Aahil : And I Kept Burning ❤️

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Asad4Zoya
It is soo good.. Did u write it by yourself???
It perfectly describes ahil situatuon 👏

Thank you so much for lovely comment!

Yeah, I wrote it all myself. Wanted to write something else, but it turned out like this 😆

Thank you so much again! :)

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Pragya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: lastdesire
Epic

Thank you so so much!! <3

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Dhaneshree

@Dhanesh27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Res

Sorry I'm so late Prags 😭

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Dhanesh27
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Sorry I'm so late Prags 😭

Aww Dhannuu!! Its okay!!!

Where are you these days? Miss you! :(

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -Raj-
superb😊

Thank you so much! <3

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

dUDE.

I NEED THIS POEM AS LIKE THE TITLES FOR ALL THE FIC IM PLANNING.

HOW ARE YOU PEOPLE SO GOOD AT POEMS AND STUFF?

THIS WAS AMAZING LET ME GET MY EMOTIONS IN CHECK BEFORE I WRITE ANYTHING ELSE.

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Absolutely Soulful.

I totally got the Fire as in the Jealous yet Passionately in love "Aahil".

Beautiful Poem from a very immensely talented girl.

Ok The entire Poem was lovely. These have that special something that tugs and yanks ---

The light grew, only to get lit in another.

I should have known, shouldn't have bothered.

It burnt me more, to see that light,

Going far, far away from my sight.

Amazing Lines👏

But I have a very impressionable mind Pragu. I had another thing going with your lines...

I felt a part, growing in me,

Drop by drop, completing me.😲☺️🤬

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Avie

@Avie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Beautiful poem!

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: suds.
dUDE.
I NEED THIS POEM AS LIKE THE TITLES FOR ALL THE FIC IM PLANNING.

HOW ARE YOU PEOPLE SO GOOD AT POEMS AND STUFF?

THIS WAS AMAZING LET ME GET MY EMOTIONS IN CHECK BEFORE I WRITE ANYTHING ELSE.

Sarruu!! You need MY work? MY?! Thats really an honor! Don't make me blush now!

You can have it! You must have it! That would be like heaven for me! My poetry being used as in some title stuff!! Wow!! :')

Umm. Well, just give credits 🤣

YOU ARE!! You are like THE Michael Jackson of writing! <3

Thank you!! Thank you so damn much! You just made it sound even more beautiful!

I LOVE YOU!

Haha. Okay, i'll be waiting for your "emotions to get in check" ;)

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Absolutely Soulful.

I totally got the Fire as in the Jealous yet Passionately in love "Aahil".

Beautiful Poem from a very immensely talented girl.

Ok The entire Poem was lovely. These have that special something that tugs and yanks ---

The light grew, only to get lit in another.

I should have known, shouldn't have bothered.

It burnt me more, to see that light,

Going far, far away from my sight.

Amazing Lines👏

But I have a very impressionable mind Pragu. I had another thing going with your lines...

I felt a part, growing in me,

Drop by drop, completing me.😲☺️🤬

Juliet!!! I don't know to be floored by you, or be mad at you!! 😡😆

What?!! You just gave a NEW DIMENSION to this poem of mine! What?!! You can't do this! This was such a pure and just...ughh!! You!!! 😆

Well, okay! It wouldn't be that if Your impressionable mind wouldn't have imprinted mine too! Coz it won't get meaningful till the meaning is understood. 😆 🤣

On another note. Thank you Juliet! Thank you so so much! You are a sweetheart! Immensely talented. Me. Thank you so much for that honor! <3

Still. Those red lines though! God, I seriously din't know it could turn out as this too!! 😲😆