#4 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 16-19 ! Link new thread ! - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
yaar ur just awesome. i love ur story. plz update next part soon i love ur story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Asad really cares for his Angel...
Don't let my Zoya bear the pain of losing baby.. .
She has accepted Asad ...
She thought about Their baby...how cute. .
I liked how you predicted Asad frustration...
Now he is angry...Zoya should manao him in a better way...
At last caught up with previous chapters...
Will comment for them soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: mariam1368

I dnt even knw what should i call this update,..fabulous,superb,amazing,flawless or what? I'm really speechless.
Update was soo emotional and i must applaud you for this 👏
Its like am feeling Zoya's pain,the emotions she experienced,the fear of loosing her baby was fantastic nd very well written...!
Since the beginning of this story i've nt seen Asad hurt so much like in today's update...i feel pained to see him like that but the way he display his emotions when his Angel hurt him OMG that was amazing!
Sana was really nice...she provided support to Zoya.
Pls n pls update soon!


Stop it ! U r embarassing me ! ☺️
Thank you so much Mariam !! u dont know how much it means to me ! 😳
I'm honoured to be able to portray their emotions !! ❤️
Yes, this time Zoya hurted him a lot ! 😭
Thank you so much for this lovely comment !! It means a lot ! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Congrats on new thread
Zoya wants to keep her baby
No mother ever want to lose her child
She said she don't care if anything happens to her
Oh who told her to say that asad was seething in angry he shook her till she got sense
But she was determined and she chose her baby
He is angry he walked out but he came back 🤗He always keeps his promise
Zoya realizes he cares for her he don't want to lose her that is y he don't want her to have the baby
The fear of losing her is more painful than a baby she can have more bakes to come in time
Oh sana don't know who to comfort she comforts zoya and tells her how much he care 😭
So asad takes her home with baby still in tact oh he carried her in his arms
Couse by sana love the wheelchair comment and y women r so violent
Oh she keeps stealing glances at him and he is still angry
Continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: imcooldude

unress

emotional update

well Choti honestly I too didn't want Zoya to give birth to Akrab's child like as many readers who have been suggesting u with abrotion or misscarriage.
And finally no abortion, I am okey with it bcoz I can understand it wasn't baby fault.

Anyway thank-u for PM
&
Update Soon


Thanks Bhai ! But she wont give birth to this baby and since i find abortion to be horrible i prefer going with miscarriage !
I'm glad you liked it !! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: myvirman

<font size="5">yaar ur just awesome. i love ur story. plz update next part soon i love ur story</font>


Thanks dear ! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Mera bohut bada wala popat hua 😵

I thought iss baar I will be first to res and see now 🤔

I was so sure Zoya wont agree 😎

Obviously No girl will agree ...

And Asad ..

Uske liye main kya bolu ... ???

I can visualize his face ... With tears... Red shot eyes ... Gussa aur Pyaar

And now 'their' baby will be safe... 😊

Asad will be with her and this is what I know is going to happen for sure 😃

Congratulations for new thread 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: zynia890

Asad really cares for his Angel...

Don't let my Zoya bear the pain of losing baby.. .
She has accepted Asad ...
She thought about Their baby...how cute. .
I liked how you predicted Asad frustration...
Now he is angry...Zoya should manao him in a better way...
At last caught up with previous chapters...
Will comment for them soon...


He does ! 😳
Well the baby wont born, i'm sorry but it was planned since the begining of thsi story !
Yes she considers Asad as the baby's father ! 😕
Yes now its Zoya's time ton understand that her banter wont be accept everytime !
Glad u did !! Will wait for them ! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Cute sleepy Asad 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: anopama

Congrats on new thread

Zoya wants to keep her baby
No mother ever want to lose her child
She said she don't care if anything happens to her
Oh who told her to say that asad was seething in angry he shook her till she got sense
But she was determined and she chose her baby
He is angry he walked out but he came back🤗He always keeps his promise
Zoya realizes he cares for her he don't want to lose her that is y he don't want her to have the baby
The fear of losing her is more painful than a baby she can have more bakes to come in time
Oh sana don't know who to comfort she comforts zoya and tells her how much he care😭
So asad takes her home with baby still in tact oh he carried her in his arms
Couse by sana love the wheelchair comment and y women r so violent
Oh she keeps stealing glances at him and he is still angry
Continue


Thank you so much !! ❤️
He cale back not only becasue of the promise, but also because he loves her and even if he wants to, he cant leave her !
Yeah Sana is quite fun ! 😆

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