AsYa FF ~ Zehnaseeb [Thread #4] *COMPLETED*

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

Thank you so much all of you for the lovely comments. I'm really glad that you guys enjoyed the Honeymoon in Paris! 😳 I have read each and every comment and am really overwhelmed with the love and appreciation that you shower on this story! 🤗

Okay, I'm sorry for no individual replies. Just feeling lazy and tired with all the work stress plus I replied on KJBB individually so it's quite energy consuming! Next time I'll try not to be lazy! 😆

Love you all.. ❤️

- M <3

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P.S.: People who have reserved earlier, please drop a comment when you un-reserve. I shall not be going back to check myself.

Thanks!

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

You ended the honeymoon period si soon...

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

wonderfull n fabulous...

luv it...

beautifully written...

honeymoon in paris...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Amandeep

@aman1605

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Mrinalini🤗

Beautifulupdate❤️

Aww they kissed in front oof eiffeil tower how romantic

U know i've been in france twice n i hope whenever i'll go to go with someone special😳😳(U know what i mean😆)

Can't wait 4 the next update

Tnx 4 pm

Love Aman❤️

Soon i'll start reading Kabhi jo badal barse too😉

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R
I'm late
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No words Mims... ❤️

Thank you sooo much DD! 🤗

😳

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sara..

@BelleAme

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#546

chap 11

😳...😳...😳

What can I say...u stole my heart with the sweet sensuos romance...

'kyun biwi ko kiss karne Mai sharam aai hai'😆

First I liked how he convinced her for the kiss..

And then the sweet...heart melting...first kiss...haye...

N then I loved the reaction afterwards...And ahem ahem both R getting lost in the all consuming passion...m off to read the next chappy...

Awesome update...truly romantic!😃

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sara..

@BelleAme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#547

chap 12

Haaaw😲

It was a dream??...a dream...sirf ek khwaab...

But I must say Zoe has awesome dreams 😆

'ur saying parts like how U said in my dreams '

'aap itne acche kyun hai'

And we are equals...

I liked this chap...but dream tha...more than Zoe I was shocked😆

Is bmj-bhad Mai jao?😆..rofl mrinalini U are hilarious...par mujhe update bahut pasand aya tho where should I go?😉

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sara..

@BelleAme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#548

chap 13,14

Thank god zoya tool the first step warna our buddhu Ahmed khan aise hi rehta😆

I loved the combo before the love making...

My heart goes erratic...feel what U do to me...

I ll kiss U everytime U pout..i can do more than just a kiss in the bedroom..it was absolutely lovely

And Zoe teasing I ll go to ayaan n watch a movie😉..

And finally they became one...haye...and not to forget Paris..wohooo...nnn dill kiya isliye biriyani bana diya..and asya al lovey dovey...n mushing..loved ayaan teasing them😉

Lovely updates 😊