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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: anopama

last 2 updates very nice
asad shocked on seeing zoya
and he has a son he cant believe zoya said nothing
loved how he went and stand in front of her
but sh is totally clueless he is heartbroken
so glad she had some family and frenz though
all the khans r in shock and dont understand
so waiting for the next update
cant wait for them to question her
but then they will think her not zoya
so is their no one who knows about her accident
the maliks dont know she lost her memory
continue soon


thanks for appreciating and yeah there is no one who knws about her memory loss but she will...
i hope u like future story also...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: falak333


thanks for liking dear...
but i wanna clear that dilshad is not going to do such thing and i promise Zoya is not going to forgive Asad easily like they showed she will prove that a mother can fulfill her duties and all...
i wil cont.soon...

thanks for rplying dear. I m a big Asya fan but before that i m zoya fan but i dont like the way cvs shows her character a woman with no self respect. The way she always forgive asad was unbeliveable. Even in almost every story i see same thing. I want to c zoya showing attitude to asad. Eagerly waiting for next parts.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
I read just prologue
I want to kill Asad😡
Bloody MCP😡
He is angry dat Zoya went against him. Is she his slave?😡
How can he slap Zoya again? Hope Zoya too slaps him
He send her divorce papers to bring her back??? How its possible? Is he out of his mind?
Cuz of him, Gaffur got a heart attack n Zoy lost her memory😡
Hope Zoya does not forgives him n let him meet his son
He can again slap her if she forgives him
I hope his idiotic family including Dilshad don't support Asad n emotionally blackmail Zoya to forgive him
Asad sud not get everything including forgiveness easy like always
He always tuk her for granted so he sud pine for Zoya n their son
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I read just prologue

I want to kill Asad😡
Bloody MCP😡
He is angry dat Zoya went against him. Is she his slave?😡
How can he slap Zoya again? Hope Zoya too slaps him
He send her divorce papers to bring her back??? How its possible? Is he out of his mind?
Cuz of him, Gaffur got a heart attack n Zoy lost her memory😡
Hope Zoya does not forgives him n let him meet his son
He can again slap her if she forgives him
I hope his idiotic family including Dilshad don't support Asad n emotionally blackmail Zoya to forgive him
Asad sud not get everything including forgiveness easy like always
He always tuk her for granted so he sud pine for Zoya n their son


yeah actually i really feel bad for zoya bcox in show asad raise his hand on her after rashid's death but in my story i m making zoya stronger than they showed and plzzz bear with i hope i will not disappoint you...and his family is not going to blackmail ayesha its promise...
or haan asad gave her divorce paper actually he realised his mistake but his ego is more important for him so he gave her papers bcox he want zoya in his life back but he is confused with his actions as well... hope u got my point...
and u really like future story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Asad & zoya met, she behaved with him strangely as she didn't remember him. Dance performance was wow. Precap: interesting. Is zoya got her memory back & told dilshad. So many things. Plz continue soon. Thanks for pm


thanks for liking but no dear zoya does not got her memory back and dilshad will do something unexpected to ur imaginations soo stay tuned,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for liking my concept and marking ur presence on each post thanks dear 😛

hope u like future story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I m Ashii... thanks to all of you for liking my storyyy...
when i started it i was very confused but ur reviews really encourage me so i m back with nxt part but plzzz leave ur comments after reading it...
Happy reading...


Adhoori Mohabbat



Banner Credit goes to Immortal Love... 🤗

Part 3:

Location: Delhi:


