SaHil FF: A Tangled Love- pt11 pg 39 (*new) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update.I wish something like this will also happen in QH...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome nice beautiful updt plz cont
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omgeee jst loved it...beyond excellence ...cnt wait for nxt part...plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I admit, i almost started to cry when I saw Asad, Zoya, and Najma's pic and when she was thinking about what Ayaan said. How he was broken with their death... after Dilshad he has to be the one most effected cause he was closer to AsYa more than anyone else... 😭 I miss those day's
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love ur story so much in 4th part I cried very much. very beautiful story pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks everyone for your lovely and encouraging comments. Normally I reply to each and everyone separately, but I'm a little hard pressed for 'forum time" so I couldn't.
Sorry if I offended anyone. Each and every one of your comments are very valuable to me.
Thanks so much...

Update coming right up !😊

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WARNING ! This update has some 16+ issues. Not sexually explicit but somewhat steamy... So if some french kissing scandalizes you, you might wanna click that little x at the tab... hHahhaha... *evillaugh*

But seriously, I hope you guys like this.

Thanks! 😉, your support means a lot to me !


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Part 5

Aahil backed her against the wall, using his open stance to trap Sanam in between. His hand splayed over the small of her back, holding her close, making sure she felt every inch of her effect on him. She stood, breathing hard, but her eyes had a steely look. She looked back at him eye to eye, facing the volcanic heat in front of her.

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Slowly,he took her left hand and placed it on his chest. Upon release, her hand inched upwards slowly , her nails digging slowly in to his hard sculpted shoulders, her grip making him swallow convulsively. Her other hand cupped his face, sliding down his forehead to the chin, and he turned slightly to kiss her palm, his eye still boring into hers.

He lowered his head, placed a whisper of a kiss on the corner of her mouth. Her sharp intake of breath encouraged him. Hovering over her parted lips, he enjoyed torturing her with anticipation. His Sanam was a passionate creature, beneath all that primness was a tigress and he was going to enjoy the discovery.

He slowly nipped on her upper lip, then lower lip, brief sips at her lips, while his other hand left the wall and slowly threaded through her silky hair to tilt her head back slightly. Her eyes glazed with moisture, for the strangeness of new feelings: love, desire, passion, need.

No. He will not treat her like a conquest. Not like the women of his past. Objects of fleeting fancy. Willing women who enjoyed sex, but not fidelity. Women he didn't spare a second thought for.

Sanam is his queen. She loved him despite everything. She deserved everything, from him.

He swooped down for earthy, deep kiss, his sudden hard embrace made her moan in its fierceness. A flash of electricity tore through him when she wound her hands around his neck and leaned into him. He lifted her up as she clung to his lips. He placed wet kisses on her neck, her hair falling forward like a curtain when she bent her head to give him better access.

Taking shallow breaths they looked into each other's eyes, and she smiled shyly. Aahil felt a tide of cool water wash over him at the love in her eyes. He claimed her lips roughly as she hugged him to her.

Lowering her down he deftly removed his shirt and bent to carry her. She balked.

"What are you DOING?"

Umm... You wanna do this here?," he paused as though actually considering the idea. They were back at her relative's house. Only because it was near the dargah. He wanted her back in his house, in his bed preferably. Plus, he needed to know where she was holed up. And with whom.

Sanam was horrified when she discovered what "this" was. But before she could protest, he had hoisted her up and chose the closest room. Locking the door, he turned slowly and found her facing the window, her side profile stunning.

He slid his hands down by her arms from behind, and buried his face in her slender neck, breathing in her perfumed scent. The wandering hands moved to her waist and upwards to cup her breasts. His breath and kisses on her neck were urgent and catching a breath was becoming difficult. Sanam turned around into his arms and held him tight.

This was new, this cherishing feeling.

Then Aahil felt it, a light fluttering touch of her lips on his collarbone, upward to his neck, shy little bites, driving him mad in response. He cupped her face and growled her name, before claiming her lips in a scorching kiss. He lifted her top off and stared half-lidded at her beauty.

He backed her to the single bed in the room and crawled over her not giving her a moment's reprieve from his ardent attention. They were grabbing, pulling, pushing in their urgency to be together.

Sanam revelled in the attention of the man she loved, the sensations blinding and intoxicating. They both stamped out the niggling details of truths revealed, afraid it will ruin the moment. Aahil kissed and touched her all over, she wanted to as well; but after a few tries he deemed them too much for him and held her hands above her head, leaving her to his mercy.

"You are so beautiful, jaan..." he whispered in her ears, breathily; making her shiver and gasp. He moved lower down her body, kissing her all the way.

