#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 75

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update loving it
thanx 4 the pm
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurchan7



Hey...Bano 8-)...First of all thanku for the P.M ..well how are u and how are your classes are going on...?.Coming to the update it was a long and entertainingg update..containing all the members of this FF...i think najma overeacted on that but i didn't know her intention about that...still anybody can get sad being overweight and teased about it...but nonetheless it ended nicely...the family is on a picnic...and there is more of that left i think..., Zoyaa..she is gettting mentally more stable and mature day by day and is feeling new emotions everyday..it is new for her...and she is craving to be set free...but her own insecurities are stopping her..lets see how she comes out of it...Asad well well this man had a good and pleasantfull morning today...the scene in the park with zoya was very good...and sana and him are like kindergarten buddies...so much to say about a long update but running out of words...continue soon.


HEy Mayur ! 😃 dont worry u dont need to thank for the PM 😉 i'm good but tired with studies, well they r going well 😊 Thank you so much !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! 😳 ❤️ hahaha yeah Najma had reacted that way only to tease Asad ! 😉 yes er own insecurities kind of caged her in what she has become ! but well dont worry because in the next chapter u'll see Zoya being 'Angel' again ! 😃 haha yeah Asad is kinda victim, if not Najma then Sana ! 🤣 i personally love Asad and Sana 's friendship ! They r fun and true friends ! 😆 awww thats so sweet !! Thank you so much Mayur !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: falak333

lovely update and such a cute part dear...

really like Asya behavior...
cont. soon


Thanks a lot Falak ! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Its so cute & refreshing update

ASYA equations are changing😳


I love it


Pls pls update soon


Thanks for pm


THANKs a lot Aseela !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM.

It was So nice Part.
Zoya was changed and ASYA(KABHI) were changed ,it was so interesting.
Najma part was so nice.😊
The way ASYA(KABHI) convincing Najma was so nice.😊
Sana and Asad(KSG) part was also nice.😆
Zoya jealous on them,it was interesting.😊
Asad(KSG) hides behind Zoya calling her Angel and he kissed on side of her head was so cute.😳
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PRIYACHERRY.



THANKS 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: navk

awesome update
najma 's crying part was too good


Thanks buddy 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Hey Choti Bajijaan, loved the update.

Najma was so cute, taking revenge on my poor Asad😛


Zoya being so jealous makes me what to pull her cheeks. Kitni cute dikh rahi hogi out of jealousy😆

And Asad blushing, OMG, I just love that look on him


Poor Daniel ji got caught up in Najma's nautanki😆. Am liking the bond Asad n Sana also share. I know what's the importance of true friends in one's life.

Loved the update Choti Bajijaan but next update jaldi dena. Please🤗


Awww Thank you so much Badi Bajijaan ! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! 😳 ❤️
Yeah bechara Asad was a victim here, first Najma then Sana !😆

Yeah i so remember when she used to be jealous of big chudhail of QH ! 😡 😆

The blushing Asad had always been for me the best sight in QH after AsYa scenes ! ❤️

Haan bechara Danial balli ka bakra ban gaya ! 🤣
Me too ! I love writing about Sana and Asad because both r like kindergarten babies ! 😆

Next update coming in few days !! 🤗 mwah !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


HEy Mayur ! dont worry u dont need to thank for the PM i'm good but tired with studies, well they r going well Thank you so much !! I'm glad you liked it !! hahaha yeah Najma had reacted that way only to tease Asad ! yes er own insecurities kind of caged her in what she has become ! but well dont worry because in the next chapter u'll see Zoya being 'Angel' again ! haha yeah Asad is kinda victim, if not Najma then Sana ! i personally love Asad and Sana 's friendship ! They r fun and true friends ! awww thats so sweet !! Thank you so much Mayur !!


Hi...again Bano...well it is my way of greeting you...and i am sincerely thankful that you are putting me in that list which can receieve P.M for your work...and i am grateful for that and as you said not to use thanku again then i should twist my words that it is not looking as thanx again... :-P.And about the coming update well i can say that iam eagerly waiting for it ...and in the next update if she is becoming the ANGEL again then we should be ready to cage her so that she will not again become gloomy...but i think Asad is only enough for that work... :-) continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

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Unreserved!


You dedicated the chapter to me, I feelguiltybecause I'm late now. But Thank You very much Little Angel! And here's making up for it and because of AsYa's initialawkwardnesstoo.











<font color="#6666cc">"Asad and Zoya looked at each other then back at Najma and both went to sit on either side of her with their legs crossed and chin resting on their fists."</font>


This was pure adorableness!


<font color="#6666cc">"hugged these women who were one of the most important women to him.
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<font color="#6666cc">she put her arms around his waist and hugged him back and when she realized that Najma was still crying, she put an arm around her too and that's how they shared a group hug."</font>





Nostalgic!


<font color="#6666cc">"...i'm not only your friend but Ammi's daughter and my Savior's Angel..."</font>


Did she just say that? Whoo! ❤️


<font size="2">This chapter had Zoe realizing and saying manysubconscioustruths. Amazingprogression, the narrative, Zoya's mental growth and her character. ⭐️ 👏</font>
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<font color="#6666cc">"...he smiled back at her, then kissed the side of her head, not caring about the people around, "Angel, my Angel..." He whispered in a voice barely above of a whisper but loud enough for her to hear him and she smiled."</font>
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<font size="2">Did he just say and do that? *long deep sigh*</font>
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<font size="2">This was a heavenly chapter. Asad and Zoya were perfectly balanced, their character growth, emotions and reactions.</font>
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<font size="2">I hope this comment justifies this amazing chapter, you dedicated the chapter to me because I had said the wait was long since the last update, Ididn'twant to prolong the read and comment, but this week has been a little crazier than usual.</font>
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<font size="2">Thanks againPrincess!</font>


Awww dont be guilty ! I know how life can get ! 😕 🤗
Thanks to u for always showering ur love to me !! 🤗 mwah ! 😳 ❤️

Oh ! That photoshopt had taken my breath away on the first time and still has its same effect ! ❤️

Hahaha yeah i was being nostalgic of this very hug, thus the resemblance of the scene ! ❤️

Yes she said but unintentionally ! 😆 😕 but she did say it ! 😆

Awww Thank you so much !! I really am honoured because this is something i put all my hardwork to make it as logical and as coherent as possible ! 😳 ❤️

That thing he did and said and knowingly ! ☺️ ❤️

Thank you so much Prashni !! 🤗 i'm really glad u like it and enjoyed it so much !! 😳 ❤️
Its ok i understand !! Good luck !! 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wonderfull n lovely..

amazing...
fabulous...
zoya is feeling jealous...
asad n zoya are getting back to normal with each other...
beautifully written...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...


Thank you so much Jaz ! I'm glad you liked it ! 😳

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