Ayesha arranged a seating in lawn for Khans and Malik's family meeting... They all got seated and Ayesha spoke...
Ayesha: Sir I have ordered some tea and coffee for all of us and I was just wondering did anyone need something else???
Rehan: Hmmm let me ask Khans??? Asad, aunty apko or kuch order karna hai kya???
Asad: No Rehan coffee sahi rahy gi...
Dilshad: Haan beta etni formality ki zaroorat nahi hai...
Arman: Bhai agar aap bhool rahy hain to apko yaad dila don aapi is on official leave so plzzz aap unhy koi kaam nahi kahengy and aapi don't start again aap bhi aa kar beth jao...
Ayesha: Hmmm Arman I m on leave but phir bhi kuch arrange to karna hai na...
The waiter arrive with tea and coffee and Ayesha excuses herself bcox Aman was sleepy so she took him in her arms and start walking in the lawn to put him in sleep...
Asad was just starring at Zoya and grinning like a fool by watching his wife and son totally engross in each other...
Arman: Aapi come na chaii thandi ho jaye gi...
Ayesha: Nahi Arman bas abhi mood nahi hai or Aman thora relax ho jaye main aa jao gi you carry on...
Najma: Arman aik bat pocho???
Arman: hmmm yeah but not something like typical shadi vali baty I m really bad in that...
Najma: Don't worry mjhy bas pochna tha k Aman is really close to her mom to wo tumhary sath yaha pehly kesy aya???Zo... I mean Ayesha jab se ayii hain unhi ke sath hai so???
Arman: Haan wo aapi se boht attached hai actually unki family main or koi nahi hai na to bas issi liye... or yaha ussy ma zaberdasti ly kar aya tha bcox aapi kabhi favor nahi leti wo to bus ma hi aayi hain but mjhy acha nahi lagta Aman etni si age main problems safe kary so I took him with me...
Asad was really feeling bad for Zoya after she is suffering from all this due to his anger... if he could handle that matter wisely then today Zoya is not doing such a silly job and his son has not to suffer from comforts of life...
Najma: That's really sweet...
Ayan: Aap lawyer hain but apky bhai ka etna business hai apny wo kyun nahi join kiya???
Arman: Mjhy apny apko prove karma tha and credit goes to aapi for supporting me...
Rehan: I think hum yaha tumhari shadi ki bat karny aye hain Ayesha ki achai k bary ma nahi kyun Arman ab tumhary bary main bat Karen???
Khans really feel bad for Zoya bcox such a Khadoos boss she got...
They chit-chat for sometime when Ayesha came and spoke...
Ayesha: Sorry to interrupt you sir but agly 15 mins main apki foreign client ke sath video call conference hai so I thought to remind you...
Rehan: Ohhh Asad I m really sorry but I have to go plzzz don't mind and Ayesha make them comfortable I will be back in half an hour... or haan Arman behave like adult okay...
Saying so he left the place and Khans got revealed bcox now they can interact with Zoya...
Arman: Aap log aisy chup kyun ho gaye bhai abhi aa jayen gy...
Rashid: Arman why don't you take Nuzhat on a walk around the lawn acha hoga agar tum dono aapas main bat kar lo...
Arman: Akely main wo main...
Ayesha: Arman be a man and just go...
Arman and Nuzhat left...
Asad: Ammi apko bat akrni hai ya main khud...
Dilshad: Asad tumhy abhi tak samajh nahi ayi kyaa??? Etny arsay bad wo bechari mili hai or tum...
Asad: Ammi wo bechari nahi hai... or apko meri galti nazar aa rahi hai jo kuch usny kiya uska kyaa???
They were arguing when Ayesha starts singing to put her son for a sleep...
Ayesha was walking from corner to corner with Aman in her arms and she sings...
"Dil ka gham dil hi jaane kyaa kahoon main kisi se...
Maine aansoo hain chupayee in laboon ki hansi se...
Dil ne toh kuch chaha tha orr kuch ho gaya hai...
Meri palkon ka sapna abb kahin khoo gaya hai...
Meri aankhon main namii...
Hoo oo oo...
Iss main hogi naa kamii...
Chaayii chehrey pe udaasii...
Jiss se iqraar hua tha choota wo saathi...
Thoda sa pyaar hua tha...
Kuch nahi baaqii...
Thoda sa pyaar hua tha...
Thoda hai baaqii...
Hoo oo oo...
Thoda sa pyaar hua tha...
Kuch nahi baaqii..."
A call on Ayesha's cell brought Khans out of their trance...
Aman: Mama mjhy nend nahi aa rahi and mjhy bhook lag rahi hai...
Ayesha came towards the seating's where Khans were seated and she makes Aman to sit and then she moves towards cafeteria...
Ayan: Kyaa hua apko to mama kab se sula rahi thein to aap soye kyun nahi???
