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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Plz cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Mere liye koi res hi nahi karta 😒


Aww let all the friends come we both will fight with them
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishti

Now dis is wt we can cl an overloaded emotional chapter 😉
Zoya's bond vid najma was so sweet.. atleast she got 1 member other than asad who actually loves n cares fr her.. aww so our tamatar is scared of zoya.. poor gal don't know dat she is not dat scary as picturised but a gal of golden heart
No one other than zoe can feel d real pain of being caged.. d way u described dat was 👍🏼
Kiss part was d BEST.. her blush, their embarrassment
I cn nvr imagine dilshad to b lyk dat bt no worries she can definitely win her heart fr sure
Now d story's most emotional part was asya's convo in d room
Asad was 101% correct on his place in making her understand.. still feeling sad fr zoya 🥺
I want a proper sweet cute apology scene.. plzzz 😃
Asad even supported her when angry.. cool
Ayaan is so cute.. "Too young to b called bhabhi" n "too old to b called lil sis" love these dialogues so much.. haww dilshad got a title Monster in law.. No doubt our zo is d cutest devil haha
U will post SR really.. ooh nw m waiting fr it.. make it soon 😳
At last whole update left me in a deep thinking session dat is their ny scope left fr ur getting more good 🥳
N thankss fr d pm 😛

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hank You Aishti 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
Yup Zoya is having a golden heart only if anyone comes closer to her then he/she will realize ,,
haha and then servant came up 😆
yeah even I can't but characters like Dilshad bought them together too and made this story ,,
haha u will get that sooon !!
LoL yup she is the cutest devil and will deffo win Dilshad too !!
aww that means alot to me ❤️
no need to thank !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

Lovely update!!!

u r right! it was a much needed reality check for zoya!
at least now she will confidently try to win the hearts of Asad's family members!!!
wow...really a very cunning move to impress Dilshaad!👍🏼
will be waiting of the apologies and some more romance!😉
update asap!


Thanks 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
yeah she really needed that ,,
will be trying to give it sooon 😆
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Thanks 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow what an update

Plz don't ever say u r dragging this story u r not I would like this story to continue until they have babies and grow old together
So zoya is out and about but always late for breakfast
Glad she made a friend in Najma at least one down in the family
Oh love zosad time in the back he just wants to cuddle and enjoy
Ohe she had some memory of them in pass
She remember a promise he made her and he plan to upkeep that promise now
Oh he was so embarrass when the servant caught them she laughed at his plight
So asad for nawab wonder if he will consider it was his Abu wish
Really dilshad divorce zoya 😡Glad asad told u he will not
She is in her rightful place ...ur Abu rejected her but she was his first choice too
Love asad smart way of handling his mother give her a chance and if u still not happy
I will do,what u want ...dilshad is pleased with herself she is important to her son
Oh zoya zoya zoya she is all ready to explode and asad patience have finally run out
Oh if I could have up that entire convo between them in here I would
Let us just say bravo 👏👏👍🏼Asad let her have it and let her have it good he was just tired
Always pacify her and walking on eggshells around her
I know she is insecure she had a horrible pass and it is hard now to believe this person this man will go all out for u
But he knows what she is capable of he knows what she can do and he have full faith in her that she can win everyone over but she is always ready to think the worst
Glad he told her even if she beg for a divorce he will never give her one
He was right to tell her all she thinks about is herself she don't think about him his feelings what he wants ...he is making a place for her in his family and if she can't be with him and work for it
Stay in the room zoya and let me handle it
Loe zoya realization of her selfishness and she never really care abt asad and his feelings it was always about her and here is this man that loves her since childhood
Oh the breakfast room was a fun scene
Really dilshad tell ur princess to come out of her room
Love asad answer to her well said
So him at the head of the table and now place for his wife
Ayaan move that is her place haha so he ismpissed at her but he still make her feel at home
Oh loved ayan and zoya scene with asad throw in the mix
Call her bhabhi ayan but she is too young but she is too old to be lil sis so,what will u call her
Oh ayaan ur movie star crush u have to call bhabhi and she don't mind too she likes it😆
Oh zoya got her monster-in-law to smile wow
Love the way she handled dilshad and taunted razia
And asad is all proud of her but he is still angry so no smiles
Continue soon with like 10-20 more chapters


Thank u soo much Anopama for ur lovely comment 😳
ur each and every word really mean alot to me !!
I am glad that you liked it !!
haha I will be dead by then 😆
Yup at least Najma understands her now ,,
yeah he is gonna consider it for sure as its his Abu's wish !!
well Asad can really not change his concern for her even when he is angry 😆
yeah poor Ayaan I feel bad for him
Yup no smiles and no talks for some time !!
what 10 or 20 ?? I will die till then and AsYa will end up eating each other without me 😲😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Najma zoya bonding was good
Asad & zoya talk abt birds & repeated their words again
Their little romance broke by servant.
Asad told dilshad that he will never divorce zoya & tried to make her understand that she was right for him. Asad & zoya fought & asad showed her some realities which was required. She understood asad pov. She talked to dilshad very politely & asad was impressed. I was laughing on ayaan position & zoya enjoyed. Waiting for next part soon when zoya will apologise to asad for not trusting him. Thanks for pm


Thanks 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
yeah it was much needed for her ,,
poor Ayaan 😆
will try updating sooon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

Awesome update Loved it

Thanks for the pm


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah12

First of sorry sis but I don't know why my "like" button isn't working though I tried many times :(
Coming to the update it was Awesome awesome awesome!!
Loved it to the core!!
Specially the asya moment was nicee
Najma is such a darling I just love her
I'm happy the way najma and zoya get along..
Asad didn't mean to hurt her but he had to I know sometimes this is the best way to knock some sense into a person
Zoya was too engrossed in her past and in securities but I'm happy that now she realized and will gain her place in not only dilshaad but every1's heart..
Beautifully written update
Do continue asap
Thanks 4 the pm


Aww its ok don't be sorry !!
Thanks 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
yeah it was much needed for Zoya to see her flaws too ,,
will be updating sooon 😊

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