Th#10 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 32 to 34

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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

ummm mai kya bolu...
pehle blush karu ya comment... 😆
awesome update...
finally they consummated their love... an advancement in their relation which took away zoyas fears...
mast morning romance 😳
zoya taking saiqas side... uff...
ye saad kya item hai??? violent banda... but sachi sachi speaking jb tak only saiqa pe acting... i dont mind... this is the outcome of wt she did in the past...
but ab bande ne Asad ki biwi se panga liya to ... DISHUM DISHUM by Mr.Khan to banta hai...
waiting fr it...
ummm abi zoya will say something or is asad already there to reply for zoya???
plz continue soon...

haha dono saath saath 😆

Thanks !!

I am glad that you liked it 😳

well not really as he is gonna work on her fear of storm in next update ,,

yeah she is just getting her punishment

ahaan u guessed something and that too rightly ?? OMG !! I will faint 😲😆

Yes he is there only !!

Will try updating sooon 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: asyafreva
Saad toh gaya kaam se!
Razia feeling guilty?

When did the world turn upside down?

AsYa... Awwnnn...

Brilliant romance...!!

Lovely update but a small one!

haha bas ab end mein tu usey guilty hona chahye na 😆

Thanks !!

I am glad that you liked it 😳

Aww I just don't want to ruin a romantic update with violence at the end ,,

Yup Saad is dead for sure 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

Lovely updt bablu

sachi bataun i didn't wanted Sr now

simply bcuz i thought it should b very special 4 both

I mean bcuz of Zoya's past i would have been Happy if Asad put some effort in it

she dressed 4 him he got happy & d SR happened wish their SR would have happened in his Mumbai house of in Germany wid a proper typical tradition wedding night

bcuz i felt both of them had been intimate wid other ppl b4 but 4 Zoya it was painful cuz that happened widout her wish so i feel traditional SR would have been special were she will feel like his wife sharing intimacy wid her hubby 4 1st time

I didn't make any sense did i😳😆

chalo chodo use jo hona tha ho gaya

but u wrote it brilliantly👏

Zoya's fear of thunder was highlighted😲

plus tune thoda aur mature likhna sikh liya😆

this was ur boldest attempt so far😉

Zoya S ko defend kar rahi hai from Saad😲

kya jarurat hai uss shaitan ke mamle main padne ki😡

she's getting what she deserves plus she's only staying wid him cuz of his money & status as Humi mentioned phir kyun Zoya tang adaying😡

Asad ko zarur dantna chaiye use😈😆

sabke liye superwoman bani phirti hai😡

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Posted: 11 years ago

#394

aaj mera unres time pe pad lina😈😡

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

haha my last story had 35 chapters 😛😆

kaun si story🤔

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Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: aishti
So finally dey consummated their marriage in every way.. n hw u portrayed it was beyond beautiful n quite decent too
D weather which had always proved to b a disaster fr her.. nw became d most memorable 1.. js hope dat she shud nt get scared vid dis nymore
O god zoya spoke up fr saiqa.. well no doubt such good deeds can only b expected from one n only our zo darling
Well m having a feeling to laugh at saad's statement 'I respect u'!!! a person who cannot respect his own wife can nvr respect ny other women
How dare he speak to zoya lyk dis.. hez such a cantankerous person
I wanna beat him all black n blue
N omg he raised her most sensitive topic.. y ppl can't let her live peacefully
Bt no worries as i'hv read one of ur replies to sm1 dat asad will get angry so nw I got dat person.. None other den dat saad
Nw d nawab asad ahmed khan will show him dat no 1 n really no 1 dare to mess vid his wife n her sentiments.. coz he very well knw hw to pay back in d same coin

Yup finally they did it

Thank you !!

I am glad that you liked it 😳

actually the scene was needed as Zoya comes out of her past during it thats why I had to write it soo tried making it enough decent 😆

well she will but Asad is gonna work on that fear of her too ,,

yeah zoya is defending Saiqa ❤️

Yup u r right !!

Well Asad is there for that don't worry 😉

haha wow u keep a check on everything I say han ?? 😲😆

thats nice well yup he is gonna get angry for sure !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: mayurchan7
Hi...;-) bubble, well the update was good with all asya moments at first and how asad helped her again in fighting against her insecurities...See whenever you mention dilshaad in this FF i always get the image of RATNA PATHAK SHAH...FAWAD'S mother in KHOOBSOORAT b'coz you can't imagine SHALINI KAPOOR SAGAR as this Dilshaad over such a socialte..i am not forcing anthing but i always picture her in my mind when i always read about dilshaad in this story...and the last scene were Saad almost accused her , i think he is just insulting her on her celebrity status..and their rumoured image..and I think now he has to face MUKKA AHMED KHAN...but i think this is one ASAD who will show him his place without using hands and just by glaring and speaking only...thankx for P.M and continue soon.

Thank You 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

haha I don't mind at all u can imagine her for sure

but believe me Asad being a prince or Nawab was planned three months back when even the trailer of khoobsurat was not out ,,

and I felt so sad while watching the trailer I was like I shouldn't have gone for vacations 😆

Yup Saad is just kinda insulting her and trying to bring out her weak point !!

well lets see what Asad does to him 😉

will be updating sooon !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: annanyaksgian
asya sr...much awaited
i m afraid about dilshad s reaction to zoya s past

Yup finally 😳

Dilshad won't create anymore trouble ,,

Thanks !!

I am glad that you liked it 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: Sanjhari
wow...
he tease her and they are on their way to their business

I love you include rain in it, and he comfort her with her biggest fear... and finally we have our most awaited SR...

wow... finally saiqa is making her entry and good Zoya is defending her... a big slap on Razia and Saiqa

I love the way Zoya entered saad's room and ask him to stop ... showing her right as a member of the family... glad with this progression from Zoya's side...

saad badmouthing about Asad and was shut by Zoya but not interested in stopping, so he started pointing out towards Zoya...

I was wondering who else was witnessing all this drama... as you hinted Asad, I have already started praying for saad's well being...

I know u will get 180+ likes very soon... and a happy dance for tomorrow's update...

pls update soon...