Aman: Mjhy nend nahi aa rahi thi or wesy bhi mjhy mama se song sun'na than a toh bas aisy hi or ab mjhy bhook bhi lagi hai...
Ayesha came at that moment and spoke...
Ayesha: Hmmm Aman its hot chocolate milk now be a good boy drink it and go to our room mama abhi aa jayen gi...
Aman: Mama mjhy nend nahi ayii or apko pata hai mamo shadi akr rahy hain??? Or wo larki na kafi pretty hai...
Ayesha: Nahi abhi mamo shadi nahi kar rahy or aunty hain na bacha aap larki larki kyun bol rahy ho...
Aman: Haan aunty hain ab khush... he said making a face while drinking...
Ayesha: Don't tell me ke ab tumhy aunty bhi pasand aa gayi ussy mamo k liye chorna parey ga baby...
Khans were laughing on mother-son conversation...
Aman: Mjhy na dosri aunty zaida pasand aayi hain unkey na round cheeks hain boht cute hain wo...
He said while looking at Najma... Ayesha also looks towards Najma and spoke...
Ayesha: I m so sorry actually na issy Arman ne khrab kiya hua hai jab bhi kisi larki se milta hai uskey sath flirt karny lag jata hai... wesy Arman aisa nahi hai par wo apny hissy ki flirting mere bety se krata rehta hai hope you don't mind...
Najma was unable to reply bcox Zoya was talking just like a stranger... Asad and Dilshad were also confused...
Rashid: Dost iss main sorry kehny ki kyaa baat hai bacha hai abhi samajh jaye ga...
Ayesha: Excuse me aap ne mjhy dost kaha right???
Ayan: Kyun Mona Darling ab apko apny doston se milna acha nahi lagta kya???
Ayesha: I m sorry par aap log kuch ajeeb behave kar rahy hain???
Aman: Mama milk finish ho gya main room main Maha aapi pass jar aha hoon... Good Nite Mr. Khan and Beautiful... he said to Asad and Najma respectively and left...
Ayesha: Aman room main ja kar mjhy call karna or haan door andar se lock kar lena...
Aman: Okay mom... he spoke from a distance...
Ayan: Mona ab btao kya problem hai ap aisy kyun behave kar rahi ho??? Hum sab se galti hui hai par shayad aap bhool rahi hain iss waqt aap bhi galti par hain???
Dilshad: Beta jo kuch hua wo ho chukka hai par tum inn sab baton ki vajah se Aman ko kyun hum sab se door kar rahi ho???
Ayesha was like what the hell is happening here...
Ayesha: Pehli baat to yeh mera naam Ayesha Khan hai or aap log aisi ajeeb se baty kyun kar rahy hain and plzzz mere bety ko inn sab main involve karny ki zaroorat nahi hai...
Asad was listening all this but when she spoke about Aman he lost his control on himself and spoke...
Asad: Kya tamasha laga rakha hai Ayesha Khan and all saaf lafzon main baat samajh nahi aati kyaa???
Ayesha: Excuse me sir... aap mjh se aisy bat nahi kar sakty...
Asad: Ohhh sir... he was going to hold her upper arms when Rashid came and stops him...
Rashid: Asad gussa karny se kuch hasil nahi hoga or dost tum kyun aisi baty kar rahi ho dekho jo hona tha ho gaya main bas etna chahta hoon tum hum sab ko maaf kardo...
Ayesha: Sir mjhy samajh nahi aa raha aap mjhy sorry kyun bol rahy hain jab ke main aj tak aap se mili bhi nahi...
Asad: Abbu dekha aap ne etna attitude hai k pehchan'ny se bhi inkaar kar rahi hai...
Ayesha: Sir aap kab se mjhy taunt kar rahy hain apko problem kyaa hai job hi baat hai aap openly kejieye plzzz...
Asad came towards her and holds her upper arms and she winced in pain...
Ayesha: Sir you are hurting me plzzz leave me...
Asad: Hurt haan or jo hum sab par guzar rahi hai uska kya haan jo etny arsey se main takleef main hoon uska kyaa??? Tumhy kya lagta hain yeh sab pagal hian... arry tum kyun meri galti ki sazaa inn sab ko dy rahi ho kyun??? Tumhari vaja se main har roz marta hoon ehsaas hai tmhy haan???
Asad was too closed to her even she can feel his breath on her face... she suddenly felt weak in front of him and her tears made their way...
Ayesha with all her power jerked Asad and slapped him...
Khans were shocked with her behavior...
Ayesha: How dare you touch me??? Himmat kesy hui haan aap ne kyaa samjha akeli larki hai to kuch bhi kar sakty hain main etni dair se apko izet dy rahi hoon Sir keh kar bula rahi hoon lekin nahi aap sab pata nahi kyaa boly jaa rahy hain jab main apko janti nahi to aap log mjh se aisi baty kesy kar sakty hain haan???
She said while looking at all of them...
