//AsYa & SaHil FF//: I Love You Like XO

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Hey all it's me Mandeep aka Mandy, whatever you'd like to call me 😆 I am here with a new story including BOTH AsYa and SaHil. I loved/love them both in the show and after months of being busy with college, I have finally decided to create a fan fiction. I would personally like to apologize if this simply isn't that good because besides this fan fiction i've only ever done one. I am thinking about updating this fan fiction two times a week (Thursday or Friday & Saturday)

I really hope you enjoy this fan fiction, please be free to comment below telling me what you think about it and what you would like to expect from this fan fiction 😳 thank you so much I really hope you like it as much as I love writing it!

Yours Truly,
Mandeep


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Update #1- Pg 1
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IF YOU WANT TO BE PM'D WHEN I UPDATE PLEASE LIKE THIS POST
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UPDATE #1

It was a bright and early morning in the Ibrahim house where the beautiful Zoya was making everybody breakfast as Tanveer was out grocery shopping for food. Tanveer just still couldn't believe Asad and Zoya weren't murdered but yet saved and that Aahil made Tanveer the maid of the house. While Asad is getting dressed Zoya goes upstairs to give him a glass of water til she sees Sanam and Aahil still in bed. As Zoya opens the door and watches them with the most beautiful look in her eyes knowing that she can finally be with Sanam and Aahil she realizes something. She looks ever so carefully and realizes that the girl in bed with Aahil isn't even Sanam, it's Seher! 😲

She screams "OH MY GOD, WHAT IS THIS" and shuts her eyes and looks away. Aahil and Seher both wake up looking confused as ever. Aahil gets closer to Seher and goes to hug her not knowing it's actually Seher in bed not Sanam. Seher quickly jumps and says "AAHIL APP KYA KAR RAHE HO" while Zoya opens her eyes and tells Seher "WHY ARE YOU SLEEPING IN AAHIL AND SANAM'S BED" and Seher slowly starts laughing and says "Oh ammi their bed is too comfortable not to sleep in" Asad who's standing in the hallway breaks into laughter not being able to control it while Aahil sits there in confusion and tells Seher "unbelievable" and gets up to wondering where Sanam is while everybody laughs. Aahil gets up and says "Good morning ammi and abbu" and they say "Good morning beta".

Aahil goes downstairs looking for Sanam while Latif comes up to Aahil saying Tanveer went out to buy groceries and she'll be back. Aahil mood suddenly changes thinking about all the stuff she has did and realizes that although she did all those things, he still wants her around. As he turns around, Latif looks at him and blushes while saying "mera jaan ☺️".

Aahil sees Sanam on a ladder hanging up decorations for a business party they are hosting tonight. Aahil stands there looking at Sanam and admiring her beauty. "Wah bahut khoobsurat lug rahi hai" as Aahil says. Sanam hears Aahil and looks at him while they both make eye contact and smile gazing into each others eyes. Sanam is so memorized by Aahil she beings to feel unstable on the ladder. She screams "Aahil" and while Aahil still memorized by Sanam, he goes back to reality and runs to go catch her. As he catches her they both daze into each others eyes. Not blinking and being taken breathless by each others emotions. Seher comes down the stairs laughing and says "mujhe puri philma dikhane hai, keep going".

Both Aahil and Sanam get embarrassed but the emotions slowly fade away as Tanveer enters the home...

TO BE CONTINUED

Edited by -Mandeep- - 11 years ago
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Tell me what you guys think 😳
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Amazing 👏 ❤️
Loved it 😳
Do continue 😊
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I am just a silent reader of the forum, and I have never been really interested in Fan Fictions. But your title stole my heart away. I have always wanted to see Zoya, Sanam and Seher altogether and dear, I am so glad you are writing this FF.

Coming onto the story, the first chapter is just amazing. Seher made me laugh. :D Ahil is so romantic. I am glad Tanveer's truth is out, and she is working as a servant. But it would have been better if they had just killed that women off. LOL!

Anyway beautiful FF, looking forward to reading more of this. Continue soon and if possible, please PM me when you update.

Edited by Laugh.Out.Loud - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laugh.Out.Loud

I am just a silent reader of the forum, and I have never been really interested in Fan Fictions. But your title stole my heart away. I have always wanted to see Zoya, Sanam and Seher altogether and dear, I am so glad you are writing this FF.


Coming onto the story, the first chapter is just amazing. Seher made me laugh. :D Ahil is so romantic. I am glad Tanveer's truth is out, and she is working as a servant. But it would have been better if they had just killed that women off. LOL!

Anyway beautiful FF, looking forward to reading more of this. Continue soon and if possible, please PM me when you update.





thank you so much :) i will update it asap
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Originally posted by: TasriS

Lovely start...:) :)


Thank you so much 😳
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Loved it ❤️ Please continue 👏

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