Reserved!
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Unreserved!
The momentum of this story is absolutely enjoyable.
Loved that he had got permission for her to live with him during the days leading to the procedure. Asad wants to introduce Zoya to Zack as a surprise look forward to that interaction.
'Please don't thank me, it's the least I could do...I mean...everyone who has the means should reach out and help those who need it...My parents always did a lot to help the underprivileged and those in need...I am just carrying on their lagacy'
'Zoya I have already sought permission from Mr Sharma, he is more than happy...and you don't have to worry...I have taken the next two weeks off, any work I need to do I will do from home...and I also have a maid who comes in once a day to cook and clean'
Asad was highly endearing in those two scene especially @Red really a beautiful human and perfect gentlemen, you really do perfect justice to this character, Saima Mom. 👏
"'Asad...I want you to promise me one thing?' 'Anything' he said as he took her hand into his 'if this doesn't work...you won't be disheartened...I want you to be ok...' 'I promise...but I know that it will work and by this time on Friday when Dr Han will take off your dressing you will see, my Angel will see the world for the first time' 'Asad, to me you are my world and it is only you I want to see...nothing else matters to me, if Allah is going to give me back my sight its or you only' Asad felt tears sting his eyes, he moved forwards and held her face in his palms 'I love you so much' he whispered 'I love you too' Asad lifted her face a little and placed his lips over hers expressing every emotion he had through his sweet kiss."
Apart from saying I am a highly content reader, I'm not sure what else to say that would justify this beautifully written piece of fiction, you balance AsYa so perfectly, if Asad was written justifying his basic characteristics in this first fraction of the update, Zoya was at end of the update, encouraging and assuring him despite being in the present circumstance, a liberated soul she is. Asad's confidence is charming, I guess love gives rise to such intensity.
' know Angel...but you don't have to be...I love you'
Liked the endearment!
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