Reading this chapter lead me to introspect over this FF, AsYa were rarely afforded time and opportunity to just let their hair down and enjoy themselves or the simple pleasures of life and being a couple in love about to marry, they had always been burdened with responsibility, trauma and intensity. It's awesome you have included courting into the narrative, love how you are blending in the variance of emotions and phases that make a successful relationship between spouses[to be].
Yes truly. They've only ever had a hard time managing the depressing, overbearing situations in life. Whether it be their own past or the issues in present. So they're trying to catch up with all that they missed.
AsYa should indeed get to experience every phase as a couple and grow and develop together as people.
AsYa cheese feast, more particularly Asad as the catalyst, is my preference of romance, the man in question just individually intensifies the essence of romance and indulgence beautifully, and it shall be welcomed with open arms.
Asad cheesy and romantic, is my favourite too. When he loves, he loves with all heart.
His passion to lay the world at Zoe's feet is extremely captivating, the extremist side to him in all aspects of his life is enchanting as Zoe precisely feels. As a reader, I feel as ecstatic as Zoe does, and she ultimately deserves every bit of indulge Asad bestows upon her.
Both deserve all the love and concern being showered on them. Asad's still had a family, a mother and even a fathers presence for the first couple of years. Zoya doesn't have any security as such. So indeed this is
Meant to say this after the last chapter, anticipate the kiss in the presence of the family and Asad's creativity at accomplishing the challenge.
That will happen, after a little wait and building some anticipation 😆 Maybe not in very happy circumstances, but it will.
Thanks as usual for commenting, and giving me genuine and honest feedback 😃
The playfulness, sarcasm, wit and pure joy was a pleasant read, love that they shall be talking more and acquainting themselves further, this shall be the most beautiful phase of their love story that's apart from parenting their little bundle of sunshine.
"Zoya hadn't seen Asad so carefree, so laid back in ages. He was talking, and talking like she had never heard him talk. His courteous, gentle gestures of pulling the chair for her, serving her the food and feeding her intermittently through their lunch had her enraptured."
"More comfortable and a little groggy after the heavy meal Asad rested his legs across the futon and pulled Zoya between them, letting her lean sideways on his chest."
These scenes were enthralling!
So do we get an intoxicated Zoe, on their honeymoon? Please say yes! *puppy face*
You'll have to see 😈
Anticipate the next chapter.
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