Ayesha: Arman ke rishty ki bat nahi hoti na to btati main apko mery bhai ko pata chala na k aap ne mere sath badtamizi ki apka wo hasher kary ga k aap yaad rakhen gey... akeli larki hoon to eska matlab yeh nahi hai k koi bhi mou utha k aaye ga or kuch bhi keh kar chala jaye ga Ayesha Khan naam hai mera or agar ab kisi ne galat naam se bulaya na to dekhna or haan mere bety se door rehna... she said while glaring at Asad...
Dilshad: Beta tum meri bat suno main janti hoon Asad ki galti thi abhi bhi issy aisy bhave nahi karna chahieye tha par inn sab main mera qasoor kyaa hai??? Kyun mjhy sazaa mil rahi hai??? Haan aik maa ho na tum bhi to mera dard samajh sakti ho na to btao phir mere bety ko kya zindagi bhar zinda lash ban kar rehna pary ga sari zindagi wo aisy hi intezaar karta rahy kya???
Ayesha: Aunty aap log meri baat kyun nahi samajh rahy??? Maa hain na aap to apko aik maa ki tarha hi samjhati hoon yahin rukieye ga aap???
She left the place in anger...
Asad: Ammi aap kyun ro rahi hain main Zoya se baat kar raha hoon na ap plzzz aram se beth jaiye...
Dilshad: Kesy araam kar loon beta mere bachy etni mushkil main hain or main kuch nahi kar sakti...
Meanwhile, Ayesha came again with Aman...
Ayesha: Aunty aap ne abhi aik maa ki tarha mjh se sawal kiya tha na to yeh lejieye apko aik maa hi samjhaye gi...
Saying so she put her hand on Aman's head while Aman was unable to understand the situation and she spoke...
Ayesha: Aik maa k liye uss k bachy se barh ke kuch nahi hota na or yeh baat aap achy se samajh sakti hain na to aj main apny bety ki qasam khaa kar keh rahi hoon main apko nahi janti or na hi mera aap sab se koi rishta hai ab to apko mjh se yaqeen hoga na...
Asad was dumb fold bcox he thought Zoya is giving him his own taste of medicines but no can't lie or Aman ki qasam khany ki kyaa zaroorat thi but aik bat saaf hai yeh Zoya nahi ho saki par hows that possible...
Khans were really shocked with the turn of events...
Ayesha: Ab or koi issue hai kya ap logo ko... she was cryin like hell...
Aman: Mama aap kyun ro rahy ho kisi ne kuch kaha kyaa aap mjhy btao na I m abig boy now...
Ayesha: Nahi bacha koi problem nahi hai wo bas aankh ma kuch chala gaya tha acha aap room main jao mama bas 10 mins main aa rahi hain okay good boy go na...
Aman: Okay mama and he left...
Ayesha: I m so sorry mjhy aisy behave nahi karna chahieye tha par logo ne koi rasta nahi chora ho saky to mjhy maaf kar dejieye ga...
She was going to leave that place when she feels a tug on her hand...
Asad was watching her with teary eyes bcox all his hopes of finding Zoya came to an end again but now he have to rectify his mistake... so when she was about to go he hold her hand...
Asad: I m sorry mjhy laga aap koi or hain lekin nahi qismat ko kuch or hi manzoor hai... I promise aaj ke bad apko hum sab ki taraf se kabhi koi problem nahi hogi... saying that he left her hand...
Asad's eyes were blood shot red and now he was unable to control his tears so he left...
Dilshad: Beta mjhy bhi maaf kardo mjhy aisy nahi bolna chahieye tha plzzz maa samjh kar hi maaf kar dena beta...
Ayesha: Its okay aunty aap plzz maafi mat mango or aap sab mjhy job hi samjh rahy hain dua karti hoon apko wo jald hi mil jaye kyun ke aap sab unn se boht pyar karty ho haina???
Dilshad took her in a motherly hug and wipes her tears...
Ayesha: I hope inn sab ka asar Arman ke rishty par nahi parey ga???
Dilshad: Nahi beta tum fikar mat karo ab sab acha hi hoga...
Ayesha took her leave and Khans were now feeling bad for creating such a mess in someone's life...
Precap: Khans came to conclusion that the lady is not their Zoya...
Arman made them realize that if someone touches her aapi
He must have to face his anger...
Ayesha came to know about Asya and feel bad for Khan
Family...
Aman's friendly behavior with Khans...



I hope u like it sooo plzzz hit like...
It was a really long one sooo leave ur replies...
and ur suggestions r also accepted with open heart...
Next update till 50 likes after all its a wonderful update haina???

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice
hope truth will be out soon
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
That was one of the big step any mother took & Ayesha did that bc she didn't remember anything. Hope something clicked her memory. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aashiii this is super update
Eagerly waiting for the next

Thanks for pm

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