as a stranger around me after all I m her husband phir etni formality kyun...

Ayesha was now in some strange thoughts she is asking him something but no response and she again spoke...

Ayesha: Hello is there any problem Sir???

Asad was like what the hell she is speaking and Sir really???

Before Asad or Ayesha can continue this one sided talk Aman spoke...

Aman: Mr. Khan meet my Mama Ayesha Khan... and mama yeh mere new friend hain jin k barey main apko btaya than a call pe...

Ayesha: Ohhh hello Mr. Khan I hope Aman does not bother you at all???

Asad thinks why is he addressing her as Ayesha... kahi hum sab se door rehny k liye to yeh sab nahi???

Aman: Mama wo mere friend hain aap aisy nahi bol sakty na...

Ayesha: Achaa baby sorry na...

Asad was speechless at Zoya's behavior and then again she spoke...

Ayesha: Excuse me we are getting late plzzz excuse us...

Saying so she left and made her way to stage where Arjun, Suhana and Arman were waiting for her...

Dilshad and Rashid were watching all this and they were also shocked with Zoya's behavior...

Asad was now more heart broken with her attitude and he thought to let himself calm down before creating a mess of all this and moreover he has to behave as a mature in front of Aman bcox he don't want to make a bad impression for his son and he made her way outside for some fresh air...

Ayesha: Hey Suhana you are looking awesome haan??? Aj to Arjun pagal ho gaya hoga tumhey dekh kar nai???

Arman: Aapi yeh sab choriye aap etna late kyun ayi yaha sab apka wait kar rahy thy???

Suhana: Ayesha yaar meri best friend ho kar bhi etna late???

Ayesha: Bas yaar traffic boht thi.. khair yeh sab choro or mehndi dekhao kesi lagi hai...

Arjun: Kamal hai yaar jiss Saali ka main sab se zaida wait kar raha tha uss ne mjhy to hello hi bhi nahi kaha???

Ayesha: Ohhh to Jiji ko attention chahieye but I must say you are looking handsome as ever...

Arjun: Thanks for the compliment but yaha pehly dance karma hoga pata hai main apka wait kar raha tha bcox mjhy apni ikloti Saali ka dance dekhna hai na???

Ayesha: No way jiju etny sary log hain yaha or Sir bhi hongy never haan...

Suhana: Kyaa yar tu etna bhi nahi kar sakti iss se acha tha function par hi na aati???

Arjun and Suhana bith tried to fake anger...

Arman: Tum dono aapi ko blackmail kyun kar rahy ho acha aapi thora sa dance to banta hai na come on wesy bhi Suhana se mene promise kiya tha aap dance kro gy plzzz na...

Aman: Haan mama apko dance karma hi hoga...

Ayesha never ignored her son's wish so she agreed...

Ayesha: Okay you blackmailers... But next time no dance manzoor ho to btao warna???

Arjun: Haan haan manzoor hai jaisa aap kahen Saali Sahiba...

Arman: Haan meri shadi tak paka no dance...

Ayesha: Oyeee shadi se yaad aya Khans se introduction hua kya??? Larki kesi hai??? or naam kya hai???

Arman: Aapi aap ke pass ma hi khari hai na khud mil lo na...

Ayesha turns towards Ayan, Najma and Nuzhat and face their more than shocked faces...

Ayesha: Assalam o Allaikum... sorry mene apko pehly nahi dekha I hope you don't mind any way I m Ayesha Khan or Arman ki aapi...

First Ayan came and shake her hand with Ayesha and introduce himself along with his wife and sisters...

Ayesha whispers in Arman's ear...

Ayesha: Arman lucky haan???

Arma: Aapi plzzz abhi to mat taang khencho sab yahi hain...

Ayesha: Achaa to...

She was speaking but Arjun drag her to the mid of the haal and took a mike...

Asad also came back in hall with Rehaan when he saw that Arjun was dragging Zoya in the centre of the hall... He was angry on Zoya for behaving normal with others and ignoring him like he is nobody...

Arjun: Attention plzzz... actually mjhy na aik announcement karni hai... aap sab to janty ho k shadi ma dulhy ko sabse zaida pareshan uski saaliyan karti hain but you know what meri sirf 1 hi saali hai jo etna zaida late ayii hai???

Ayesha: Aa to gayi na???

Arjun: Haan to aana to banta tha na... now let me tell you guyzzz she is such a good dancer...

Ayesha: Liar... Hahaha

Arjun: Ohhh yeh abhi pata chal jaye ga na... so ladies and gentlemen plzzz give a huge round of applause to my one and only saali "Ayesha Khan"

Ayesha: Haan agar main girr gayi to plzzz Arjun ko pakarna sab log...

Arjun: We will see na now DJ will you play a hit number...

Arjun left the place and Ayesha was now standing alone but Aman, Arman, Suhana and Arjun were cheering her up from stage so she smiles to start a dance...

Ayesha performed on song "Maine Payal Hai Chankayii"

When she finishes everybody claps for her and she was going ack to stage when Ayan came and spoke:

Ayan: Arry jab larki valo ki side se koi dance kar raha hai to kyun na 1 duet dance ho jaye???

Ayesha: Hmmm idea acha hai but ma strangers' ke sath dance nahi karti...

She was leaving when Ayan hold her hand and says...

Ayan: Ab hum ajnabi kab se ho gaye haan???

Ayesha: Excuse me...

Arman: Hey wait agar aapi or main dono dance Karen to chaly ga???

Ayan: Okay no problem??? But he was angry on Zoya for ignoring her crime partner Rabert...

The trio dance on "Yeh Gore Gore Se Chorey" and "Veerey Di Wedding"...

After this the dinner was being served and with the end of function Rehan came with idea of having a small chit-chat with Khans in lawn...

Rehan: Ayesha make the arrangements in 10 mins...

Ayesha: Yes Sir... saying this she left...

Arman: Aap sabko aapi se koi problem to nahi hai na actually mjhy pata hai iss time family discussion honi hai but aapi is more than family to me so???

Dilshad: Nahi beta aisi koi bat nahi hai or Aman ki mama se humey bhi to milna than a to acha hai sab sath hongy...

Arman: Thank you aunty...

Ayesha came and took half sleepy Aman in her arms and they all made their ways towards lawn for some family time but Khans were totally confused with Zoya's behavior and they decided to talk to her in private and specially not in front of Malik's...

Precap: Ayesha and Khans talk regarding her behavior and Ayesha's answer made them believe that she is not Zoya...

Asad is now totally heart broken but Dilshad as a mother say sorry to Ayesha for making her to take such a big step... Ayesha ne kya kiya hoga??? think think and tell me ur views about her actions...

Sooo hows it??? Plzzz let me know and hit like and leave ur comments...

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Next part till 30+ likes

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago