Reserved!
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Unreserved!
You dedicated the chapter to me, I feel guilty because I'm late now. But Thank You very much Little Angel! And here's making up for it and because of AsYa's initial awkwardness too.
"Asad and Zoya looked at each other then back at Najma and both went to sit on either side of her with their legs crossed and chin resting on their fists."
This was pure adorableness!
"hugged these women who were one of the most important women to him.
she put her arms around his waist and hugged him back and when she realized that Najma was still crying, she put an arm around her too and that's how they shared a group hug."
Nostalgic!
"...i'm not only your friend but Ammi's daughter and my Savior's Angel..."
Did she just say that? Whoo! ❤️
This chapter had Zoe realizing and saying many subconscious truths. Amazing progression, the narrative, Zoya's mental growth and her character. ⭐️ 👏
"...he smiled back at her, then kissed the side of her head, not caring about the people around, "Angel, my Angel..." He whispered in a voice barely above of a whisper but loud enough for her to hear him and she smiled."
Did he just say and do that? *long deep sigh*
This was a heavenly chapter. Asad and Zoya were perfectly balanced, their character growth, emotions and reactions.
I hope this comment justifies this amazing chapter, you dedicated the chapter to me because I had said the wait was long since the last update, I didn't want to prolong the read and comment, but this week has been a little crazier than usual.
Thanks again Princess!
Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago
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