SaHil One Shot: Altered, Estranged, Disintegrated, Lost. - Page 4

Originally posted by: -Devanshi-

Really well written :D

I like your sense of humour in the story. The mild flirting was also really interesting to read and ofcourse all that info about flowers and what they are also called...really cool :)

The plot was very interesting and I even like Rehaan's comments!

Haven't read a detective fan fic yet in the forum so it was a refreshing change from the current plot. Great read :)

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

Superb
just amazing
wonderful Os...
And thanx 4 pm...

Originally posted by: NallyAshlokFan

My gawd , the detail with which you wrote this story is astounding. I mean are you an undercover flower enthusiast or does your family own a shop or something because the attention to detail is beyond worthy of commendation.

Once again, an exceptionally written story. You are truly a gifted writer esp at nuanced humour, you my dear take a bow. I enjoyed every second of the story and wished it didn't end, my only change would be a little more Sahil but none the less it was an amasing read. I always get completely enthralled with your writing.

Hoping you can update soon and thank you for taking the time to write this for us. *hugs

Originally posted by: -jawaria-

WOW it is simply AWESOME.
Loved it so much <3
u are brilliant writer 👏

Originally posted by: anopama

This was different but nice

Originally posted by: SilverBell

Nice Os.

:-)

I am not unresing my res comment but posting a new one. I am already so so so embarrassed. I literally feel like digging a hole and hiding in it!!! You wrote this one for me and I am like a week late on commenting. 😔 I am soo sorry Saruuu. And I love you soo much, girl. :*
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Okay, done feeling bad. So, here I start with my rant. 😆
Wow. Story woven around the therapeutic properties of medicinal flowers. Simply WOW!!! Amazing it is Suds. 👏 I do not know too many words to describe how terrifically talented you are. 👏

We Sherlockian crave to read and watch more of SH. I mean what's a Sherlockian to after who've read all four of Arthur Conan Doyle's Holmes novels, and watch every last one of Benedict Cumberbatch' series and Robert Downey Jr. movies!!?!?!! I can't seem to get enough of the brilliant, moody Sherlock Holmes. 😆 Luckily for us, Suds is here to write up stories of another sexyy detective solving crimes. 🤗 😳

Love THE TITLE. Yes, you had me right there. :)

How awesome it would be to see Aahil in uniform. Some men look just hot in uniforms. Kinda induces a soft spot and brings smiles!!! 😆 And this is our angsty Aahil squeezed in in that uniform. 😉 😆 So you could understand how it would turn out??!?!? 😆
Sanam even became an amateur sleuth to figure out what's her professor, Dr. Zareef is doing. I could totally imagine her do that. 😆 She would prove no less than him. No wonder I see him smitten by her. 😉 Loved both of them.

I loved all the characters. They could all start a private investigation agency. It's not really hard to imagine them like that. Just imagine the guys in uniforms and gals as their equals. 😆 😆

Saruuu. I wanna hug you right now. You are such a sweetheart. 🤗 Love you. And I am sorry, the comment didn't turn out the way I wanted. :( Just a crappy trash I jot down in a hurry.