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Posted: 10 years ago
Kausar!!!!! What an update!! RaDil forgave AsYa!!! Gafoor 🤬 Zainab confronted him!!! She found Zoya's ring!!!! He tore the certificates!!! Register ki office me copy miljayegi na!! Zoya shared with Dilshad!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

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Kausar, both the chapters were so well written, I loved how Dilahaad n Rashid came forth and accepted asya marriage. The best part was that Zoya was able to tell dilshaad about the wedding with ayaan and the impending case.


Am happy that Zainub confronted Gafoor and was able to join the dots for herself. Hope she is able to tell Asad n they work together in sorting out this issue.

Thank you Dear.. glad you loved these two long updates😃... at times i felt that i was going into too much details but then i feel the emotions get lost if we make it brief... and i went on writing.😆

Yea i wanted Zoya to confide in Dilshad before she told Asad.. i felt that Zoya should get the love of Asad's parents and their support without Asad being a mediator and for a girl in Zoya's situation what better relief will she get than getting the support of her In Laws in such a situation?

And yea Zainab was able to join the dots herself... she knows Ghaffur too well and unlike Zoya she can see through him... remember she was so disturbed during Ayaan and Zoya's marriage fiasco as well she repeatedly asked Zoya whether she was sure of what she was doing... she knows Ghaffur and she knows her daughter also and she knew that Zoya was only doing it because of Ghaffur's pressure...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

lovely update ..

aw radil ..i wish every gal should get a mil n fil like them ...
im so happy they accepted zoee...
so certificate nahi mila ..
i guess certificate is wth gaffur ...may b im wrong ..bt bt its not wth Khans right
kyunki zoes clothes r also missing ...
kaha chupa tune mere babies ka nikaah certificates kaussar ..
continue soon ..
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yea RaDil is really great... And Asad's both parents are with him and love him equally in this.. he doesn't come from a broken family here and that may be the reason why he is not an Akdu here? ?😉

hehe you guessed right.. Ghaffur is the culprit as you now know.. i thought many would guess it even after last update but only one or two did.😃

thanks Amu.. glad you liked the update.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cale

Nice update...

Dilshad and rashid forgave them... 😊
Dilshad is such a nice mother
Gaffur is such a 😡... Hate him
Plz Zainab, now inform Zoya about this, so that she can do something
Finally Zoya revealed her problem to Dilshad... Hope she tell asad soon

... Update soon

Thanks Dear...glad you loved the update and Dilshad and hated Ghaffur as well..😆

Zainab will definitely tell Zoya... lets see how things goes further..

Will try to update soon.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

nice

emotional
arghh
i hate gauffor too much
how low can he stoop
i really felt shiver reading about a father like him
but loved radil
such a wonderful parents asad have
plz update soon

Glad you liked the updates Dear..

ghaffur definitely deserves your hatred... can't believe there could be fathers like him isn't it?😉
On the other hand yea Asad is having great parents.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

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chapter 12
So as expected Radil forgave & accepted Asya wedding i m so happy😃
yea.. glad you are happy Jas..😃
There conversation was very well planned👏👏👏
Each of them were very convincing in there role😉
Thanks.😃
Zoya was nervous but glad when Radil accepted her knowing her parentage😃
Her feelings when she saw Khan's & compared wid her family😭
Yea two contrasting families... Asad is the lucky one here.

so Khan's ke paas bhi certificate nahi hai😲
now i m sure ring aur certificate Taklu ke paas hain😡😡
Tabhi woh itna confident hai aur Ayaan ko bhadka raha hai🤢
Yep.
Kitu just kill them both yaar hate them😡😡😡

chapter 13
So Zainub got d ring we knew it its wid Taklu😵
but now i m sad we thought certificate toh kahin safe hoga
but woh bhi Taklu ne phaad diya😡😡 ab kya hoga

Yea.. lets see... they have to find some solutions isn't it? .. and now Zoya has the support of RaDil also... so don't worry too much.
Zainub ki bravery dekh ke i was happy finally stood up against that Taklu Yep... she was great.
I reallyy cried after reading this chappy😭.. Aww sorry i made you cry Jas.😭
pehle fb padke seeing how Taklu cheated my babies😭😡😡
Hamesha yeh kaam ki cheejen Villians ko hi kyun milti hain😕
hehe.. yea hamesha aisi kyon hota hai??... may be i also learnt from all the serials..😆
& later when Zoya was disturbed & cried infront of Dillu
Dillu knows d truth now😊
She's a gr8 mother my love & respect 4 her has increased 10 folds seeing her understanding 2 d situation.😃👏 yep... she is really wonderful... and even rashid is a great father here.😊

Gr8 Job Kitu⭐️👏⭐️
Love u 4 early & doubly updt🤗
I m excited 4 nxt part finally truth reveal hoga about Taklu😆😉
Thanks Jas... happy you loved the updates.😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kaussar

Thank you Dear.. glad you loved these two long updates😃... at times i felt that i was going into too much details but then i feel the emotions get lost if we make it brief... and i went on writing.😆

Yea i wanted Zoya to confide in Dilshad before she told Asad.. i felt that Zoya should get the love of Asad's parents and their support without Asad being a mediator and for a girl in Zoya's situation what better relief will she get than getting the support of her In Laws in such a situation?

And yea Zainab was able to join the dots herself... she knows Ghaffur too well and unlike Zoya she can see through him... remember she was so disturbed during Ayaan and Zoya's marriage fiasco as well she repeatedly asked Zoya whether she was sure of what she was doing... she knows Ghaffur and she knows her daughter also and she knew that Zoya was only doing it because of Ghaffur's pressure...😃

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I agree that detail is important and to add all that updates do become lengthy. But am sure none of your readers would complain about them, including me 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
An enjoyable chapter of disclosure and insight into the missing pieces that complete the puzzle.


Love your Rashid and Dilshad, particularly Rashid, I have read only a select few fictions in which he has stood up to the title of being called "dad" - Awesome writing! Absolutely look forward to how they shall assist Zoe and protect Asad.


Zainab's courage is really commendable, I guess she living up to the phrase: "Parents walk the ends for their children."


Anticipate the upcoming chapters!


P.S Do we get an epilogue for "Message in a bottle"?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Kaussar🤗
Sorry 4 being late😳
Oki so chapter 11
Aww my naughty Asad☺️
It was amazing😃
My asya i hope hamesha saath me hi rahe
Dilshad didn't know abt Zoya
So now where Zoya will find the certificates
I hope she find them soon😊
Plz continue asap
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


Hello Kaussar...thanx for the P.M...well it is always fun to read double updates...now coming to both the updates...well so many things happened in it...Dilshaad & Rashid...thought logically...and accepted Zoya and Asad's decision...a good decision by them...now when we knew that the original marriage certificate is destroyed can't Zoya's friends who were witness to this marriage help her...or is their any other way out...Zainub is trying hard to save her daughter's life...Atleast now Dilshaad knows everything about Zoya's current problem...and more revelations...to come...the coming chapts are going to be very interesting...continue soon.

you are welcome Dear... if you had fun reading then i'm happy.
yea RaDil are very wise parents... agree Zoya's friends may be able to help... lets see how things move ahead... yea next chapter is about past and revelation of what happened... after that i will try to move ahead fast.😃

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