Th#10 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 32 to 34

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: jas91
Lovely updt bablu
sachi bataun i didn't wanted Sr now
simply bcuz i thought it should b very special 4 both
I mean bcuz of Zoya's past i would have been Happy if Asad put some effort in it
she dressed 4 him he got happy & d SR happened wish their SR would have happened in his Mumbai house of in Germany wid a proper typical tradition wedding night
bcuz i felt both of them had been intimate wid other ppl b4 but 4 Zoya it was painful cuz that happened widout her wish so i feel traditional SR would have been special were she will feel like his wife sharing intimacy wid her hubby 4 1st time
I didn't make any sense did i😳😆

chalo chodo use jo hona tha ho gaya
but u wrote it brilliantly👏
Zoya's fear of thunder was highlighted😲
plus tune thoda aur mature likhna sikh liya😆
this was ur boldest attempt so far😉
Zoya S ko defend kar rahi hai from Saad😲
kya jarurat hai uss shaitan ke mamle main padne ki😡
she's getting what she deserves plus she's only staying wid him cuz of his money & status as Humi mentioned phir kyun Zoya tang adaying😡
Asad ko zarur dantna chaiye use😈😆
sabke liye superwoman bani phirti hai😡

Thanks Jas 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

actually I can't drag the story till Germany as they r gonna stay in Dershet for a month or more and readers can't wait for so long ,,

and I always wanted SR to happen this way only she in the red dress in which he saw her for the firs time and wanted to love her from that time only !!

and with rain to show Asad her fear and also in his palace as this the house where they met for the first time in childhood and got engaged !!

soo it was kinda special for both of them somehow ❤️

and I kinda wasn't interested in showing Zoya in heavy dress or jewelry aswell because she is an actress and a bold character here ,, she will look stupid shying away or he removing her jewelry after sharing so many intimate moments with her !!

this is how their(AsYa) lifestyle is so SR should be in that way only 😉

haha no I am kinda trying to understand ur POV 😆

that means alot to me !!

Yup it was the boldest so far !!

haha he will kinda get angry on her tooo 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: jas91
aaj mera unres time pe pad lina😈😡

Done already 😲😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: urvisaini

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actually its gonna go slow today because of mature content ,,

many kiddos won't read it !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: jas91

kaun si story🤔

Our Lives Entwined !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: aishti

Yeah I do keep a check on ur stuffs coz it has become my fav thing nowadays 😊
N woah nw it will b fun in reading d lion's anger on saad.. poor him how will he escape from his wrath
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Aww thats sweet 🤗

haha he can't escape now for sure 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: maha2012
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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Yup finally they did it
Thank you !!
I am glad that you liked it😳
actually the scene was needed as Zoya comes out of her past during it thats why I had to write it soo tried making it enough decent😆
well she will but Asad is gonna work on that fear of her too ,,
yeah zoya is defending Saiqa❤️
Yup u r right !!
Well Asad is there for that don't worry😉
haha wow u keep a check on everything I say han ??😲😆
thats nice well yup he is gonna get angry for sure !!