But the bed's loud creaking proved a little too irritating.

"Sanam, what a horrible bed this is! I don't want our first time to be like this. Come back home, please. Our bed. Please, jaan," he cajoled.

Sanam froze. Go back there? To that house? Where the murderer of her parents' ruled in glory?

Aahil raised his head when felt her stiffen. He saw the frown on her face , passion replaced with worry.

"Hey,baby? What happened? Sorry, I didn't mean to bring up stuff. Forget it okay?" he said looking into her worried eyes. He tried to kiss her again, but the moment was gone.

"I can't go back there Aahil! Never."

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"What do you mean, never?"

"SHE murdered my parents Aahil !! Are you out of your mind!! She orphaned me, Haya and Badi Ammi's whole family! She put me through a childhood of poverty for her greed! You want me to stay under one roof with her!? "

"Wait a minute! Ammi wouldn't do all this, this is madness! Listen, you and Badi Ammi have got it all wrong. It can't be true!"

"NO ! It's the truth Aahil!! She murdered them all in cold blood! And burned them all down! Badi Ammi saw it with HER OWN EYES! " Sanam was screaming at him, attacking him with her fists for not believing her.

"STOP!! JUST STOP! I'm not going to stand here and listen to more of this Bulls**t! Look Sanam, I love you, but you've crossed a line here. She saved my life! You have no idea... Just , No!" he shouted vehemently, and Sanam stepped away from him.

This pissed Aahil even more.

"Oh! SO you're going to make me choose? You or Ammi? Typical! You women are unbelievable! She's my mother Sanam! What proof do you have of all this?? " Aahil ran his hand through his hair and prowled about restlessly.

He came forward and went to take Sanam's hand but she snatched it away.

"Do you think I'm a liar Aahil? Love is about trust too..." she glared at him with angry tears in her eyes.

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"Unbelievable!" he grunted. And marched off out of the room. Sanam turned to the window to watch for his car below, crying.

But he came back behind her, holding her by the waist and his head on her shoulder.

Baby, don't do this. Come back with me. Please?" his words solemn and soft,desperate; cajoling.

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Sanam just held on to his hands over her abdomen and closed her eyes.

"I'm sorry. I love you, but I won't come back there. Even if I do, I can't pretend everything is fine. This is just asking too much from me Aahil. If you think for ONE minute what you are asking of me," Sanam said swaying back into his arms.

Aahil stepped back from her, and she instantly felt the cold. She turned and looked beseechingly at him. To trust her, believe her, stay by her despite the odds.

"I love you too jaan. But you should also take a minute to think what YOU are asking of me. You are asking me to leave my mother, who is my world, my saviour. Leave my life, family and responsibilities. For you. And you are accusing her of crimes so heinous and horrible. And I've stood here listening to you, not walking away, because I love you. But you have no proof whatsoever" His words sounded like a death knell.

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They stood opposite each other , at a crossroad. Aahil heaved a loaded sigh and made to leave. Sanam's heart plunged and she sat by the wall crying into her hands.

She sat like that for hours, until Uncle Haider came back to take her out. Sanam felt despite all this newfound happiness with family and stories about her parents, that gnawing emptiness left by Aahil was unignorable.

She went to bed, feeling awful. Tossed and turned for an hour until her phone suddenly beeped.

Hi Babes. How are you darling? I can't sleep.

Me too. I miss you.

Really?? I'm thinking about all the things we could be doing if you were here...all X-rated...

Sanam didn't know what to reply, blushing furiously.

What are you wearing? Not those infernal salwar kameez with yards and yards of cloth and layers. Please! At least indulge me in my fantasy babes! We're going to have to go shopping for nightclothes, bas!

Sanam giggled , but couldn't think of a smart reply. Another message came after some time.

Sanam? You awake? You must be sleeping. Sorry Babes. I love you jaan. Wish you were here. Goodnight.

This she could answer.

I love you too my dear husband. Sleep well.

To be continued...

Part 6

Edited by sageflower7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Nice update
It was difficult for both of them
One to stay in that house where her parents murderer live & other to believe what sanam told him abt his mother. Aahil text her & finally she replied
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
It was difficult for both of them
One to stay in that house where her parents murderer live & other to believe what sanam told him abt his mother. Aahil text her & finally she replied
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm


Thanks so much !😃
Wish they could just run away.
They love each other but are separated by Tanveer...🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsome update👏
loved it❤️
you portrayed their feelings very nicely😊
they love nd want each other but cannot be together due to tanveer😡
loved how they had a tiff over what tanveer did but later reconciled with texts at night😳
continue soon
nd thnx 4r pm

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