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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#481

What a wonderful update yaar👏

Loved rashid-dillu' understanding.

hope zoya's mom do something ASAP.

Ghafoor😡

so dillu is going to tell zoya everything.

Waiting for it.

Please update soon

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: p_s05
An enjoyable chapter of disclosure and insight into the missing pieces that complete the puzzle.

Love your Rashid and Dilshad, particularly Rashid, I have read only a select few fictions in which he has stood up to the title of being called "dad" - Awesome writing! Absolutely look forward to how they shall assist Zoe and protect Asad.

Zainab's courage is really commendable, I guess she living up to the phrase: "Parents walk the ends for their children."

Anticipate the upcoming chapters!

P.S Do we get an epilogue for "Message in a bottle"?

Thanks Dear... glad you liked Rashid's character here... i have loved Waqar as an actor and even the character Rashid i felt had real depth and complexity which was not explored in the serial at all and we got to see only his spineless side... his past was also never shown.. and here i thought of making him a character totally opposite from what we saw in the serial and show Asad having a complete family.😃

yea definitely all the good parent do " walk the ends for their children."

i'm working on the Epilogue as well.. hopefully will give it to you soon.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: aman1605
Hey Kaussar🤗
Sorry 4 being late😳
Oki so chapter 11
Aww my naughty Asad☺️
It was amazing😃
My asya i hope hamesha saath me hi rahe
Dilshad didn't know abt Zoya
So now where Zoya will find the certificates
I hope she find them soon😊
Plz continue asap
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️

Hi Aman... thats alright... no need to say sorry.😃

Glad you loved the chapter and naughty Asad.
Hope you have read Chapter 12 & 13 and found the answers.😉

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: -ABI-
unres
Awesome+Amazing+Interesting
Update
where U've reveal many things

AsYa knew eachother from childwood
Rashid,Dilshand,Gaffor&Zeeniab are related in past
Gaffor have AsYa's marriage certificate

well it was a loveable Update 😉

Hi Abi... glad you loved the updates...😃

yea AsYa knew each other as kids..,it was explained when they first met each other at France as well... hope you have not forgotten.😃
Thanks for the sweet comment Dear.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
res ...
me unresing fr both chapters here only ..
kaussar as usual beautiful updates n haan jaldi wala super long one...

Thanks Heenu... hehe yea this time its jaldi..😆
finally rashid n dilshaad forgave our asya...
i dont kno bt i liked zoyas breakdown there... m i a saddist???
Liked in a good way? then no it's not sadistic.... even otherwise no.
n finally so glad that she got someone to share her troubles with... but asad was sleeping na?? uth to nahi gaya hoga na??? hehe no.. woh so rahi hai.
i nva thought the papers wud hv been found by gafoor... you didn't guess?
zainab really knows her husband better than anyone... Yep..
aaarrrggghhh i hate him so much that cant put it up in words... hez such a filthy man...
just to boost his ego, he did a crime or to b more precise a sin...
how cud he ruin his own daughters life... such a sleazeball... 😡 😡
Yea i know... he is too disgusting..
ab kya hoga???
the streak of guilt on gafoors face ...can we hold the rope of hope there??? yea may be we can hope for something.. lets wait and see.. or may be something unexpected happens.😉
plz continue soon

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: kaussar

Affu Dear how are you?... hehe yea many things happened...registrar ki office mai hona chahiye isn't it?😉

i m good!
hw r u?
haan wahan mil hi jayegi na copy!!
Friends kab kaam aayenge!!
Qaazi sahab bhi hai

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#487

Kausser dear its wonderful chapters

I am waiting for the next part

Its so emotional update

I just hope Asad will not get mad after knowing ZOyaan nikah

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#488

Love the 2 updates they were amazing

So asad was ready to go meet his parents again and ask forgiveness

But his,parents came to him and forgive all and was excited to meet their DIL

Loved how he took dilshad to meet zoya first she was nervous but dilshad always has a good heart

So finally all good the parents stay to know each other better and then they also learn who zoya really is ...shocked would be and understatement

Love dilshad teasing asad he got his princess back and he was waiting for his princess

So coming to the certificate knew I was right

His parents don't have it and it is her slime of a father who knows everything still did what he did

Love zainab standing up to him for her daughter she found the ring and knew he has the certificate too

So in rage he tore it wow can't believe he knew his daughter is married has a husband and married her to someone else

Well he even took her away when her husband is fighting to stay alive so what more wouldn't he do

Glad zoya opened up,to,dilshad I realize she would have done tht and glad dilshad advice her to tell asad as u don't want him finding out elsewhere

She has her support she don't have to face her troubles alone

So zoya wants to know what cause the tiff in the families

Can't wait to learn tht guess it has to do with shireen

Continue soon

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#489

Wonderfull n fabulous...
luv it...
minblowing...
beautifully written...
thx fr the pm...

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: jaanu013
Awesome updates. double updates..both were superb dilshad and Rashid accepted zoya . Rashid thought from asad's pov that was nice unlike the show he is not dumb herezainab confronted gaffur and asks about marriage certificate finally she stood up for zoya...she found the ring
zoya should think of marriage witness...they might help
nice updates... Continue soon

thanks Dear... glad you loved the updates.😃

hehe yea Rashid is not dumb but very wise here.😉

yea Zoya has to find alternate solutions now.😊