||~ The Sunshine of My life #6 AsYa FF ~ NOTE PG 100 - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago
Reserved!


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Unreserved!


They were conversing and how? This chapter established the normalcy of this phase of their relationship particularly one that's heading towards marriage, which obviously is now only a formality.


"Was this all from google,"

" No!"

"Then I am happy,"


Glad, he made this personal.


Them talking of their past was a great start, despite the melancholy it was important to move forward in order to build a stabilized foundation for the life they have together signed up for. Zoya expressing herself was amazing, for the following reasons:


1. She has had the ability to disarm Asad yet never expresses her profound feelings and;

2.It helps her grow as a character.


And we now know the reason why the man that craves control doesn't own it, I cant help but wonder if his promise to Zoe shall make a reassurance as a culmination to the concept, but if it doesn't the promise was enough. Zoya reprimanding him on the complexities of his insecurity was unquestionably captivating and endearing.


"You wouldn't want to be the first person in my life too?"

" That's complicated."

"Any girl would like to be the first in her man's life Asad. Why wouldn't I want to be? But had Ayesha not been a part of your life, we wouldn't have Aahana. And I don't think our relation, or our love would be complete without her. Don't you think?"


I'm impressed you hadn't glorified Zoya beyond basic human traits and endurance capacity, loved the direction you took this concept to.


P.S The honeymoon leaves a lot to be desired.


P.S.S Adored the simplistic intimacy, intensified the beauty of the romance.


P.S.S Aahana and her shenanigans are anticipated


P.S.S.S I feel I haven't reviewed the chapter to my satisfaction, if I can spare a little time will try to once more.

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
very well written update...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
A cliffhanger. Cannot wait for the next update. Loved how Asad had to google dating. So sweet. Pefect first talking and getting to know one and other.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeYourself

Hi Ankita... glad to see you back with this update..

glad to know that everything is fine at your end now... 😛

and talking about the update, i really dont mind reading more and more on AsYa and Ahana, coz that's exactly what i want...😆
but again, this is a story, and you are the writer of it... so i will read anything that you will post...

and this update was superb..

nice, sweet, and loving as well... good to see Asad and Zoya getting back to their original ages...😉

update soon...😛


Thanks so much dear <3 I am glad you will read. Hope to never disappoint you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: day_lily

Ohh this lovey-dovey Asad is just awesome and YOU are the awesomest for coming up with this.


I am glad you think so - thank you 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Truly an aww-able chapter. I loved this new side of Asad who is carefree and talkative. ❤️ Haha, Zoya believed him that he isn't going to kiss her in front of family. 😛


I can already imagine Zoya's expressions when he will do the deed! 😆

An extremely adorable and mesmerizing chapter. I loved it! ❤️

~ Mrin <3


She'll be getting a lot of surprises she doesn't expect 😆 Thank you 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wonderfull n amazing...

luv it..
asad n zoya are so cute...
fabulous...
asad taking zoya out on a date...
mindblowing...
eagerly waiting for the next part..
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Thank you 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

.res

unres ..
well ...update is so sweet ki ..i just can tell how much happy iam ..
b it the phone convo n their date n aanu ..everything is so perfect ..
i so loved phone convo ...they deserve all this happiness..
watching them like this ..u might b knowing how an asya fan will feel😃..
i just wanted 2 tell u that the way u describe emotions n the romance ...im a big big fan of ur writing ..
i love d way u write bass..
n i saw ur gifs in qh creations thread ..usually i dnt go to creation gallery bt ..gal ur so talented ..👏👏 the way u make edits ,gifs n write ...mashallah ...

k i vl quote my fav parts in this update ..

Thanks so much Amulya 🤗 As an AsYa fan I know exactly how you feel man 😳 Whatever I write is the AsYa fan in me who didn't get many moments she craved for.

A - It's almost midnight and so, just 7 days to our wedding. And Day 1 of our official dating period? - Your new Boyfriend. aww this made me 😆😆😆


A - True. But still. i like this side of him ..zoe is so lucky

Zoya stirred in her sleep, feeling his lips on her skin, as if a feather had brushed over her forehead. She smiled, but didn't open her eyes, wishing to be in the blissful state for longer. She felt Asad get up from besides her and heard soft murmurs. Assuming it was the father and daughter together, she smiled her eyes still shut. Sighing deeply she turned towards the crib and opened her eyes slightly.

Asad was sitting on the floor besides the crib, holding Aahana close to his chest, his nose digging in her neck, taking in her baby scent that she knew he loved most.

the whole scene is so so so beautiful ki ...read it fr 3 times ...i dnt want 2 go 2 next

line ..bass want 2 enjoy this moment as long as i can 😳


" Wake up sweetheart. Coffee is getting cold," Asad mumbled softly.😳 im sooo jealous now ..bt i love zoee tooo


I love you for what you are, for what you're not and all that you're going to be..

Wear this for me and make it more beautiful, as beautiful as your soul is.

Asad (Fiance, Boyfriend) ....i love his notes...


aww ..can i just kiss aanu ..she clapped seeing her mom😉 ...

n he pecked her in front of his family ..omg he changed a lot ...😳

ok jeep me going ...kuch serious baat hoying .after that i loved teasing session 😳 n bloat club...ab mai kya bolu ..watching them like this ...its a wonderful feeling ..

im loving this side of AAK ..ASYA deserve this happiness..i want 2 c zoe treating him like d way he treated ..my baby deserves all love n caring from his gal ..


ok enough of my blabbering ..update soon pleeejjj Ankita

Zoya always treats him like a child. And she will continue to 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update ...
Beautifully written. ...
Asya get to know eachother more ...
Waiting to see what mess najma and aahana created. .
Loved it ..
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
yippee I'm so happy. my trip got postponed..I can read upate happily now..
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unres
I'm glad u did well in ur assignments...
aww u didn't slept properly fr so many nights...take some good rest now...BTW if u don't mind may I know wat RU studying
awesome update Ankita..
I really loved it...
u r right ...this update is treat 2 every frustrated ASYA fan..
conversation is much needed.. I'm glad they did...
my babies had a horrible Childhood 😭 bt they r so strong.. I love themmm so much fr that
ur Zoya is so mature..
hugging, kissing, cuddling n most importantly their convo is sooo lovely...
I enjoyed it...
aw meri aanu n nazma ne kya kiya ab 😛 😆
continue soon..
sry fr my Chota comment.. I'm in hurry ..gtg...otherwise u know abt my blabbering 😳 😆
Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago

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