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Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20
Bubblu this was really amazing of an story!! A modern thinking, a depressed person all this was really a good combo!!<3<3<3 :-*:-*

Thank you so much Apurva for so many lovely comments ,,

means alot to me (:

and I am really glad that u enjoyed it !!

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Indianbuddy

@Indianbuddy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

So I don't even know if you're going to read this because Jesus Christ! You have had so many threads and there are like 135 pages on each one! You get so many comments and likes! I bet it's really hard to keep up with all this! But I mean sadly this ff is over. It was a beautiful journey. I finished this in 2/3 days. I'm so happy I read this ff. It was truly lovely. I can't wait to read the epilogue. You really wrote this in such a fantastic way. I love how Asad goes from just being your average Joe to being a freaking KING! I also like how Zoya didn't know a lot of things before marriage. Also Asad proposing in front of the old people was ssooo cute! My only complant with this ff is that sometimes you would mess up your English but that happens to everyone. It wasn't such a big deal. Also you put the English translation at the end of the paragraph. Like I would either have to skip to the end then jump back to where I was or I would continue not knowning what Asad or someone said. I also like how this ff is in English. I know Hindi but it just takes me longer to read Hindi than English. I like finding ff in Englsih...sooo I really hope you start another ff! Thanks for the pm...I know I'm just reading this story sorry! I left the forum not to long ago and I am just starting to catch up with all my pm. I'm really bleased that you are my buddy and pm me! Thank you so much! I really did enjoy this!!! :) :) :)

Edited by QuboolHaiLover1 - 10 years ago

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--Bubble007--

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Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: QuboolHaiLover1
So I don't even know if you're going to read this because Jesus Christ! You have had so many threads and there are like 135 pages on each one! You get so many comments and likes! I bet it's really hard to keep up with all this! But I mean sadly this ff is over. It was a beautiful journey. I finished this in 2/3 days. I'm so happy I read this ff. It was truly lovely. I can't wait to read the epilogue. You really wrote this in such a fantastic way. I love how Asad goes from just being your average Joe to being a freaking KING! I also like how Zoya didn't know a lot of things before marriage. Also Asad proposing in front of the old people was ssooo cute! My only complant with this ff is that sometimes you would mess up your English but that happens to everyone. It wasn't such a big deal. Also you put the English translation at the end of the paragraph. Like I would either have to skip to the end then jump back to where I was or I would continue not knowning what Asad or someone said. I also like how this ff is in English. I know Hindi but it just takes me longer to read Hindi than English. I like finding ff in Englsih...sooo I really hope you start another ff! Thanks for the pm...I know I'm just reading this story sorry! I left the forum not to long ago and I am just starting to catch up with all my pm. I'm really bleased that you are my buddy and pm me! Thank you so much! I really did enjoy this!!! :) :) :)

Heyy !!

I always read all the comments on my work ,,

yeah I know thats lot but still I love you all and enjoy every moment of feedback 😳

Thank You soo much !!

Yup Asad's character was very strong in here and it kept developing and I wanted all this as a surprise for Zoya !!

soo very glad that u liked it 😃

yeah I really do mess up with my grammar sometimes and sometimes only the reason is my laziness to re-read it ,, I know its not a good reason but thats all I have 😆

its really okay so don't apologize plz !!

that all means alot to me !!

Thanks again 😊

Bubble !!

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Just read it once again Amazing story...

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weeniethepooh

@weeniethepooh

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#275

amazing story

loved reading every part of it

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weeniethepooh

@weeniethepooh

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#276

and yumna.imad suggested me your stories

so thank you yumna 😊

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MonnaS

@msingh27

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#277

WOW...Started this FF yesterday & couldn't stop...SUPERB WRITING AND AMAZING STORYLINE..FELT LIKE I WAS WATCHING A MOVIE..Thanks for this awesome ff..please do add me to your PM list for any new ff that you'd be starting.

Thanks again 😊