Asya FF-TUM JO MILEY chapter 13 UPDATED

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Very nice start 😃

I like it really, and how Zoya turned the table, that was awesome 👏

when the angle met the bul and when Akdu met Miss clumsy

continue soon and thank for the pm

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love.asad.zoya

@love.asad.zoya

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Hey I'm back 😛
Sry I didn't comment for long in ur previous story ... Pls I have a reason ... Actually my exam r going to start and preparations r going on and u know teacher ... A lot of homework and test ... That's why i didn't read the story after ummm second chapter ... But hopefully I will read and later comment 😃

And going to this story while reading this I was remembering asya 1st scene ... Hayye wo bhi kya din the
I really love the prologue ... Miss clumsy Zoe should accept her mistake and Mr Akdu Ahmed Khan should more polite 😆
Looking forward to it 😃
Continue soon

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

exploding start...
i guess let the story take shape don't bind it in numbers...
continue soon

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nice prologue
Dhamakedar start
Continue soon plz
Do pm me
Thanks

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

very nice story like it

thanx 4 the pm

update soon

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Tadibaaaz

@Tadibaaaz

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Awesome Wating for next part

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Hi Shruti back again wid new story😃

I loved d start😊

pehli mulakat main hi fight😆

Zoya hit his car 2nd time on purpose😉😆

now lets see what happens in future😛

thanx 4 pm dear😊

PS- I wanted 2 reqst u 2 give links when u PM this time u did but all other times u give pg no. only so we have 2 find out thread links by ourself. It will b nice if u give pg links😃

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Interesting start

So we have bickering strangers

our beloved asya at each other throat

So u started with 5 caps first story then second u give us 10 so now will u give us 15 I say aim for 20 u can give us 20 chapter for this easily

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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Amandeep

@aman1605

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

hey Shruthi🤗

Prologue is amazing n interesting too😃

Plz update soon

N yes i've sent u the buddy request but u didn't accepted😒

Love Aman❤️

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Hey shruti!!😃...
Interesting!!
AsYa met !!
and fought too!!
Bull and Angel 🤣🤣
Is Zoya having a daughter??
My exams starting!!
Sry won't be active till 28th sept and knw ur fast updating skill i think story will be finished till i will back!!
Keep PMing me will comment when back!!!!